通用版2020高考英语二轮复习专题6书面表达6.2.1应用文一建议信.ppt

1、第二部分 题型应对策略第1讲 应用文(一)(建议信&求助信&告知信)典例(2019全国卷)注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【要点盘点】1.第一段点题:说明写信的目的,通知对方参加即将到来的排球比赛Im writing to inform you of _.the upcoming volleyballmatch2.第二段主体段落展开:如何做好赛前准备制订一个训练计划Youd better _.参加集体的训练和会议You should _.make a planattend the team training sessions andmeetings观看录像You

2、need to watch a video _.3.第三段表达愿望I hope we can _.to study our visiting teamwin the match【我来升级】词句靓化1.句增加相关信息Im writing to inform you of the upcoming volleyball match _.that you should prepare for2.应用多种句式,合理拓展要点运用句式:.would be appreciated改写句Being a member of the team,_.运用句式:You are supposed to do.改写句_.

3、making a detailed planahead of time would be appreciatedYou are supposed to attend the team training sessionsand meetings3.说明原因,愿望具体化_,I hope we can devote ourselves to becoming stronger and beat our opponent.Since the match has drawn great concern from ourneighbour schools【五档满分范文】Dear Chris,Im Li H

4、ua,captain of the school volleyball team.Im writing to inform you of the upcoming volleyball match that you should prepare for.The match is scheduled to be held in the newly built stadium at 8:30 next Sunday morning.Being a member of the team,making a detailed plan ahead of time would be appreciated

5、.For the training,please come up with a workout schedule and stick to it so that you can get in shape soon.Besides,you are supposed to attend the team training sessions and meetings.This Friday well watch a video together to study the visiting team.The time table is attached behind.Since the match h

6、as drawn great concern from our neighbour schools,I hope we can devote ourselves to becoming stronger and beat our opponent.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【阅卷老师点评】1.该题目写作容易犯的错误(1)比赛的时间地点不明确,收信人不明白何时何地参加。(2)赛前准备写得过于笼统,没有具体事项,被告知者不清楚需要做哪些准备。(3)愿望表达过于抽象,与主题关系不大,如Best wishes。2.范文格式正确,要点齐全,行文连贯,细节补充恰当合理。3.范文词汇运

7、用灵活、规范,如inform,make a detailed plan,schedule,stick to,get in shape,be supposed to,draw great concern,devote.to等。4.范文适度运用英文常见的表达方式,如:Im writing to inform you of.would be appreciatedI hope.【技法点金】1.建议信、求助信和告知信写作结构段落建议信求助信告知信第一段开门见山,向对方陈述自己的观点表明写信目的,请求帮助开门见山,点出要告知对方的事情或活动等段落建议信求助信告知信第二段对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由,

8、接着提出自己的建议要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容事情或活动的具体信息和注意事项等第三段呼应开头,重申观点希望得到帮助表达愿望或期待2.建议信注意事项(1)建议信要写出写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由,提出的理由要入情入理,语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。(2)建议的角度要多样化,避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。(3)符合英文信件的基本格式。3.求助信注意事项(1)通常使用一般现在时。(2)阐述要清晰,用词要恰当,注意语气委婉、真诚,情态动词多使用would和could。(3)注意使用过渡性词汇,如:first,besides,also,whats more,at the same time,meanwhile,in addition,unfortunately,luckily,thus,however,so that等。4.告知信注意事项(1)告知信要言简意赅,一开始就告知写信目的。(2)告知对方的事项要条理清晰,用词适当。(3)告知对方要发生的事情或要进行的活动的时间地点要具体,常用一般将来时。