2021届高考英语二轮复习专练：35分写作规范抢分练二 WORD版含解析.doc

1、35分写作规范抢分练(二)写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)2020武汉市高中毕业生6月供题I still remember that cold day when Chris and I go skating on a lake. While enjoying ourselves, I suddenly noticed something unusual. The ice broke and at the moment I warned Chris to take care, he slipped into the lake. I was too f

2、rightening to know what to do. I cried for help anxious. Hearing my cries, a young man rushed over, jump into the lake to save Chris. At last, he was out of the water but we immediately sent him to the nearest hospital. After short while, Chriss parents arrived. They expressed their thank to the you

3、ng man. How a respectable man!第二节书面表达(满分25分)2020武汉市高中毕业生质量检测假定你是李华，在英国参加夏令营，所在地有多国中学生夏令营团队。当地计划为你们举行联谊晚会。请写一封邮件报名参会，内容包括： 1.写信目的； 2.你们的节目； 3.合理建议。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_35分写作规范抢分练(二)第一节答案与解析：I still remember that cold day when Chris and I skating on a lake. While enjoying ， I suddenly noticed

4、 something unusual. The ice broke and the moment I warned Chris to take care, he slipped into the lake. I was too to know what to do. I cried for help . Hearing my cries, a young man rushed over, into the lake to save Chris. At last, he was out of the water we immediately sent him to the nearest hos

5、pital. After short while, Chriss parents arrived. They expressed their to the young man. a respectable man!go改为went。动词时态误用。根据该句中的“that cold day”可知，该处陈述的是过去发生的事情，故用一般过去时。ourselves改为myself。反身代词误用。根据主句的主语I可知，该处表示“当我正玩得痛快时”，故用myself。删除the前的at。介词多用。the moment在该处为表时间的从属连词，单独使用，不与介词at连用，故删除at。frightening改为

6、frightened。形容词混用。根据该句主语I可知，该处应用形容词frightened，表示“害怕的”，修饰人。frightening意为“令人害怕的”，一般修饰事物。anxious改为anxiously。形容词和副词混用。该处修饰动词cry，应用anxious的副词形式anxiously。jump改为jumping。非谓语动词误用。分析该句结构可知，该处作伴随状语，主语a young man和动词jump之间为逻辑上的主谓关系，故用现在分词形式。but改为and。连词误用。根据语境可知，“将Chris救出水面”与“我们立即把他送往最近的医院”之间为顺承关系，故应将but改为and。在sho

7、rt前加a。冠词漏用。a short while为固定搭配，意为“片刻”。thank改为thanks。名词的单复数误用。根据该句中的their和语境可知，该处表示表达他们的感激，应用名词的复数形式thanks。How改为What。感叹句引导词误用。此处是一个感叹句，引导词修饰名词短语“a respectable man”，应用What。第二节参考范文：Dear Sir/Madam，We really admire your kindness to plan to host such a nice party. Thank you very much! Im writing to tell yo

8、u were glad to take part in it to make friends.We have two programmes, a group of five boys singing a Chinese song and three girls performing a Chinese dance. The Chinese song is about how teenagers are strict with themselves and make every effort to achieve their dreams, and the dance is about how to value ourselves and people around us.By the way, wed appreciate it if the party were held next Thursday, when we have no other activities.Thanks again for your thoughtfulness.Yours，Li Hua