1、短文改错精讲精炼0417.18.After watch “English TV” last Sunday morning, I phoned to my classmate and asked him to go to see a film in the afternoon. Before the film was over, we returned to school to do our lessons. While we are having a rest in the corridor, I saw Mr. Liu, my head teacher. He told me that we
2、 had made some progresses in English, but my Chinese lagged behind, especially my Chinese composition. He suggested I must read more and keeping a diary every day. In the evening my father told me that reading newspapers would do me well to improving composition writing. That was really good idea! W
3、hat they said was quite right, and I should follow their advice.【参考答案】After watch “English TV” last Sunday morning, I phoned to my classmate and watching 删除to asked him to go to see a film in the afternoon. Before the film was over, we returned After/Whento school to do our lessons. While we are hav
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5、e that reading keepnewspapers would do me well for improving composition writing. That was really good agood idea! What they said was quite right, and I should follow their advice.19.Never shall I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss LiuOne Monday morning, when she entered in the classroom
6、, we found that she was young and beautiful ladyThen she introduced herself and said they shouldnt call her Teacher Liu but Miss LiuLate, she let us go the blackboard and said something about ourselves in English in turnWhen it was my turn, I felt too shy that I didnt dare to say anything before the
7、 classShe went up to me and said kind, “Dont be afraidI believe you can do it well” At last, I went to the blackboardShe praised me for that I had done参考答案Never shall I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss LiuOne Monday morning, when given she entered in the classroom, we found that she wa
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9、re the classShe went up to me and said kind, “Dont so kindly be afraidI believe you can do it well” At last, I went to the blackboardShe praised me for that whatI had done20.After shopping, mother and I went to a restaurant for lunchI notice mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woma
10、n and young coupleThey ate silently, and it was clearly that things were not going wellAs we left, mother stopped on their table“Excuse me,” she said, put her arm around the unhappy old woman“You remind me so many of my motherMay I hug you?” The woman smiled happily as she accepted to itAfter we lef
11、t, I said, “ That was very nice of you, motherSo I didnt think she looked like grandma” “Neither did me” said mother cheerfully参考【答案】After shopping, mother and I went to a restaurant for lunchI notice mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an noticed occupiedelderly woman and/a young coupleThey
12、ate silently, and it was clearly that things were not going wellAs we left， clear mother stopped on their table“Excuse me,” she said, put at或by puttingher arm around the unhappy old woman“You remind me so many muchof my motherMay I hug you?” The woman smiled happily as she accepted to itAfter we lef
13、t, I said, “ That was very nice of you, motherSo I didnt think she looked like Butgrandma” “Neither did me” said mother cheerfully I 21. We senior school students do have some growing painsTake some of my classmate for example，they often feel upset because the expectations from parents，endless homew
14、ork and the pressure of examsThese serious affect their physical and mental well-beingTherefore，I think about it quite necessary to take measures to relieve the painsFirst，that is a good idea to have heart-to-heart talks with our parents，tell them we wont disappoint themMeanwhile，its advisable to sp
15、are sonic time to take some exercise beside our devotion to the studies so that we will always feel relaxing and energeticAs long as we were fully prepared，we are sure to achieve great success in my academic performance改错【101=10】：We senior school students do have some growing pains. Take some of my
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