1、Unit 1Teenage LifePeriod Reading for Writing1_/bhevj(r)/n.行为；举止2_/denren/n.一代(人)3_/trkt/vt.吸引；引起的注意(或兴趣)4_/fks/vi.&vt.集中(精力、注意力等)；(使)调节焦距 n.中心；重点；焦点5_/dktd/adj.有瘾的；上瘾的；入迷的6_/dkt/n.对入迷的人；吸毒成瘾的人7_/dlt/n.成年人 adj.成年的；成熟的behaviourgenerationattractfocusaddictedaddictadulttep 1PrewritingWhen you meet some
2、problems in your life,who do you usually turn to for help？Why?_Step 2Whilewriting1输入为先，阅读梳理文脉Task 1:文本整体理解：关注布局谋篇答案：略()What is the letters main purpose?ATo give advice.BTo ask for advice.CTo make a promise.DTo keep a promise.ATask 2:文本细节理解：学习特色表达()(1)What is Worried Friends trouble?AHe became addict
3、ed to playing computer games.BHe was anxious because he had no time to play.CHis friend often spent too much time online.DHis friend cannot concentrate on schoolwork.C()(2)Which one is Ms Luos advice?ATo make new friends.BTo ask parents for help.CTo talk to the friend.DDont care too much.(3)从文中找出至少3
4、个表达建议的句子。_C I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.2细读课文，关注表达策略学技巧读文章第一段，习得以下技能：(1)本段第二句中使用 anxious与 terrible，突出表现了对方的担忧情绪。I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.Why not discuss the problem together？(2)本段连用三个句式：You wrote that；I understand quite well that；Yo
5、u think that可看出作者在建议信的开头，语气比较委婉礼貌，三个宾语从句的使用突显了作者使用高级句式表达的功底。学结构学逻辑书信第一段开头用“You wrote that”引出对方的问题，接着用“I understand quite well that”表达出自己对对方的理解，然后引出对方让作者解决的问题。学语言1I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.我建议你和你的朋友谈一谈他的行为举止。(教材P18)behaviour n.(the way that sb.behaves,especially tow
6、ards other people)行为；举止 behave vi.表现；举止 behave badly/well 表现差/好 behave oneself 举止得体；有礼貌 Behave yourself!口语规矩点！(1)新北师必修第二册 It is important to understand the emotions,_(behave)and intentions of characters in a story.了解故事中人物的情感、行为和意图是很重要的。behaviours(2)I think all of us should _ in public places.我认为我们大家
7、都应该注意在公共场所的行为举止。(3)They _ to/towards the guests，which made us very disappointed.他们对待客人很不礼貌，这使我们非常失望。(4)If parents do not teach their child how to_，he will do anything at will.如果父母不教给他们的孩子如何举止规范，他做任何事情都会随心所欲。mind our behaviourbehaved badlybehave himself2It is not unusual for teenagers of your generat
8、ion to be attracted to computer games and the online world.对于你们这一代的青少年来说，被电脑游戏和网络世界吸引是很正常的事。(教材P18)attract vt.吸引；引起的注意(或兴趣)The scenery is so attractive that it attracts many tourists attention every year,and it will keep on holding much attraction for more travellers.这里的风景如此迷人，以至于每年都吸引了很多游客的注意力，并且将持
9、续吸引更多的游客。attraction 作“名胜，吸引人的地方/东西”讲时，是可数名词。Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and has many worldfamous places of interest.四川省旅游资源丰富，它有许多世界著名的名胜。(1)The exhibition has attracted thousands of graduates展览吸引了成千上万的毕业生。(2)单句语法填空What do you think attracts people _ big cities?你觉得是什么吸引人们去大城市？Mou
10、nt Tai is _(attract)to tourists for its beautiful scenery and historical sites.泰山以其美丽的风景和历史遗迹吸引着游客。toattractiveThere are a great number of foreign tourists travelling in China every year,_(attract)by the mysterious Chinese culture.每年有大量的外国游客来中国旅游，被神秘的中国文化所吸引。Venice is one of the greatest tourist _(a
11、ttract)in the world.威尼斯是世界上最好的旅游胜地之一。attractedattractions3But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.但是，花太多的时间上网是不健康的，使人很难专注于生活中的其他事情。(教材P18)句式分析：该句中使用了“make it形容词动词不定式”结构，其中it为形式宾语，真正的宾语为后面的动词不定式结构。focus(1)vi.&vt.(to give attention,ef
12、fort,etc.to one particular subject,situation or person rather than another)集中(精力、注意力等)focus on集中(注意力、精力等)于 focus ones attention on把注意力集中在上面(2)n.(the thing or person that people are most interested in)中心；重点；焦点 the focus of attention 关注的焦点 in focus 对准焦距；清晰 out of focus 没对准焦距；不清晰表示“集中注意力/精力于”的短语还有：pay
13、attention to sth.,put ones heart into sth.,fix ones attention on sth.,concentrate ones attention on sth.。(1)Health and environmental problems have become increasingly the focus of attention健康和环境问题日益成为人们瞩目的焦点。(2)新译林必修第一册Setting goals gives you _focus in life.设定目标能让你在生活中有重点。a(3)They _ their soil rich
14、and free of disease.他们主要是想保持土壤肥沃且免受病害。(4)If we find those materials interesting,well _ them for long.如果我们发现那些材料有趣，我们的注意力就会长时间集中在它们身上。4Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.有些学生甚至沉迷于互联网，无法集中精力于学校和家庭生活。(教材P18)focus on keepingfocus our atten
15、tion on addictedadj.有瘾的；上瘾的；入迷的(1)be/get/become addicted to sth./doing sth.addict oneself to sth./doing sth.沉溺于某事物/做某事；对上瘾(2)addict vt.使沉溺；使上瘾n.有瘾的人 a work addict 工作狂(3)addiction n.嗜好(4)addictive adj.使人上瘾的，使人入迷的(1)If this is the case,people addicted to shopping should go to a support group to help t
16、hem break this habit.如果真是这样，购物成瘾的人应该寻求互助小组来帮助他们改掉这个习惯。(2)语境语法填空_(addict)to playing the violin/_ (addict)himself to playing the violin,he didnt notice a thief walk into his house.AddictedAddictingJohn was _ work addict,who worked as long as 12 hours every day.In order to reduce pressure,he was addict
17、ed _ drinking.Worse still,he addicted himself to _(take)drugs.These _(addict)ruined his life eventually.atotakingaddictions通技法学写作规范从体裁上看，本单元的写作任务是写一封建议信，这类题目要求我们就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。建议信的写作要求是给出的建议要明确，要贴近事实，要给出每个建议的理由。也就是说文章应分建议部分和给出建议的原因两部分。建议信可以写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或机构，就其改进服务等提出建
18、议或忠告。其基本框架为：(1)开头(beginning)：开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点(state your idea)。(2)主体(body)：对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)。(3)结尾(ending)：呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion)。积“黄金”词句，写高分文章一、常用的开头语1You wrote that you are very worried about your friend,Chen Lei.你写信说你很担心你的朋友陈磊。2I know you are now having trou
19、ble communicating with others,and you may often feel lonely.我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些困难，你也可能会经常感到孤独。3Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on很高兴收到你就征求我的建议的来信。4Here are some tips to help you./Here are a few suggestions to help you.这里有一些建议能帮助你。二、主体部分常用表达1First(ly),I recommend that you talk to your
20、 friend about his behaviour.首先，我建议你和你的朋友谈谈他的行为。2Second(ly),why not join a club?If you do this,you can make friends.第二，为什么不加入一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。3Third(ly),it will be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music.By doing this,you will calm yourself down.第三，看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。4Last
21、 but not least,you should talk with her.最后一点，也是非常重要的一点，你应该和她谈一谈。三、常用的结束语1I am sure he will listen to you,since you are his good friend.我相信他会听你的，因为你是他的好朋友。2I hope you will find these ideas useful.希望你会发现这些主意有用。3As time goes on,people will know you better and like to make friends with you if you can fo
22、llow the advice above.如果你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加了解你，并会愿意和你交朋友的。4I believe,through your efforts,you can manage to overcome these difficulties.我相信，通过努力，你会克服这些困难的。积“黄金”模板，减少低级失误Dear _，Im sorry you are having trouble _.However,the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.Here are some tips to help
23、 you.First,_ Second,_ Third，_ I hope you will find these ideas useful.Good luck with your_Yours sincerely，【例文鉴赏】假如你是某英语报的编辑，学生李华给你写了如下的一封信。请你根据来信的内容，写一封回信，给他一些建议。词数为80左右。Dear Editor，My physics teacher is very strict with us.I often feelnervous in his class because we are punished by being made to st
24、and for five minutes if we cant answer his questions.Itsembarrassing(令人尴尬的)to be made to stand in class,so I hate physics classes.However,I really want to do well in physics.What should I do?Yours sincerely，Li Hua【思路点拨】认真阅读写作要求所提供的英文信件，可以看出回信的要点包括：李华的苦恼(物理老师要求很严格，自己一上物理课就感到害怕)；物理老师这样做的原因(Your physic
25、s teacher thinks fear is the best way！)；最后提出自己的建议(如把自己的想法告诉老师，然后说明理由以及这样做的结果)。【范文赏读】Dear Li Hua，I am sorry you are having difficulty with your physicsclasses.Teachers have many different ways of encouraging students to put in more effortit seems as if your physics teacher thinks fear is the best way
26、！He does it because he thinks it will produce results.If you feel that it is stopping you from doing your best,then you should tell him.You say you want to do well in physics.If your teacher knows this，he will be pleased.It is only when students dont try as hard as they can that a teacher is forced
27、to take action.If he knows your worries,perhaps he will suggest other ways of helping you improve your work.Good luck with you.Yours，Miss Wang【亮点点击】文章结构优美，值得认真研究，尝试模仿。在语言运用方面，作者能够根据内容需要灵活运用各种短语、句式。具体的亮点如下：句中含有一个have difficulty with sth.结构。句较为复杂，主句为Teachers have many different ways；破折号后面的句子起到了解释说明的作用
28、。句中含有一个because引导的原因状语从句，从句中又含有一个宾语从句，省略了引导词that。此外，主句中的it替代了物理老师的行为。句结构复杂，形式优美。含有一个该单元课文中出现的“It isthat强调结构”；强调部分“only when students dont try as hard as they can”含有一个“asas”比较结构。另外频繁出现的高级词汇及短语也是文章的闪光点所在，如encourage sb.to do sth.“鼓励某人做某事”，stop sb.from doing sth.“阻止某人做某事”，do well in“在方面做得不错”，take action“采取行动”，improve“提高”，suggest“建议”等。温馨说明：课后请完成高效作业9
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