1、1本单元的写作项目属于新课标中应用体类别中的询问类电子邮件。询问类电子邮件属于正式电子邮件，询问类电子邮件要清楚地说明要询问的内容，语言要简洁，态度要诚恳，格式要正确。正式电子邮件包括收件人地址、寄件人地址、邮件的主题、开头、正文、结束语和签名。Section Writing询问类电子邮件2.Pre-writing()Learn to write after the model.From：To：enquiries*Subject：questions about the Youth Short Film FestivalDear Sir/Madam，I am writing to ask for
2、 information about entering a film in your festival!I am sixteen years old and I am a student at No.1 Senior Secondary School.I started making music videos three years ago.Last year,I made my first short film.3I would like to ask about the films for your festival.Do you accept sport documentaries?I
3、am currently working on a sport documentary with a school friend.For the past few months,we have been interviewing and filming young players about their interest in basketball.Couldyou tell me if this kind of film would be acceptable?I wonder if you could also give me more information about how to a
4、pply for this festival.Can groups as well as individuals enter?Can we enter our film to another film festival at the same time?In addition,would it be possible to tell me about the prizes?Are there prizes for different age groups and for different types of films？I appreciate your help and look forwa
5、rd to hearing from you.Yours faithfully，Liu Ze4Greeting：Dear Sir/Madam篇章结构Senders address：.Recipients address：.Subject：The topic of the e-mailThe first part：Explain why you are writing the e-mail.The second part：detailed introduction of your inquiry contentsThe third part：ending and wishesSignature：
6、Liu Ze56()Preparation for writingWords and phrases_ 对感兴趣_ 专注于_ 参加；从事_ 理解；弄清楚_ 提出_ n.日程安排；时刻表_ 玩得开心_ 互致问候_ 追溯到；远在年代be interested inbe absorbed ingo in forfigure output forwardschedulehave funexchange greetingsdate back to7_ 期望，期待_ 以这种方式_ 取得突破_ n.专题研讨会_ n.家庭教师；导师_ 这学期look forward toby this meansmake a
7、 breakthroughseminartutorthis term8.While-writing假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封电子邮件，询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.参考词汇：住宿accommodation。9Step 1List the outline of the passage1地址_2正文称呼语：_首段：_中段：_尾段：_签名：_寄件人地址收件人地址信件主题Dear Sir/Madam说明写邮件的原因(想询问暑假英语课程的情况)询问的内容结束并提出希望Li H
8、ua10Step 2List the words,phrases and sentences.1Words and phrases_ 参加暑期学校_ 六周的英语课程_ 在假期期间_ n.广告_ n.住宿_ 为付钱_ 寄宿家庭_ n.学生宿舍_ 想要；愿意_ 渴望；盼望；期待attend a summer schoolsix-week English courseduring the vacationadvertisementaccommodationpay forhost familydormitorywould likelook forward to112Sentences我是一名中国学生，
9、我计划在假期去英国上一所暑期学校。(and连接并列句)_我还想知道我要付多少学费，是否包括住宿。(宾语从句)_I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school duringthe vacation.Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodationis included.12Step 3Draft the article by using the following wor
10、ds.From：To：enquiries*six-Subject：questions about the Youth Short Film FestivalDear Sir/Madam，I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.Ive seen your advertisement,and Id like to know something more about your six-week English course.13First,whe
11、n will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?Besides,I wish there would not be too many students in a class.Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?I am looking forward
12、to your early reply.Yours faithfully，Li Hua14.Post-writingpolishing the passageExchange your passage with your partner and pay attention to the following points：1.Is the format of the email right?2.Are there any spelling mistakes?3.Are there any grammar mistakes?4.Does the e-mail include all the mai
13、n contents?5.Are advanced and complex sentences used correctly?6.Is the writing written properly and clearly？15亮点表达精彩开头语1Im happy/glad/pleased to receive your e-mail dated by May 1st.很高兴收到你五一发来的电子邮件。2Im writing to thank you for your help during my stay in England.我写这封信是为了感谢我在英国时你对我的帮助。3Im sorry not
14、to answer/reply to your email in time because I have been busy these days.很抱歉没有及时回复你的电子邮件，因为这些日子我一直很忙。164Im sorry to learn that you did not do well in the entrance examination.得知你在入学考试中发挥不好，我很难过。5Im glad to receive your email saying that you have been offered a good job in a big company.Congratulati
15、ons to you.我很高兴收到你的邮件，邮件中说你被一家大公司聘用了，祝贺你。6I have been missing you a lot since we met last time.自从我们上次见面以来，我一直很想你。177How are you getting on with your English study?你英语学得怎么样了？8I am sorry for not writing to you sooner.很抱歉没有早点给你写信。精彩结尾语1In the end,I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.最后
16、，如果你发现我的建议有用我会非常高兴。2Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.盼望很快收到你的来信。183Please give my regards to your family.请代我向你的家人问好。4If you have any more questions,please let me know.如果你还有问题，请告诉我。5Wish you the best of health and success!祝您身体健康，工作顺利。6I look forward to our next meeting.期待我们的下次相见。19书信的写作技巧1
17、称呼无职衔的男子：Mr.Wang/Zhang已婚女子：Mrs Wang/Zhao未婚女子：Miss Wang/Zhang博士：Dr.Zhang教授：Pro.Lin还有一些表示感情色彩的词。如：Dear Dr.Smith/Dear madam/Dear sir202正文正文要从称谓的下一行写起，可以和称谓齐头写，也可以向内缩五个字母写。正文就是要具体地写你想表达的内容，要注意表达清楚、简练，让收信人很容易得知你要表达的内容。3结束语结束语写在正文的下方，另起一行。常用的结束语有：best wishes！/good luck！/give my best wishes to your family！/looking forward to your reply!4签名sincerely yours/yours sincerely/truly yours/yours respectfully/respectfully yours
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