1、1本单元的写作项目属于新课标中记叙文体类别中的概要。概要是对一篇文章的主题思想的简单陈述，它用最简洁的语言概括了原文的主题，使读者对一篇文章有一个简要概括的了解。概要主要包括总结原文的主要观点、主要支撑细节、总体性评价。Section Writing概要2.Pre-writing()Learn to write after the modelOn 7 December,2015,Tu Youyou was awarded a Nobel Prize for her discovery of artemisinin,a life-saving drug for malaria.Tu Youyou
2、 majored in medicine in university and later studied Chinese medicine with experts in the field.3In 1969,Tu Youyou was given the mission to set up a team to find a cure for malaria.When worldwide scientists failed to find a cure using modern chemicals,Tu Youyouturned to Chinese herbs for help.Despit
3、e their limited resources and hundreds of failed experiments,they found a possible chemical.In order to test the medicine,Tu Youyou and her team tested the medicine on their own bodies.They finally discovered the most effective drug to cure the disease.Although Tu Youyou has won the Nobel Prize and
4、become well-known,she is uninterested in fame and prefers to continue her research.4篇章结构Part 1：The Nobel Prize AwardPart 2：Personal information Part 3：Her mission and research Part 4：Her attitude towards fame5()Preparation for writingWords and phrases_ n发现_ n.概要；摘要_ n.队；组_ adj.吸引人的_ n.进步_ n.研究discov
5、erysummaryteamattractiveprogressresearch6_ adj.好相处的_ 主修_ 毕业于_ 对有天赋_ 努力做_ 更喜欢，宁愿_ 给某人树立一个好榜样_ 被认为/看作是_ 作为而被铭记easy-goingmajor ingraduate fromhave a gift forwork hard atbe determined toset sb a good examplebe considered asbe remembered as7.While-writingWrite a summary of the text“The Superhero Behind S
6、uperman”注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加连接词，以使行文连贯。Step 1List the outline of the passage.1首段：_2中间段：_3尾段：_总结原文的主要观点主要支撑细节(出生时间、地点、主要经历、主要贡献、成就等)总体性评价8Step 2List the words，phrases and sentences.1Words and phrases_ n贡献_ n.尊敬_ adj.著名的_ n.成就；成绩_ 出生于_ 被认为是contributionrespectfamousachievementbe born inbe regarded as9_
7、 取得显著进步_ 献身于_ 高度评价_ 参加选拔make remarkable progressbe devoted tothink highly oftry out for102Sentences虽然他再也不能走路了，但里夫以尊严和勇气开始了他的新生活。(让步状语从句)_里夫解释说，尽管他可能激励了数百万人，“我所做的是基于我们内心的力量你不需要成为超人才能做到这一点。”(宾语从句；主语从句)_ _Although he could never walk again,Reeve began his new life with dignity and courage.Reeve explain
8、ed that,while he may be an inspiration to millions，“what I do is based on powers we all have inside us.and you dont have to be a Superman to do it.”11Step 3Draft the article by using the following words.and,from then on,unfortunately,although，shortly after,butChristopher Reeve not only played a supe
9、rhero in many of the Superman films,but he was also a superhero to many in real life.Reeve acted in his first school play at the age of eight.As an actor,he tried out for,and starred in four Superman films from 1978 to 1987.From then on,he became a world-famous actor.12Unfortunately,a terrible thing
10、 happened in 1995.Reeve was thrown from a horse and broke his neck.At first,doctors did not expect him to live.However,“Superman”didnt give up.Although he could never walk again,Reeve began his new life with dignity and courage.Shortly after his accident,Reeve returned to filmmaking.Over the next fe
11、w years,he devoted himself to helping those in need.Christopher Reeve died on 10 October,2004.But he will always be regarded as a superheroin more ways than one.13.Post-writingpolishing the passageExchange your passage with your partner，and pay attention to the following points.1.Is the format of th
12、e summary appropriate?2.Are there any spelling mistakes?3.Are there any grammatical mistakes like the tenses(时态)?4.Does the summary include all the main contents?5.Is written English correctly used?14亮点表达精彩开头语Yao Ming is a great basketball player in China or even in the world.姚明是中国乃至世界上伟大的篮球运动员。Mart
13、in Luther King is now regarded as one of the heroes of the 20th century.马丁路德金现在被认为是20世纪的英雄之一。Einstein,who discovered the“Relativity Theory”，is well known in the world.爱因斯坦发现了“相对论”是众所周知的。15Howard Carter is one of the most famous explorers that the world has ever known.霍华德卡特是世界上最著名的探险家之一。Shakespeare,w
14、ho was a son from a poor family,a man of little education,wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world.莎士比亚出身贫寒，几乎没有受过什么教育，他写的戏剧和诗歌在全世界都有人读。Tomas Edison,born in America,was a great scientist and inventor.托马斯爱迪生生于美国，是一位伟大的科学家和发明家。16精华结尾语Sb still live in ones heart.某人仍然活在心里。Sb set a good exa
15、mple to.某人为树立了好榜样。Sb be respected by.某人受到的尊重。Sb be honored as.某人被尊为Sb be regarded/accepted as.某人被认为/接受为Sb become a world champion at.某人在成为世界冠军。17写作技巧1文体要求概要应该只有原文的三分之一或四分之一长；概要应全部用自己的话完成，不要引用原文的句子；概要必须全面、清晰地表明原文所载的信息，以便你的读者不需翻阅原文就可以完全掌握材料的原意。2行文要求删除细节，只保留主要观点；把长段的描述变成复合句；避免重复：在原文中，为了强调某个主题，可能会重复论证说明。但是这在概要中应该删除那些突出强调的重述句；文章中的第一人称说的话通常在概要中转换成第三人称。18本节内容结束
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