1、策略四精美打造续写的龙头和凤尾一、高分开头5大法宝如何写好读后续写，在高考中博取阅卷老师的眼球，获得梦寐以求的高分？如何让学生的作品在高考中脱颖而出？一个好的故事开头就好比是一个香味十足的诱饵，诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地读完。 而一个拙劣的故事开头，一定会让读者大倒胃口，恹恹欲睡。“Well begun is half done！”可见写好一个故事的开头是多么的重要。下面教你五招高分开头的方式。法宝1巧用形容词/副词(短语)2022新高考全国Disappointed and frustrated, David hung his head, trying to avoid eye contact
2、 with me.Exhausted and hungry，I wondered if we could find our way back.Curious to know what was inside，he tiptoed into the dark cave.2020浙江7月A few minutes later，the bear headed back to our camp. The bear roared at us，our frightened mouths wide open.Happily and excitedly，they went to the supermarket
3、for what they needed.法宝2巧用分词(短语)2022新高考全国Seeing his face filled with anxiety, I felt sad, deciding to talk something with him.2020浙江1月A few weeks later the boy arrived home from university. Hurrying home，he couldnt wait to see his old friend Poppy.2018浙江6月We had no idea where we were and it was gett
4、ing dark. Wandering around，we were still stuck in the dilemma.法宝3巧用高级句式2022南京市模拟一It took a long time before we accepted the fact that he was missing. (同位语从句)2021浙江1月I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.My brother came up with an idea that he could cut the pumpkin with a kni
5、fe.2020新高考全国When Mrs Meredith heard of Johns idea，she thought it was a good one，too.So they took immediate action as John had proposed.(时间状语从句)2020浙江7月At the very moment，the helicopter arrived. It hovered over the camp，causing strong wind that blew the bear unsteady on his feet.(非谓语动词定语从句)法宝4巧用倒装结构2
6、020浙江1月Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Hardly had the little dog come out when Poppy came over to lick it as if it were a longlost friend.2020浙江7月At the very moment，the helicopter arrived. So loud was the noise of the helicopter that the bear seemed to be disturbed for a while.20
7、18浙江6月Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. I got a fright，so did my horse.法宝5巧用强调句结构2021浙江1月That video was posted the day before Halloween. It was my brother who did that for amusement.2020浙江7月A few minutes later，the bear came back. It was with great strength that the bear shook
8、 and tore the fence.二、漂亮结尾2法续写不能虎头蛇尾，在篇末也要用心设计。由于文章的故事性、情节性强，所以续写的结尾可以是自然的升华议论，亦可以是其他方式结尾。常见的结尾方式有两种，即主题升华和首尾呼应。1主题升华法2022浙江卷1月More importantly, I earned my teammates recognition and we have realized the true meaning of friendship since then. 更重要的是，我赢得了队友的认可，从那时起我们意识到友谊的真正含义。(感悟友谊的真正含义) Someday，when
9、 I am older and have children of my own，I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.有一天，当我长大了，有了自己的孩子，我希望我能成为和我妈妈一样伟大的父母。(母爱的深远影响)In my opinion，money cant take the place of everything，such as your life，your time and your happiness.在我看来，金钱不能取代一切，比如你的生活、你的时间和你的幸福。(表达自己的价值观)2首尾呼应法(1)开头：I had an in
10、teresting childhood. It was filled with surprises and amusements，all because of my motherloving，sweet，yet absentminded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.结尾：Despite moms being absentminded and forgetful，she was still a kind and nice mom.(2)开头：It wa
11、s summer，and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.结尾：Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind.(3)开头：A funny thing happened to Arthur when he
12、was on the way to work one day.结尾：What a funny day！Arthur couldnt stop laughing whenever he looked back on this funny experience.练重点练难点创新应用体验阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。2022衡水中学高三二调考试I stood with my friends in a line. My heart was hammering like anything, my hands cold and wet，my head buzzi
13、ng with excitement and nervousness at the same time. I earnestly listened to the names of the house captains (社长) being announced, but in my heart, I wanted it to end because then the head girl would be announced. I so wanted it to be me.I had made countless posters badges and bracelets for the camp
14、aigning. Instead of having lunch during the lunch time, I had gone from person to person, asking them to vote for me. I had shouted at the top of my lungs the slogan, “East or West, Maryam is the best! Vote for her and your year will be best.”I had tried my hardest to convince people to vote for me,
15、 now all I had left was hope.“Guess who the head girl for the year is？” teased the announcer.A heavy silence fell, one that was full of hope and expectation, of fear and of nervousness.The announcer teased for a minute or two before finally announcing the name of the head girl.I felt confused as my
16、friends pushed me out of the line. As I looked at the huge crowd clapping for me, I could not believe that I was the head girl of the school.The head of the council body. The student that was respected and liked by everybody.From then on, I enjoyed the respect I got in and out of school. At home, my
17、 family members praised me and at school everyone looked up to me. They thought I was an inspiration as well as someone they could get motivated by. I had power. I could talk to the school principal and convince her to do anything. I could order around other council members and ask them to do anythi
18、ng.But as days passed, I realized that with power comes responsibility.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2请按如下格式作答。I was given countless responsibilities along with my studies.The principal listened attentively, her concern clearly written on her face.参考范文：Iwasgivencountlessresponsibilitiesalongwithmystudies. I had
19、to check students uniform, keep an alert mind for bullies, and maintain order when students queue up for meals. My energy and the excitement drained out of me as I realized that with a position comes burdens. As a result, my marks dropped dramatically and I eventually broke down. One day, I found my
20、self in the principals office, telling her with deep sorrow that I could no longer be the head girl.Theprincipallistenedattentively, herconcernclearlywrittenonherface. She put her hand on my shoulder and expressed her understanding. She suggested I turn to the former head girl and find some assistants. I was doubtful at first, but my doubts vanished as the suggestions proved very helpful. Now I felt I would be able to do this and at the same time ace at my studies. When you ask for power, you should be prepared to accept the responsibilities that come with it too. 5
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