1、策略二读后续写增色必备句式句式1Doing., 主谓doing作状语,逻辑主语与句子的主语一致,构成主动关系;有时可以在doing前加before, after, while等。2022新课标卷I saw his face filled with anxiety and I felt sad. I decided to talk something with him.Seeing his face filled with anxiety, I felt sad, deciding to talk something with him.2022新课标卷I patted on his should
2、er and said in a soft voice, “I heard you had worked so hard for this event. How I admire your strong determination. Why not give it a try?”Patting on his shoulder, I said in a soft voice, “I heard you had worked so hard for this event. How I admire your strong determination. Why not give it a try?”
3、句式2主谓, doing.doing作伴随状语,与句子的谓语动词同时发生,逻辑主语与句子的主语一致,构成主动关系。2022新课标卷Instead, all the kids including those from other schools erupted into a big applause and cheered for his determination and persistence.Instead , all the kids including those from other schools erupted into a big applause, cheering for
4、his determination and persistence.2022新课标卷David smiled weakly and bowed his head.David smiled weakly, bowing his head.句式3独立主格结构主语谓语, 逻辑主语doing/done.逻辑主语doing/done., 主语谓语逻辑主语与doing构成主动关系,或者逻辑主语与done构成被动关系构成独立主格,有时前面有介词with,在句中常作状语。2022新课标卷David turned to me and firmly expressed his determination to f
5、inish the crosscountry run and tears rolled down his cheeks.(With) tears rolling down his cheeks, David turned to me and firmly expressed his determination to finish the crosscountry run.Her father was lying on his back, and his dog was trapped under the truck.Her father was lying on his back,(with)
6、 his dog trapped under the truck.句式4“表情感类的形容词主谓”或“主谓表情感类的形容词”情感类的形容词在句中作状语,说明主语的情感状态,可以转化为“表情感类的形容词主谓”形式。有时可以放在句后形式:“主谓表情感类的形容词”形式。 2022湖南长郡中学模拟She was thirsty, sweaty and bored. She stopped and sat on a rock.Thirsty, sweaty and bored, she stopped and sat on a rock.2022龙岩市第一次教学质量检测Dad was exhausted
7、and relieved. Finally, Dad got three of them into the boat where Lizzy finally closed her eyes.Finally, Dad got three of them into the boat where Lizzy finally closed her eyes, exhausted and relieved.He was eager and excited, and she waved her hands, trying to attract others attention.Eager and exci
8、ted, she waved her hands, trying to attract others attention.句式5方式副词,主谓方式副词在句中作状语,修饰谓语动词,一般放在宾语后,但有时根据需要可以放在句首,有时放在实义动词前。2020新高考卷Politely and excitedly, he asked Mrs. Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn.Gently, she picked up the first baby, ran back outside and laid it on the sidewalk.句式6全部倒装:
9、地点状语或表示运动方向的副词谓(vi.)主(名词)该句型是一个全部倒装句,主语必须是名词,谓语动词为不及物动词,常见的表运动方向的副词有:in, out, off, away, up, down, outside, inside等。 2021新高考卷The twins went upstairs, carrying the breakfast they had made.Upstairs went the twins, carrying the breakfast they had made.2019浙江卷A familiar voice came out of the darkness, w
10、hich made us joyful.Out of the darkness came a familiar voice, which made us joyful.句式7强调句型:It was被强调成分that(主语)谓语除了强调句型,在突出某一成分时,还可以用部分倒装句型。2022新课标卷His strong determination made a difference.It was his strong determination that made a difference.2022雅礼中学模拟二She not only presented us with a great perf
11、ormance but also showed us that it is very important to step up and volunteer.Not only did she present us with a great performance, but also showed us that it is very important to step up and volunteer.句式8非限制性定语从句:.,which.2022雅礼中学模拟二Suddenly the applause burst out, and it really surprised me.Suddenl
12、y the applause burst out, which really surprised me.2022河北省模拟演练三At this moment, we formed a close connection, and it does not need language.At this moment, we formed a close connection, which does not need language.句式9让阅卷老师眼前一亮的“某人想到”idea, thought .hit/struck/occurred tosb.It suddenly hit/struck/occ
13、urred to/dawned on sb. that从句,其中 that从句是真正的主语。2022保定市一模It suddenly occurred to/ hit/ struck Mya that the theme this year was supposed to be “Sweet Labor, Sweet Sixteen”. Mya突然想到今年的主题应该是“甜蜜的劳动,甜蜜的16岁”。句式10a burst/wave /sense/feeling of表情感状态的名词有灵动词sb. 表“某人感到”或“一阵/一种向某人袭来”2021新高考卷Mother felt a wave of
14、pride and warmth sweep over her.2022南京市考前训练题二Whenever Ben recalled these sweet moments, a wave of warmth swept through him.2022福建省4月百校联合测评Creating a sense of belonging is an important thing, which influences physical and mental health.句式11with ones eyes full of(tears of)情感名词,主谓2022湖南省百所学校3月联考Warmth
15、ran through his body ,with tears welled up in his eyes.2020新高考卷His mother listened attentively to the children, with her eyes full of excitement and gratitude.句式12用动作链,营造画面感该句式中连词and连接三个或三个以上的动作,构成动作链,动词的时态是一致的。2021浙江高考I approached Dad, proudly took out of my own money and handed it to him.我走近爸爸,骄傲地
16、拿出我自己的钱递给他。2022南京市考前训练题一She walked to the yard, knelt down, and found the right place to shovel.她走到院子里,跪下来,找到合适的地方铲。练重点练难点创新应用体验阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。2022石家庄市部分学校模拟When I was in school I remembered my best friend called me late night on Saturday to invite me to her birthday party next
17、 day. I was very happy and very excited to go there but I needed to ask permission from my parents. I went to my dads room and slowly asked him, “Dad, tomorrow is my best friends birthday party and I really want to go.” Dad said, “OK, I dont mind but ask your mom.” I went to Mom and said, “Dear Mom.
18、” Suddenly she replied, “What do you want?” I was shocked, “Mom, how do you know that I need to say something?” She said, “The way you are talking shows that.” and she smiled. I asked her, “Mom, I want to go to my best friends birthday party tomorrow.” She said, “OK, you can go but you have to be ba
19、ck before 10.”Then my preparations started. I made a card for my friend and started selecting cloths for the party, and finally everything was completed and I went to sleep and only one thing was there in my mind all the time THE PARTY. I was waiting for the night to end and the party to begin. Next
20、 morning, my mom was surprised to see me. No alarm, no Moms warning, just I woke up by myself.The whole day had passed and now it was party time. My dad dropped me in my friends place and told me that he would be back at 10. I said, “OK, OK” and I ran away. I enjoyed a lot at the party. My friend lo
21、ved that card which I made for her and everybody in the party loved my dress. I was on cloud nine. We had dinner, we played so many games and it was 10 finally. I remembered my moms advice that I should be back till 10.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2请按如下格式作答。I came out and started searching for my dad, but I cou
22、ld not be able to find him.Suddenly I heard someone calling something, and I was scared, starting to walk fast.Icameoutandstartedsearchingformydad, butIcouldnotbeabletofindhim. I was so worried and scared, everybody was inside, and I was alone there. I waited there for 5 to 10 minutes but waiting al
23、one seemed to be more than the time. I started walking, and I thought at least I walked home as my home was 20 minutes away from my friends place. As I was walking I was weeping because I had never walked alone at night.SuddenlyIheardsomeonecallingsomething, andIwasscared, startingtowalkfast. I hear
24、d someone walking fast behind me. I started running and crying, and then I saw some cars parked there. I hid behind those cars. I saw one shadow searching for me. I prayed not to be found. After some time I could not see that shadow, I came out slowly and ran towards my home. Finally I reached home. I hugged my mom and told her the story. And then my dad came and said, “You should have waited there. The shadow was me!”6