2023新教材高考英语二轮专题复习 专题五 应用文写作（先文体 再添彩）第一讲 专家支招 高效备考.docx

1、专题五应用文写作先文体再添彩【近3年新课标全国卷考情分析】第一讲专家支招高效备考明应用文赋分标准第五档： (1315分)能写明全部要点； 语言基本无误， 行文连贯， 表达清楚。第四档： (1012分)能写明全部或绝大部分要点； 语言有少量错误， 行文不够连贯； 表达基本清楚。第三档： (79分)能写明基本要点； 语言虽有较多错误， 但能基本达意。第二档： (46分)能写出部分要点； 语言错误多； 影响意思表达。第一档： (13分)只能写出一两个要点； 语言错误很多， 只有个别句子正确。阅卷老师现场评卷20221月浙江卷假定你是李华，你在“中国爱尔兰文化节”中结识的爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已

2、回国。请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括：1回忆活动经历； 2分享个人收获；3希望保持联系。注意：1词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。三审定题列纲谋篇1审要求：本篇作文的体裁属于电子邮件，要求考生根据提示信息给在“中国爱尔兰文化节”中结识的爱尔兰朋友Chris写一份邮件。2审内容：写作内容要包括三点：回忆活动经历；分享个人收获；希望保持联系。试题虽然对写作范围进行了限定，但仍然具有一定的开放性，这给考生留出了一定的自由发挥的空间，有利于考生充分展示自己的写作能力。3审时态：文章主体时态应为一般现在时。“中规中矩的”三档作文(得分8分)学生习作：Dear Chris，How time fli

3、es! I still remember the exciting moments we spend on together during the SinoIrish Cultural Festival. The art performance on the last night left me deep impression. It featured Chinese and Irish folk dance and music. We chatted about the favourite pastimes and foods of the people there. I now have

4、a new dream to travel and experience the cultures of as much countries as possible. I wish to start with Ireland as my first destination. Lets keep in touch! I look forward to have you as my tour guide when I visit.Yours，Li Hua名师寄语：本文基本表达文意， 但语法错误较多， 语言简单， 没有高级表达、高频词汇，况且篇章结构不清晰， 故属于三档作文。“冤屈的”四档作文(得分

5、10分)学生习作：Dear Chris，How time flies! I still remember the exciting moments we spend together during the SinoIrish Cultural Festival.I was really impressed by the various event in the Festival, where I enjoyed the brilliant artworks and musical performance from your home country. What delighted me mos

6、t was that I happened to meet you. Your enthusiastic introduction to the artworks enhanced my insight. It is really amazing that we should have so much in common. How I wish I could have more opportunities to communicate with you! Please keep in touch and I hope to see you again soon.Yours，Li Hua名师寄

7、语：本文较好地表达文意， 但语法错误较少， 语言简单句复合句交替运用，体现了考生较好的表达功底， 但文章结构有点欠缺， 故10分。“体面的”五档作文(得分14分)学生习作：Dear Chris，How is everything going? With delight, Im writing to share my sincere feeling about the ChinaIreland Cultural Festival with you.Although a week has passed since you returned home, I can still recall the

8、enjoyable time we spent together. From Chinese calligraphy to Irish paintings, we got a glimpse of various aesthetic masterpieces. And the festival also unfolded the two countries profound history. From this experience, I truly understand that geographical separation does not necessarily bring about

9、 cultural conflicts and that we can assimilate the others merits contrarily.At last, I hope our friendship will last forever. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua名师寄语：本文文章架构合情合理，较好地表达文章要点， 无语法错误， 语言简单句复合句交替运用，体现了考生较好的表达功底，是非常完美的一篇写作范文， 故14分。如何打造高分作文修改要十看1.看体裁和格式是否正确。2看要点是否齐全。3看主谓是否一致。4看人称是否一致。5看时态是否一致。6看句子结构是否完整。7看关联词是否准确。8看拼写、大小写是否正确。 9看标点是否正确。10看词数是否符合要求。誊写四注意1.注意文体格式。例如：是否需要加标题；是否需要注明日期或签名；如果是应用文中的书信或通知等要弄清日期或签名的位置。2注意标点符号。英语中没有顿号和书名号，英语中的句号是(.)而不是(。)。英语中的标点符号几乎不会额外占格。3注意大小写。只有句子开头的字母和专有名词的首字母大写，不能随便使用大写字母。4注意书写规范，卷面整洁。誊写要细心， 避免涂改。注意不要连写，字母大小均匀，字母和单词间距适当，字母的上下占格比例协调等。