《2016走向高考》高三英语一轮（外研版）复习课件：写作进行时7.ppt

1、路漫漫其修远兮 吾将上下而求索走向高考 英语外研版 高考总复习写作素能培养第三部分写作进行时(七)看图类作文第三部分技 巧 点 拨习 作 点 评露 一 小 手231技 巧 点 拨习 作 点 评21一、图表作文一、图表作文二、图画作文二、图画作文技 巧 点 拨.写作要点纵观近几年的高考书面表达试题，图表类作文是当今高考英语书面表达的常考题型之一，此类题型要求考生根据数据进行分析与讨论，得出令人信服的结论，或者对这一结论进行评价。A柱状图作为直观形象展示数据变化的手段之一，常常在高考英语书面表达试题中出现。而柱状类议论文要求考生要具备一定的数据分析能力，要能够通过对宽度相等的柱形的高度的比较来判断

2、事物的动态发展趋势。B英语曲线图作文实际是一篇“解说词”，即通过曲线图提供的信息，分析图中数据，综合推断出文章的主题。C解答此类试题时，要认真观察坐标系信息，抓住变化趋势，结合提供的时间和数据参照寻求切入点。然后根据变化过程，尽可能利用所给的文字信息进行分类、比较、总结。另外，写作过程中不必要将图中全部数据信息加以描述，只需将典型内容加以分析。.写作模板As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture，_has been on rise/decrease,significantly/dramatically rising/dec

3、reasing from_in_to_in_.From the sharp rise/decline in the chart,it goes without saying that_.There are at least two good reasons accounting for_.On(the)one hand，_.On the other hand，_is due to the fact that_.In addition，_is responsible for_.Maybe there are some other reasons to show_.But it is genera

4、lly believed that the reasons mentioned above are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned,I hold the point of view that_.Iam sure my opinion is both sound and wellgrounded.习 作 点 评The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 10,000 yuan per year in 2001 to 23,000 yuan in 2013.In

5、 the meantime,the structure of the average family expenses has beenchanged,too.【此处应该使用现在完成时的主动形式has changed。】These graphs show the change clearly.The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing.In 2001,the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing.In 2013,expenses on housin

6、g rose to 42 percent.【在该句前应该使用While表示前后两种情况的对比。】技 巧 点 拨.写作要点图画作文一般可以分三段来描述。第一段用来描述图画并揭示其寓意(寓意一般用一句话来概括就可以)，第二段分析原因，最后一段发表评论或提出建议，其中第二、三段应该是写作的重点。具体来说，应注意以下几点：1看清图画的标题。2仔细观察图画，弄清画面的含义，抓住画面的主题。3仔细品味图画的语言文字，认真思考其中所隐含的观点。4根据画面内容，进行合理想象。5认真安排内容，布局谋篇。.常用句式1开头Look at the picture/The picture shows that./Fro

7、m the picture,we can see./As is shown in the picture./As is seen in the picture./As is described in the picture./The purpose of the picture is to show us that./The picture indicates/conveys the meaning that.2衔接句As we all know，./As is known to all./In my opinion，./As far as I am concerned，./This sigh

8、t reminds me of something in my daily life.3结尾句In conclusion，./In brief，./On the whole，./In short，./In a word，./Generally speaking，./As has been stated，.习 作 点 评In the cartoon,we can see a man make a phone call is driving his car crazily past two people.【make a phone call作a man的定语，应用making。】At the si

9、ght of the scene,one of them said he didthe same thing as the driver before.【此处应该使用过去完成时had done。】Obviously,the badly injured man felt very sorrowand regret about what he had done.【此处应该分别使用形容词形式“sorrowful and regretful”。】What the cartoon implies is that we should never neglect the traffic safety rul

10、es，and we would regret all the life.【此处要用or表示转折关系。】On seeing the cartoon，I cant help remind people to observe the traffic rules strictly.【此处要用cant help doing这一短语结构表示“情不自禁”。】For one thing,it concerns the safety and happiness of all the people,either you are a driver or a pedestrian.【此处要用whether.or.连接状语从句。】For another,we should enforce the punishment to the trafficrulebreakers,makethem fully understand the great value of observing the rules.【此处用现在分词短语making.作目的状语。】露 一 小 手（点此链接）