1、Section Writing Unit 5 First aid急救说明文体感知1文体特点(1)急救说明:把某一意外事故的急救方法介绍给读者,使读者了解这一方法的具体操作步骤。(2)明确文章结构:首先明确具体的事故,其次以事实为依据给出正确、科学的具有可操作性的急救措施。2亮点句式We should check whether the person can breathe or not.Use the mouthtomouth method within five minutes.Lay the patient down on a coat or sleeping bag if possibl
2、e.Cover the wound with a bandage or a piece of dry clean cloth.Dont try to move the person unless he is in danger.Dont give the person anything to eat or drink.3写作模板In our daily life,we sometimes _ or some othersevere illness.The following are some tips/suggestions we can follow to help these people
3、 on urgent occasions.Firstly,you must _.Dont _.Secondly,pay attention to _.If necessary,_.Thirdly,_.Finally,stay with the injured person and comfort him until the arrival of the police and ambulance.写作要求假设你是李华,你们学校的英语网站正面向全校学生征集有关急救常识的英文稿件。请你给该网站投稿,介绍交通事故方面的急救常识。内容包括:1首先保持镇静;2检查伤者呼吸情况,呼吸困难要实施人工呼吸;3如
4、伤者有出血情况要用布按压止血,然后等候救护车及警察的帮助。注意:1可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2词数 100 左右。审题谋篇体裁说明文话题急救知识时态一般现在时人称第二人称结构首段:对需要说明的对象作总的概括介绍:主体部分,具体说明respondassistancewoundcheck outpay attention to词汇推敲1反应 vi._2帮助 n._3伤口 n._4核实_5注意_Knowing how to respondmake a big differencePay attention tohaving trouble遣词造句1 完成句子知道如何正确地应对起着重要的作用。_
5、 properly can _注意此人的呼吸情况,尤其要关注他呼吸是否困难。_ the persons breathing,especially if he is _ getting his breath.If necessarycomfort him until the arrival of如果有必要的话,要实施人工呼吸进行紧急救助。_,use the mouthtomouth technique to give immediate assistance.最后,一直陪着伤者,安慰他直到救护车及警察的到来。Finally,stay with the injured person and _ t
6、he police and ambulance.Here are some rules that you can follow.It is knowing how to respond properly that2句式升级Here are some rules.You can follow these rules.(用定语从句合并句子)_ Knowing how to respond properly can make a big difference.(把该句转换成强调句)_ can make a big difference.妙笔成篇_One possible version:First
7、Aid for AccidentsIf you happen to witness an accident,what should you do to save other peoples lives?Knowing how to respond properly can make a big difference.Here are some rules that you can follow.Firstly,you must stay calm and call the police and an ambulance.Speak to the person to find out as mu
8、ch as you can about his injuries.Next,pay attention to the persons breathing,especially if he is having trouble getting his breath.If necessary,use the mouth-to-mouth technique to give immediate assistance.Besides,if the injured person is bleeding,press a clean towel or cloth onto his wound.Finally,
9、stay with the injured person and comfort him until the arrival of the police and ambulance.你校英语网站将开辟“急救知识介绍”专栏。请你根据所给提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍被狗咬伤后如何实施急救,然后发表在该网站上。1若伤口流血,不要止血;2五分钟后,若流血不止,拨打求救电话。若不再流血,用肥皂水冲洗伤口约五分钟;3给伤口消毒(disinfect);4如有必要,注射狂犬疫苗(rabies vaccine)。注意:1词数 100 左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_One possible versi
10、on:Dog bites are common in our daily life.They will cause pain,swelling or bleeding.Whats worse,the victims may get infected.However,knowing some first aid knowledge can make a big difference.The steps are as follows.First of all,dont be afraid to let the wound bleed unless youve lost a lot of blood
11、.The flow of blood out of the wound will help to clean it.After five minutes,see if you can stop the bleeding through direct pressure.If it doesnt stop,call foremergency help.If it does stop,clean the wound under running water with mild soap for five minutes.Then disinfect the wound thoroughly.Finally,if necessary,get a rabies vaccine.本部分内容讲解结束 按ESC键退出全屏播放