1、读后续写微写作情感描写之“悲伤”“沮丧”和“孤独”素材积累必备单词形容词:alone, sorrowful, sad, depressed, frustrated, lonely, upset, depressing, 副词:sadly, 名词:sorrow, loneliness, sadness, depression高级词块1.a sense/wave of loneliness/sadness 一阵孤独/悲伤2be numb with sorrow/sadness 难过得麻木3fall into despair陷入绝望4with a heavy heart怀着沉重的心情素材运用第一步按
2、要求完成下列句子。1教室里的每个人都在愉快地聊天,而简却一个人坐在那里不知所措。 Everyone in the classroom was chatting happily, while Jane sat alone , at a loss.(利用对比的修辞手法凸显简的落寞)2悲伤和孤独的气氛笼罩着她。 An air of sorrow and loneliness settled over her. 3简感到被冷落,孤独使她感到绝望。 Feeling left out, Jane got desperate with loneliness .(动词-ing短语作状语)4她从学校慢慢地骑车回
3、家,心里难过得麻木了。She rode home from school slowly, numb with sorrow .5她把自己锁在房间里,沉浸在悲痛之中。She locked herself in her room, abandoning herself to great sadness .(动词-ing短语作状语)6她很伤心,不知不觉地哭了,眼泪止不住。 She felt so sad that she found herself weeping , unable to hold back her tears.(形容词)第二步将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵,注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇
4、。参考范文:Everyone in the classroom was chatting happily, while Jane sat alone, at a loss.An air of sorrow and loneliness settled over her.Feeling left out, Jane got desperate with loneliness.She rode home from school slowly, numb with sorrow.Then she locked herself in her room, abandoning herself to great sadness.She felt so sad that she found herself weeping, unable to hold back her tears.