1、Unit 1 FriendshipSection Writing建议信文体感知建议信是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告的一种文体。写信时要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由，提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要委婉和缓。增分佳句1常用的开头语I know you are now having trouble communicating with others，and you may often feel lonely.我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独。Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ho
2、w to learn Chinese well.很高兴收到你的来信，询问我关于学好汉语的意见。Turn to me whenever you feel puzzled，and I am more than willing to give you some more advice.当你困惑的时候就来找我吧，我很乐意给你一些更多的建议。Here are some tips to help you./Here are a few suggestions to help you.这里有能帮助你的一些建议。2主体部分常用表达First(ly)，why not join a club？If you do
3、this，you can make friends.首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。Second(ly)，you should/can try to talk with others.Then/That way，you will feel better.其次，你应该尽力与人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。Third(ly)，it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music.By doing this，you will calm yourself down.第三，如果你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意
4、。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。Last but not least，you should talk with her first.最后但同样重要的是，你应该先和她谈一谈。3常用的结束语I hope you will find these ideas useful.希望你会发现这些办法有用。As time goes on，people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above.如果你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加理解你，会愿意和你交朋友的。I bel
5、ieve you can try to overcome these difficulties only by working hard.我相信，通过努力，你会克服这些困难的。写作模板Dear _，Im glad to know that you ask me for some advice on _(引出问题)Here are some useful tips.First，learn to calm yourself down when facing _.You dont have to _.Second，it is very important to _.Then，it also help
6、s to _Besides，it should be a good idea to _You can also _(此三句用不同句式提出建议)Only in this way can you do it better.(倒装句提升句式)As to _，I suggest _(有时根据需要具体到某一方面)In addition，_(其他建议)Im sure _(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心)I hope you will find my advice helpful._(祈使句)，and you will be _(好的结果)Best wishes!Yours，Li Ming写作要求(20
7、19大连高一检测)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Jim 所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条路线可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim 来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1你建议的路线；2你的理由；3你的祝愿。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Jim，_Yours，Li Hua审题谋篇词汇推敲1推荐_2此外_3景色_4令人惊异的_5选择_recommendmoreoversceneryamazingchoice 遣词造句1.完成句子长江是中国最长的河流，并且是中华文明的母亲河之一。_我更喜欢沿着长江旅行。_沿江景色令人惊叹。_沿江有很多
8、著名景点。_The Yangtze River is the longest river and one of the mother rivers of the Chinese civilization.I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River.The scenery along the river is amazing.There are many wellknown sightseeing spots along the river.2句式升级用同位语结构连接句_用 with 结构连接句_I prefer the tour along the Ya
9、ngtze River，the longest river and one of the mother rivers of the Chinese civilization.The scenery along the river is amazing，with many well-known sightseeing spots.妙笔成篇_One possible version：Dear Jim，Im happy to receive your letter and know youre coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River
10、 and Mount Tai，both are highly recommended.Personally，I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River，the longest river and one of the mother rivers of the Chinese civilization.You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people.Moreover，the scenery along the river is amazing，with many wellk
11、nown sightseeing spots.Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze River is a better choice.Hope youll have a good time in China.Yours，Li Hua假设你是李华，最近你的英国笔友杰克刚刚转入一所新学校。由于他性格内向，不擅长交朋友，所以他感到非常孤独，写信向你求助。请你给他回一封信。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。Dear Jack，Im sorry to hear that you are lonely in your ne
12、w school._Yours，Li HuaOne possible version：Dear Jack，Im sorry to hear that you are lonely in your new school.However，the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.First of all，dont be too worried.Everyone may have such bad times when they move to a new environment.Second，you should greet you
13、r teachers and classmates when meeting them on campus.It is always easier to make new friends when you show your friendliness first.Third，it would be a good idea if you often take an active part in class activities，which is a good way for others to learn about you.I hope you will find my suggestions helpful and begin to make new friends as soon as possible.Yours，Li Hua按ESC键退出全屏播放本部分内容讲解结束