1、写作素养提升练Module 9 Great inventions本模块以“伟大的发明”为话题,使同学们更多地了解关于发明的历史。要求学生能够介绍一种发明或谈论某些发明对我们的生活造成的影响。invent,invention,technology,computer,introduction,information,development,useful,important,properly,advantage,disadvantage,influence,change单 词:history of.,be invented by,be used for/to/in,in ones daily lif
2、e,play an important role in,notonly.but also,on the one hand,on the other hand短 语:1.With the invention of the computer and electronictechnology,it is easy to get information on the Internet.2.The Internet is more powerful than books.3.It plays an important role in our daily life.4.Every coin has two
3、 sides.5.In my opinion,we shouldnt use WeChat for too long.句 型:上周你们班举行了一场“初中生使用微信的利与弊”的主题班会,同学们各抒己见。请你根据表格内容,以“The opinion of using WeChat”为题写一篇英语短文,说明使用微信的利弊并谈谈自己的看法。不少于 80 词。利 弊 提供交流的平台 过度沉溺,影响学习 认识更多的朋友 交友不慎,容易受骗 学习更多的知识 长期玩耍,影响视力 要求:1.文章必须包括所提示的内容,可适当发挥,不要直译。2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:platform(平台),affe
4、ct(影响),trick(欺骗),eyesight(视力)The opinion of using WeChatLast week,we had a discussion about using WeChat.Here are the results._1.体裁:议论文2.人称:第一人称和第三人称3.时态:一般现在时【审题指导】【思路构建】The opinion of using WeChatLast week,we had a discussion about using WeChat.Here are the results.Some students think WeChat is a
5、very useful tool.Itcan provide a platform to communicate with their friends.Besides,they can make more friends and learn moreknowledge by WeChat.【范文赏析】However,some students think WeChat will affecttheir study if they spend too much time using it.And theymay be tricked by strange net friends.Last but
6、 notleast,using WeChat for a long time will also do harm totheir eyesight.In my opinion,we can use WeChat properly.But weshouldnt use it for too long.In addition,never addstrangers casually or meet net friends without our parentspermission.点评:本文行文流畅,要点齐全,是一篇值得学习的佳作。其中用动词不定式表目的,communicate with为常用典型短
7、语,体现了微信的功能。make more friends and learn more knowledge诠释了微信的作用。Last but not least和In addition起到了递进的作用,使文章有层次感。网络的发明有利也有弊,请你根据以下提示写一篇80 词左右的短文。优点:1.快速获得大量的信息;2.正确运用网络有助于学习;3.广交朋友。缺点:1.上网打游戏聊天,浪费时间,不利于学习;2.可能上当受骗。你的看法和做法_Today many students are interested in goingonline.But it has both advantages and d
8、isadvantages.Firstly,it allows us to get a lot of informationquickly.And its a useful learning tool if we can use itproperly.Whats more,it can help us make morefriends online._However,every coin has two sides.Playing onlinegames and chatting online can waste our time andmoney.And they are not good for our study.Sometimeswe can even be cheated when we go online.I think going online is good for me.I plan to goonline for an hour every day.We can use the Internet to_broaden our minds and get more knowledge,but wemust use it properly.