1、广州市2016高考英语二轮短文改错精练（2）及答案短文改错Dear Ralph,Im a newcomer here of a small town. I would 1. _describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, 2. _it seems always difficult for me to do things well as 3. _them. Im sure they will laugh to me and see me as 4. _a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. 5
2、. _Besides, I have few friends. I dont know that they 6. _dont like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other 7. _very well in class, but after class we become stranger at 8. _once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesnt 9. _seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should d
3、o? 10. _Yours,Xiao Wei答案及解析1. of改为from。of表示所属意义， 此处应为“来自一个小城镇”。2. quietly改为quiet。describe后接名词或代词+ as +名词或形容词， 其中as +名词或形容词作宾语补足语， 表示“把描写成什么/什么样子”。3. well前加as。as well as“跟(做得)一样好”。4. to改为at。laugh to.意为“对大笑”。laugh at.意为“嘲笑”， 有明显的、 有意的敌意的含义， 根据后文and see me as a fool， 故应用laugh at才对。5. 此行无错误。6. that改为why
4、。that引导宾语从句， 本身无意义， 只起连接作用。7. talked改为talk。整篇文章叙述的都是现在的情况。改为现在时， 使其与上下文一致。 8. stranger改为strangers。与句子主语we一致。9. since改为but。根据上下文， 前后句之间为转折关系。 10. 删除about。tell的结构为：tell sb. sth. “告诉某人某事”， 表示直接意义； tell sb. about sth. “告诉某人有关某事的某些内容”， 表示间接意义。第一节：短文改错(共10小题)假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有十处语言错误，要求你在
5、错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个词。增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改十处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The y
6、oung man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldnt move. The young man didnt know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital a
7、t once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast. 参考答案、 短文改错(共10小题)I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebrahappen 去掉tocrossing while a young m
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10、opean brought the idea with them. Soon77. coffee became the leading drink. Today people in United78. States drink more coffee than people in any country. 79. People who drink coffee at breakfast, at lunch, and80. between meals. They drink them at work and at home. 81. Coffee is drunk by people aroun
11、d the world. Some82. people like coffee what is very black and very strong. 83. Another people like coffee with cream or sugar, or, cream84. and sugar with it. Now coffee has become a world-wide drink. 85. (四)76anywhere everywhere 77.European Europe 78. in the 79. any other 80. 去掉who 81.them it 82.
12、83.what that/which 84. Another Other 85.with in【重庆南开中学高】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 请对标有题号的每一行作出判断，每一行只有一个错误，按下列情况改下。此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。Dear Mrs. Smith,I appreciate your help very well. On the first
13、 day of 76 the camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone.77 After that, you always gave me specially attention and78 inspired me to join in activity. As a result, I gradually79 got to know other campers. Because the help you gave me80 that summer, my .life changed. I gain so much confide
14、nce that81 I went back to school as new person. My grades improved. I 82 became active but made new friends. Yesterday, I got a letter83 that was said I was admitted to a college. I am proud of it. I just84 want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.85 Yours Bob 改错76well改为much77mys
15、elf改为me 78specially改为special79activity改为activities/在activity前面加the80because的后面加of81gain改为gained82new前面加a83but改为and84去掉was85becoming改为become短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误
16、及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Dear John, I am extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party on this Sunday. It is very kind for you to invite me to your house and I really look forward to going to your party and share your happy experience abroad. Many to my regret, I will
17、be absent from your party owing to the fact that the College Entrance Exam is just around corner, for which I am now really busy preparing. Whats more, I have caught a bad cold lately and I was really not myself. Anyway, we will have many more chances to get together. Shall we make it after the Exam
18、? I am true sorry. I hope you will forgive me and receive my sincere apologies. I look forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li Hua答案解析-短文改错Dear John, I am extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party on this Sunday. It is very kind for you to invite me to your house and I really l
19、ook forward to ofgoing to your party and share your happy experience abroad. Many to my regret, Isharing experiences Muchwill be absent from your party owing to the fact that the College Entrance Exam is just around corner, for which I am now really busy preparing. theWhats more, I have caught a bad cold lately and I was really not myself. worse am Anyway, we will have many more chances to get together. Shall we make it after the Exam? I am true sorry. I hope you will forgive me and receive my sincere apologies. I truly acceptlook forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li Hua