1、第二讲如何写好正文和结尾(对应学生用书第97页)一、发表看法1写作步骤：发表观点阐述理由或论据总结、重申观点。2注意事项：(1)做这种题型，发表观点或看法后不要马上结束，一般都要说出你持这种观点或看法的理由，否则，文段就没有说服力。(2)列出理由时不一定要直接说because，可以间接地陈述，要不露痕迹地说出理由，因为这是在写作，而不是在回答简答题。3常用句式赞成：I maintain/hold the opinion that.我持观点。I am in favour of the idea that.我赞成这个想法。I strongly approve of the idea/view/po
2、sition/brief/point that.我强烈地赞成I firmly support the idea/practice that.我坚定地支持这个想法/做法。From my point of view/From my personal perspective/From my personal angle alone/As far as I am concerned，I prefer.就我而言，我赞成The opinion is both sound and reasonable.这个想法合情合理。From my personal perspective，understanding p
3、lays an important role in our daily life.在我看来，理解在日常生活中扮演着重要角色。As far as I am concerned，its essential for people to care about others.在我看来，关心他人是非常重要的。反对：I am opposed to the idea that.我反对这个想法。I strongly oppose/object to/argue against the idea/view/position/brief/point that.我强烈地反对这个观点。I am against the
4、idea/view/position/brief/point that.我反对To some extent/In a way/In a sense，I am in favour of the authors view，but.从某种程度上来说，我赞成作者的想法，但是二、陈述经历1写作步骤：引出经历叙述经历发表看法、谈感受2注意事项：此类题型一般都要求学生“用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事”对某一现象进行议论或发表看法。3常用句式：The story reminds me of my own experience.这个故事让我想起了自己的经历。The experience of my friend
5、serves as a good example.我朋友的经历能作为一个很好的例子。There is no illustration better that my friends experience.没有比我朋友的经历更好的例子。My own experience can best illustrate the importance of honesty.我的亲身经历能很好地说明诚信的重要性。It occurred to me that I had a similar experience.我突然想起我有一次相似的经历。I can well remember that there was a
6、 time when.我很清楚记得曾经有一次From this experience，I benefit a lot and realize that.从这次经历，我获益良多，意识到了三、如何写好主题句学会写主题句是谋篇的第一步。近三年来，高考的读写任务都是三个要点，建议将三个要点依次设为三段，每段写一个主题句，放在段首，然后再围绕主题句适当展开。这样可使写作内容一目了然，既可避免写作时出现走题或偏题，又方便阅卷老师落实要点是否齐全。写主题句的方法有：1直接回答。如：你认为好老师应该具有什么样的好品质。In my eyes，a good teacher should treat his stu
7、dents fairly as well as make the class lively and interesting.2复述内容。如：中学生活和大学生活的差别。From my point of view，college life will be different from the life in high school.3明示观点。如：你对学校拆掉图书馆的看法。Personally，I strongly believe we should preserve this old school library.4引出经历。如：根据你的个人学习经历简述你独自学习或与他人合作学习的理由。Actu
8、ally，my experience tells me that cooperative learning is more beneficial to me.四、如何写好结论句1重申观点或概括内容用简洁的语言概括各项写作内容，重申观点，起画龙点睛的作用。如：All in all，it is the love and education from school rather than suspensions that improve students behavior.总而言之，改善学生行为的是爱与教育而不是停课。常用句型：To sum up/In short/In conclusion/In
9、a word/All in all.总之Taking all the factors into account，we can draw a conclusion that.考虑到以上因素，我们可以得出这样的结论From the discussion above，it can be safely concluded that.根据以上讨论，可以得出如下结论2提出建议或进行呼吁若是反映社会现象或某种行为的文章，学生可对此提出积极的呼吁，提出建议或解决办法等。如：Therefore，it is suggested that you should make friends with people ha
10、ving different genders，characteristics or backgrounds.因此，建议你应当与不同性别、性格以及背景的人结交朋友。常用句型：In conclusion，its high time that.总之，是的时候了。To conclude，it makes sense.to.结论是，才是明智的。To summarize，emphasis should be placed on.总之，应当重视3强调重要性有些观点提出后需要进一步强化以此加强论证观点。如：To sum up，environmental protection is of great impor
11、tance，which can make us live more comfortably and more healthily.总之，环境保护非常重要，这会使我们生活得更舒适、更健康。常用句型：To be brief，we should be aware of the importance of.总之，我们应当明白的重要性。Therefore，it is necessary for us to.因此，我们有必要Only in this way.，can we.只有用这种方法，我们才能A(2017无锡高三一模)请阅读下面短文，并按要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。China has allo
12、wed all couples to have two children，abandoning its decadeslong onechild policy.The change of policy is intended to balance population development and address the challenge of an aging population.With reference to the new policy，some singlechild parents cant wait to welcome new babies.However，many f
13、actors considered，some feel a dilemma associated with their decision to have one more child.For one thing，it seems beneficial as there are no other children in the family for the only child to associate with，and this may lead to the child feeling lonely at times，especially during vacations.For anoth
14、er，a common argument against having just one child is that an only child may be more spoiled than one with brothers or sisters.Many people believe that a singlechild wont have to learn to negotiate with others，and respect the giveandtake involved in many relationships.Some think this may leave the c
15、hild less able to interact well with people of his or her own age than one who has been raised with brothers or sisters.However，the pressure of giving time and energy to a second child can seem too great，particularly for those with busy careers，resulting in them selecting to have no more children.Fo
16、r some other parents，the financial burden of having a second child may be the prime consideration.写作内容1以约30个词概括短文内容；2用120个单词就“一个家庭是否应该有两个孩子”这一主题发表你的看法，内容包括以下要点：(1)你是否赞成二孩政策，并用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法；(2)谈谈你自己作为独生子女或有兄弟姐妹的体会。写作要求1写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。参考词汇：sibling 兄弟，
17、姐妹_【参考范文】China has issued the twochild policy aiming to solve the social problems of an aging population and labor shortages due to the current low birth rate.Peoples responses vary，anyway.Personally，Im in favor of the policy.In the long term，an increase in the number of children can have a positive
18、 impact on the consumption of products and services catering for child rearing，thus leading to growth and employment demand in industries.Moreover，having siblings protects adolescents against negative feelings such as loneliness，fear and selfconsciousness.Provided that a child has siblings，he can le
19、arn to share.As the only child in my family，I often feel lonely.With nobody to communicate with，I become introverted and dare not speak in public.However，with siblings，children can be independent and selfless.Furthermore，children are less likely to be spoiled.B【导学号：25874041】(2017扬、泰、通、淮、宿、徐高三二模)请阅读下
20、面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。The news that Li Tiejun，a father in the southwestern city of Luzhou，had his nineyearold daughter drop out of school and homeschooled her for 11 years has aroused heated discussions online.It is reported that about 18，000 Chinese children are educated at home.With more parent
21、s and education experts dissatisfied with the current system，do you support homeschooling for your child? Below are the selections of the opinions from the netizens.SenecaLi is a hero.But at the same time，it has to be pointed out that he was and is not the ideal teacher for his daughter.She cant pos
22、sibly learn about physics，chemistry and biology from an elderly man with no formal higher education.I wish his daughter all the success in life that she may wish to have.nit666I was homeschooled until I was about 12.In Australia，we have a remote school option for people who live away from the cities
23、.We were taught through mail.I would say that you can learn as much knowledge as people in a school.My life was much happier without the kind of academic pressure.写作内容1用约30个单词写出上文概要；2用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：(1)支持或反对家长自己在家教孩子的做法；(2)用23个理由或论据支撑你的观点。写作要求1写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言
24、规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。_【参考范文1】With the availability of educational resources，homeschooling is an option that is becoming more and more attractive to parents nowadays.However，some people support it while others do not.I am strongly against this practice.Homeschooling is not allowed in our country because it i
25、s compulsory for parents to send their kids to schools for an allround education.In addition，the biggest drawback of homeschooling is a lack of interaction with others.The social experiences at school are very essential to enable a child to fit into the competitive society.Homeschooled children may
26、lose many chances to compete with their peers.Whats worse，learning outside a school environment can consume a lot of Moms or Dads time，which can be a big challenge for families to balance their budget.In short，it is necessary that children should be sent to public or private schools for formal schoo
27、ling.【参考范文2】With the availability of educational resources，homeschooling is an option that is becoming more and more attractive to parents nowadays.However，some people support it while others do not.I support homeschooling.In some cases，a few children have no access to education due to locations or
28、physical disabilities，and homeschooling can fulfill their dream of receiving education.With homeschooling，parents and their children can work out a schedule that suits them best.Thus，they enjoy more freedom and autonomy in their learning.Last but not least，while homeschooling，parents can focus on th
29、e improvement of their childrens various abilities which are badly needed in the competitive society.At the same time，they can help children learn and complete the basic requirements needed to pass tests.In short，with proper guidance and discipline，homeschooling will provide an ideal education desig
30、ned just for the children themselves.C(2017盐城市高三三模)请阅读下面图文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Each week，we provide a cartoon in need of a caption.You，the reader，submit a caption，we choose three finalists，and you vote for your favorite.Caption submissions for this weeks cartoon，by Paul Noth，must be received by Sun
31、day，March 22nd.The finalists in the March 9th contest appear below.We will announce the winner，and the finalists in this weeks contest，in the April 6th issue.The winner receives a signed print of the cartoon.Any resident of the United States，Canada(except Quebec)，Australia，the United Kingdom，or the
32、Republic of Ireland age eighteen or over can enter or vote.To do so，and to read the complete rules，visit contest，.(THE NEW YORKER，March 23)THE FINALISTS “This looks like a good place to set up camp.”Andrew Vuilleumier，New York City“This town isnt big enough for anyone.”Ilan Moskowitz，Tenafly，N.J.“Ar
33、e you sure he said high tide？”Alison Green，New York CityTHIS WEEKS COMPETITION“_”写作内容1用约30个单词概述大赛的主要内容；2从左侧漫画下方三则图片配词中选出你最喜欢的一句，并说明理由；3简述你对右侧漫画的理解，并为之写一句图片配词。写作要求1写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。_【参考范文】The New Yorker has started a cartoon caption competition，in which
34、 it picks out three finalists.Those who want to enter it or vote can obtain more information from its website.When it comes to this weeks finalists，Id like to show a preference for Andrews.There exists great humour in his caption，which makes a joke about the limited space the man in the cartoon can
35、find.Meanwhile，the sharp contrast between the mans intention to camp and the harsh reality accurately reflects the mass human destruction of nature.The caption writer has expressed his concern about the environmental problems in a smart way.This weeks cartoon is rather interesting.A caged bird has aroused much curiosity among others living in nature.Personally，I will caption the cartoon “Look，we have a pet！” because I really believe we should be friends with animals rather than keeping them as pets.