1、第四讲增添细节，锦上添花在英语书面表达中，增加细节内容的描述是必不可少的。在信息提纲类写作中，考生一定不能简单地翻译或者仅仅完成所给条目的指定内容；在看图作文中更不能只是轻描淡写图片内容，否则很有可能造成内容不充实、词数要求不达标或者结构不连贯等问题。适当增加细节内容，能够使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。1. (2018年全国卷书面表达)另外，你最好带一些小礼物。Besides, youd better bring some little gifts.Besides, youd better bring some little gifts, such as a special food
2、or drink from your country2我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example，we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, refuse to use singleuse p
3、roducts, plant more trees and save water and energy3我要花一些时间和父母在一起。Ill spend some time staying with my parents.Ill spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework4我是一个充满活力的健康男孩，我非常喜欢体育运动。I am a healthy boy full of energy so I like sports very much.I am a healthy b
4、oy full of energy so I like sports very much, especially outdoor activities. Whenever I have time, Ill go hiking or mountain climbing with my classmates5我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。Id like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.Id like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling jus
5、t like me. If possible，we can travel together or share traveling experiences技能二增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容1. (2018年全国卷书面表达)它讲述了一所学校的发展历程。It tells the story of a school growing up.It tells the story of a school growing up, from small to large, from weak to strong. (背景渲染)2我有时去村西的小河游泳。I went swimming
6、 in the river of the west of the village now and then.Weather permitting, I went swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then. (相关背景)3旅行了一周后，他回到了家。After a weeks trip, he returned home.After a weeks trip, he returned home, tired but very happy. (心理描写)技能三增加相关信息的时间、地点等内容1. (2018年全国卷书面表
7、达)欢迎任何对这部电影感兴趣的人来学校报告厅观看。Anyone who shows interest in the film is welcome to schools lecture hall to enjoy it.Anyone who shows interest in the film is welcome to schools lecture hall, located on the first floor of the third teaching building, to enjoy it. (增加地点)2我被这个城市的美丽所吸引。I was attracted by the b
8、eauty of the city.I was attracted by the beauty of the city as soon as I arrived here at 6 oclock in the morning by plane. (增加时间)技能四适当增加与所给信息相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容1假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry最近来信询问你高考后的暑假安排。请根据下面要点写一封回信，说明你的计划，并简述理由。休息；读书；参加社会活动(1)I need a good rest. Ill do some reading.I need a good rest b
9、ecause I do feel tired after the hard work of all these yearsOf course, Ill do some reading for fun, and for knowledge as well. (因果关系)(2)Ill take part in some social activities.If I have free time, Ill take part in some social activities. (条件状语)If possible, Ill take part in some social activities. (
10、条件状语)Ill take part in some social activities so that/in order that I can know more about the society. (目的状语)2Tracy来电话说在咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)的见面取消了。Tracy called，saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee.Tracy called，saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee as she has something important
11、 to do. (原因状语)3我也帮助邻里的孩子补习英语。I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons.I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons. To my joy, they made rapid progress and their parents thought highly of me. (增添结果)技能五结尾适当发挥，写出个人感受、评价、希望、愿景、倡议等1. (2018年全国卷书面表达)Im
12、 looking forward to your arrival and joining me in experiencing it in the near future. (希望)2Although I was very tired this summer holiday，I felt very happy for what I did. (个人感受)3I think such activities are necessary and meaningful. (评价)4As a student，its our duty to protect our school environment an
13、d make it clean. (倡议)即学即练.按要求对下列句子进行扩充1每天要努力学习，为每一次考试做出仔细的计划。(增加条件状语)Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam._.答案：If we are prepared, we will not feel worried2复旦大学位于上海。(增加which引导的非限制性定语从句)Fudan University is located in Shanghai, _.答案：which is an international city where I can get
14、a lot of knowledge and experience3不管我将面对什么样的困难，我都不会屈服。(增加目的状语)_，whatever challenge I will face, I will never give in.答案：To realize my dream4我们应该学会如何与他人相处。(增加具体实例进行补充说明)We should learn how to get along well with others. _答案：For example，we should respect teachers and be friendly to our classmates5一些学生
15、非常担心考试以至于晚上无法入睡。(增加结果状语)Some students are so worried about exams that they cant fall asleep at night._答案：As a result, they feel sleepy in the day time and cant concentrate in class.请为下面的短文适当增加细节Dear Sam，The College Entrance Examination lasts for two days. The examinees are tested on Chinese，math，sci
16、ence and arts. We are physically and mentally stressed during the examination and the questions are difficult and complex._Yours，Li HuaOne possible version：Dear Sam，Thank you for your concern. Now Ill tell you something about the onceayear College Entrance Examination.There is no doubt that the exam
17、ination is very important. It lasts for two days from June 7th to 8th. The examinees are tested on Chinese and math on the first day. The science and arts are tested on the second day. We are physically and mentally stressed during the examination and the questions are difficult and complex. But we are full of confidence because we are well prepared. We all believe that the fruits of our efforts will be sweet.Yours，Li Hua