1、高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家书面表达得分在1119分之间的学生的写作特点：1.只使用简单的词或短语； 2.句式单一，单句较多； 3.缺乏承上启下的词语和句子； 4.不会使用从句； 5.不会正确运用谓语动词或短语； 6.不会使用倒装和强调句型。高考书面表达侧重考查考生的语言运用能力，这就要求考生能够正确运用高级的词汇和语法结构并能够熟练运用句与句之间的连接成分以使行文流畅。因此，在平时的写作训练中，要学会恰当地运用高级句式和过渡语，使文章“闪亮登场”。第一讲学会运用高级词汇英语书面表达第五档作文中提到：语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。换句话说，如果考生使
2、用高级词汇或句型，即使犯了少量或轻微的语言错误，也可不扣分，文章还是属于最高档次。因此，为了让文章档次高，首先要学会使用高级词汇。高级词汇的使用能够给文章增添色彩和画面感。它会大大提升文章的档次，从而帮助考生获得高分。要做到准确使用高级词汇，应该注意以下几个方面：一、使用亮点词汇的4种策略写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。(2019年北京卷书面表达)Im very glad to know that youre coming to tour in China.Im more than delighted to know that youre comin
3、g to tour in China.(2019年全国卷书面表达)I hope you can consider my application and allow me to be a volunteer.I hope you can take my application into consideration and allow me to be a volunteer.(2019年全国卷书面表达)So I can serve as a volunteer to show the visitors around the gallery and I am sure that I am fit
4、for the job. So I can serve as a volunteer to show the visitors around the gallery and I am convinced that I am qualified for the job. (2019年全国卷书面表达)As a result, enough preparation is urgently needed, including practice, nutrition and a perfect plan.As a consequence, adequate preparation is urgently
5、 needed, including practice, nutrition and a perfect plan.(2019年天津卷书面表达)I want to make my voice heard.I feel an urge to make my voice heard.Only when you do more reading and writing can you succeed in improving your English.Only when you do more reading and writing can you make it in improving your
6、English.To our great joy, not only are our classes lively and appealing, but our school life is also rich and colorful.To our great joy, not only are our classes lively and attractive, but our school life is also rich and colorful.(2018年全国卷书面表达)Great changes have taken place in our school in the las
7、t few years. And the news came that a short film will be shown in our school.Our school has witnessed great changes in the last few years. And word came that a short film will be shown in our school.写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。(2018年天津卷书面表达)On hearing the news, some of my cl
8、assmates and I formed a group to take part in the competition. I know you once took part in a robotics competition and won the award, so you must have accumulated much experience in it.On hearing the news, some of my classmates and I formed a group to take part in the competition. I know you once pa
9、rticipated in a robotics competition and won the award, so you must have accumulated much exprience in it.(2018年全国卷书面表达)Moreover, we will build a new stadium and with the stadium built, a wide range of sports events are able to be held.Moreover，we will build a new stadium and with the stadium set up
10、，a wide range of sports events are able to be held.(2017年全国卷书面表达)The team will hold many activities, some of which will appeal to you，including many matches.The team will hold a range of activities，some of which will appeal to you, including many matches.当单词和短语表示同一个意思时，优先使用短语。恰当使用短语，一方面能使文章更加生动，另一方面
11、也能展示出学生扎实的语言功底。(2019年全国卷书面表达)Besides, I know English and I can express myself fluently and clearly, which helps me communicate with our distinguished guests efficiently.Moreover, I have a good command of English and I can express myself fluently and clearly, which helps me communicate with our disti
12、nguished guests efficiently.(2019年全国卷书面表达)For one thing, I know Chinese painting well, for my father is a Chinese painter.For one thing, I am quite familiar with Chinese painting, for my father is a Chinese painter.(2018年天津卷书面表达)We desperately need your help.We are desperately in need of your help.(
13、2018年北京卷书面表达)Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which proved to be extremely rewarding.Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out to be extremely rewarding.为了表现自己的语言功底，显示出
14、自己的写作水平，应避免反复使用低年级学过的简单词汇，尽量用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。(2018年北京卷书面表达)If you take my advice you are sure to have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.So long as you take my advice you are bound to have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.(2017年天津卷书面表达)Secon
15、d，I am trying my best to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.Second, I am sparing no effort to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.(全国卷书面表达)I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.I should mak
16、e an apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.二、写作的顶级装备经典高级词汇及短语第一组名词1机会 chanceopportunity2选择 choicealternative3课程 coursecurriculum4影响 effectinfluence/impact5后果 resultconsequence6缺点 shortcomingdrawback7方法wayapproach8职业jobcareer/employment/profession9老人old peopleth
17、e old/the elderly/the aged/senior citizens10青少年young peopleyoungsters/youths/adolescents 第二组动词及动词短语1看见seecatch sight of2遇见meetcome across3遭遇meet withencounter4拥有havepossess5提高develop/improvepromote6替代replacesubstitute7面对facebe faced with8容忍bearput up with9处理do withdeal with/cope with10决定decidedeterm
18、ine/make up ones mind11考虑considertake into account/consideration12应该shouldbe supposed to13理解understandmake sense of/figure out14使用useemploy/make use of/take advantage of15道歉apologizemake an apology16记住rememberkeep in mind17发生happenoccur/come about18想起think ofoccur to/come up with19感谢thankappreciate2
19、0帮助某人help sb.do sb. a/the favor21节省saveset aside22参观visittour/pay a visit to23分发hand outdistribute24站起来stand upget to ones feet25习惯于be used tobe accustomed to26一定be sure tobe bound to27为做准备prepare formake preparations for/be prepared for28反对be againstobject to29厌烦be bored withbe fed up with/be tired
20、 of30忙于be busy in (with)be occupied in (with)/be buried in/be engaged in31闻名be famous forhave a reputation for32感到舒心feel comfortablefeel at ease33美化学校make our school beautifulbeautify our school34置若罔闻refuse to listen toturn a deaf ear to35成功做某事succeed in doing sth.make it36想做某事want to do sth.seek/in
21、tend/desire to do sth.37照看look afterattend to38尽力做某事try ones best to do sth.spare no effort to do sth.39向某人寻求帮助ask someone for helpturn to sb. for help40我认为I thinkin my opinion/as far as Im concerned第三组形容词1令人惊奇的surprisingamazing/astonishing/shocking2贫穷的poorneedy/povertystricken3优秀的excellentoutstandi
22、ng4明显的obviousapparent/evident5常见的commonuniversal6充足的enoughadequate7勤奋的hardworkingdiligent8可用的usefulavailable9艰难的difficultchallenging10坚强的strongtough11重要的importantvital/significant12不可能的impossibleout of the question13有趣的interestingabsorbing/striking/appealing14小心谨慎的carefulcautious15幸运的luckyfortunate1
23、6巨大的largeenormous17合适的properappropriate18丰富的richabundant19古老的oldancient20唯一的onlyunique21全部的wholeentire22富裕的richwealthy23有意义的meaningfulrewarding24许多的manya large quantity of第四组其他(副词、连词、介词短语、数词)1突然suddenlyall of a sudden2立即 immediatelyin a flash3有时sometimesoccasionally/once in a while/from time to time
24、4另外；况且besidesin addition/whats more/moreover5因此sotherefore6第一；首先 firstto begin/start with7第二；其次 secondin addition/whats more8最终 finallyeventually9但是 buthowever10大多数mostthe majority11许多 a lot ofa large quantity/amount of/endless12种类繁多的 all kinds ofa variety of/varieties of/various13事实上in factas a mat
25、ter of fact/actually14例如for examplefor instance15几天前a few days agothe other day16故意 on purposedeliberately/by design17因为 because ofon account of/due to/owing to/thanks to18总之 in a wordto sum up/in conclusion/in summary19由构成be made up ofconsist of20越来越多more and morean increasing number of21因为becausei
26、n that22一就as soon as从句on/upon动名词23如果ifsuppose/supposing/on condition that24即将到来coming soon around/round the corner即学即练.请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加黑部分1. (2019年全国卷书面表达)Now I will tell you some detailed information to help you fully prepare for it._答案：make full preparations for2. (2019年全国卷书面表达)You are welcome to g
27、ive performances too._答案：as well3. (2018年天津卷书面表达)We were so interested in the competition that we formed a group to take part in it._答案：keen on4. (2018年全国卷书面表达)Im very glad to learn that you are coming in September._答案：more than5. (2017年全国卷书面表达)So，please spend some time taking a brief look at the hi
28、story of the Tang Dynasty, which will help you prepare for your class._答案：Thereforemake preparations for6. (2017年全国卷书面表达)In order to get a better understanding of Tang poetry，I advise you to learn some brief history of the Tang Dynasty in advance._答案：acquire7. (2017年全国卷书面表达)The craftsmen will show v
29、isitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot._答案：various/a range of8. (2017年天津卷书面表达)Firstly，the final exam of this term is coming so I am busy preparing for it._答案：To begin witharound the corner9. (全国卷书面表达)My job application form and personal resume have been prepared and I sincerely h
30、ope you can help me correct them._答案：polish10The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses. _答案：challenging.习作升级练习(2019届山东潍坊高考模拟)假定你是李华，你想邀请你的朋友John周六晚上去看科幻电影The Wandering Earth，请用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1发出邀请；2介绍电影(主题：保护人类共同的地球家园；观众评价等)；3请求回复。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_考生作文D
31、ear John，I know that you are interested in science fiction, so Id like to invite you to see a film this weekend.The Wandering Earth is being shown these days. Its purpose is to save the earth and protect our common home. Viewers describe it as a breakthrough of the Chinese film industry and it has r
32、eceived many positive reviews so far. Shall we go to watch the film if you are free? How about this Saturday evening? Please contact me when you are free so that I can book the tickets ahead of time.Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua我来提升1将文中加黑词汇升级(1)purposeaim(2)manya wide range of(3)freeava
33、ilable(4)when you are freeat your earliest convenience(5)ahead of time in advance2将文中加黑句式升级(1)Knowing that you are interested in science fiction，Id like to invite you to see a film this weekend. (分词作状语)(2)The Wandering Earth is being shown these days, whose aim is to save the earth and protect our c
34、ommon home. (定语从句)_One possible version：Dear John，Knowing that you are interested in science fiction, Id like to invite you to see a film this weekend.The Wandering Earth is being shown these days, whose aim is to save the earth and protect our common home. Viewers describe it as a breakthrough of t
35、he Chinese film industry and it has received a wide range of positive reviews so far. Shall we go to watch the film if you are available? How about this Saturday evening? Please contact me at your earliest convenience so that I can book the tickets in advance.Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua- 10 - 版权所有高考资源网