1、写作素养提升练人教版八年级下 Unit 6 An old man tried to move the mountains.人教版八年级下你曾在小时候常常听妈妈讲女娲补天后羿射日精卫填海神笔马良等美丽的传说吗？你曾读过白雪公主小红帽海的女儿等美妙的童话故事吗？它们会使你想起那些神奇的世界吗？同学们，给大家讲讲那些故事吧！假如你是李梅,请你根据下面所给图画，给大家讲述这一经典故事。Sima Guang hit the tank(缸)play hide-and-seek(捉迷藏),full of waterfall into,be frightened(惊恐的),cry,run for helpth
2、ink over,pick up,throw atbreak,be saved【谋篇布局】理清文章要素，构建文章结构。描述故事发生的场景once;in the backyard;there was.in the yard;water讲述故事发生的经过playing;fall into;be frightened;cry;run for help;think over;pick up;throw at;break;be saved引发感想Do you like the story?What do you think of Sima Guang?【遣词造句】就结构图中的要点和提示写出句子。1.有一
3、次，司马光和几个小孩在后院捉迷藏。Once Sima Guang _in the backyard.2.院里有一个大水缸。缸里盛满了水。There was a large water tank in the yard.It_.was playing hideandseek withseveral childrenwas full of water3.当他们正在玩时，一个小孩不慎掉进了水缸中。When they were playing,one child accidentally_.4.其他孩子惊慌得开始哭喊起来，跑出去求救。Other children _that they started
4、to cry,running for help.fell into the tankwere so frightened5.司马光想了想，然后有了一个主意。他捡起一块 大石头，砸向那个水缸。Sima Guang _and then had an idea.He _ and _.6.缸破了，水流出来了。那个小孩得救了。The tank broke and the water ran out.The child_.thought it overpicked up a big stonethrew it at the water tankwas saved【巧妙衔接】利用连词，使句子意思连贯。本文按
5、照故事发生的时间顺序来展述，利用一般过去时和过去进行时引出故事发生的场景。运用连词when,so.that等交代故事的发展和高潮。运用一系列动作，使故事发生的全过程紧密相连，脉络清晰。【连句成篇】_【精彩范文】Sima Guang hit the tankOnce Sima Guang was playing hide-and-seek with several children in the backyard.There was a large water tank in the yard.It was full of water.When they were playing,one chi
6、ld accidentally fell into the tank.Other children were so frightened that they started to cry,running for help.However,Sima Guangwas different.He thought it over and then had an idea.He picked up a big stone and threw it at the tank.“Bang!”The tank broke and the water ran out.The child was saved.Do
7、you like the story?What do you think of Sima Guang?同学们一定听过守株待兔的故事吧，根据图片和提示，请用英语描述这个故事。注意：80词左右。文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：farmer 农民；field 田地；hare 野兔；hole 洞；hurriedly 匆忙地；knock against 撞上；lazy 懒惰的Once upon a time,_He was so lazy that he couldnt get anything again._Once upon a time，there was a farmer worki
8、ng in his fields.Soon he was very tired.So he sat near a big tree.The sun was very hot,but he was cool under the tree.A hare ran out of a hole.When it saw the farmer,it was very afraid.It ran very quickly.It ran so hurriedly that its head knocked against another tree.It died soon.The farmer was very excited to see it.He picked up the dead hare and_took it home for dinner.He was very happy.From that day on,he no longer went for farming.He stayed by that tree,waiting for hares to come again.But he didnt meet any hares.He was so lazy that he couldnt get anything again.