1、Period SixWritingWriting a letter of advice建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议或忠告。建议可以是写给个人的，就某些问题提出自己的看法或建议；也可以是写给单位或机构的，这类信往往就改进其目前的不合理现状提出建议或忠告。建议信要写出提建议的原因，建议的内容，以及如果被采纳可能会出现的积极结果。提出理由一定要合情合理，语气要委婉。建议信的写作要简明扼要、目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。建议信的写作步骤：首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气要委婉。主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注
2、意不要让别人以为你是在投诉或说教，而不是提建议。结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，展望建议被采纳后的良好结果，要注意礼貌用语，使被建议者容易接受。友情提醒：写作这类题目时，考生要注意不要跑题，因为这类题很有可能写成议论文，如“我认为一二，所以要如何如何”。考生应该时刻记得书信的交际功能，要考虑到收信人的感受。在给对方提建议时应该不时地说到I和you，要让人时刻感受到这是一种交流。1我写信的目的是Im writing to./I am writing with the intention of./I am writing intending to.2很遗憾我听说/我知道你在方面有困难Im sorry
3、 to hear/know that you have some difficulty/trouble/problems with sth./in doing sth.3我的建议是：(1)May I suggest that you should.?(2)I wish.(3)I really hope that.(4)What about.?(5)How about.?(6)My suggestions are as follows.(7)It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on.(8)When it comes to such a situa
4、tion，I would like to suggest that you should.4如果你采纳了我的建议，情况是容易改变的。The situation is easy to change if you follow/take my advice.5对某人来说，做是明智的。It is advisable for sb.to do sth.假设你是高二一班学生李华，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写和乱丢垃圾的不文明行为，请用英文给校长写一封150词左右的信，信中包括以下内容：1写信的目的；2对这些行为进行批评；3提出建议。参考词汇：随意涂写scribble；乱丢垃圾litter写作要求是写一封建
5、议信，写作时应注意下面几点：1确定文体：这是一篇应用文，写作时应注意书信的常规格式。2主体时态：一般现在时。3主体人称：第一、二人称。必备词汇1吸引的注意力于draw/attract.attention to.2随意涂写和乱丢垃圾scribbling and littering3对有害do/cause harm to./be harmful to.4对某人来说做某事是不合适的Its not appropriate/improper for sb.to do sth.5与此同时at the same time/meantime/meanwhile6约束自己behave/control/conta
6、in oneself7在的共同努力下with the joint efforts of.句式升级1我写信的目的是引起你对学生在校园内的一些不良行为随意涂写和乱丢垃圾的关注，这些行为使我们的校园脏乱并且不适宜学习。I am writing to inform you of some improper behavior among us students on our campus：scribbling and littering，making our school a dirty and unpleasant place to study in.(现在分词作状语)I am writing to
7、draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students on our campus：scribbling and littering，which makes our school a dirty and unpleasant place to study in.(which引导非限制性定语从句)2很显然学生到处乱涂乱扔是不合适的。Students tend to litter and scribble about，and it is clearly an improper behavior.(并列句)It is clear
8、ly not appropriate for students to litter and scribble about.(it作形式主语)3我相信如果老师和学生共同努力，我们的学校会在不久的将来成为一个更怡人的地方。I believe that our school will surely become a more enjoyable place in the near future if both teachers and students are willing to work together.(if条件状语从句)I believe that，with the joint effor
9、ts of both teachers and students，our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.(withn.)Dear Mr Headmaster，I am Li Hua，a student from Class 1，Senior .I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students on our campus：scribbling and littering，which makes o
10、ur school a dirty and unpleasant place to study in and does great harm to the image of our school.I always feel ashamed whenever I see this.It is clearly not appropriate for students to litter and scribble about.I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules agains
11、t such behavior.At the same time，students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves.I believe that，with the joint efforts of both teachers and students，our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.Thank you for your consideration.Yours faithfully，Li Hua
