1、专题六 书面表达第三讲 怎样跳出“大众分”词汇要“美”，妙语要“多”专题六 书面表达在高考阅卷时，一份作文往往在 1 分钟内就被判定生死。大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳，如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，老师的给分也绝不会吝啬！写作技法指导高考英语书面表达评分标准对第五档的要求有这样一段话：语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。由此可以看出，高考英语书面表达要求考生尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇。何为较高级词汇？众所周知，词汇本来并没有“高低贵贱”之分，但某个词一旦得到使用，放在了具体语境中，使用得极为得当，
2、体现了该词的美妙价值，为句子增色，让文章添彩，它就是较高级词汇；相反，使用时体现的价值平平，没有创意，它就是较低级词汇。巧用 4 招，实现由低级向高级的转化1.“语”众不同，避免人云亦云写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。If you want to apply for membership，you are asked to fill in the application form and send an email to pingpong .If you want to apply for membership you are requiredto f
3、ill in the application form and send an email to pingpong (2017全国卷)The application time is from October 5 to October 10，2017.The application time is scheduled for October 510，2017.(2017全国卷)My application and resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me correct them.My application a
4、nd resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me polish them.(2016全国卷)So I have to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.So I have no choice but to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.(2016全国卷)I should be free a
5、ny time after school next week.I should be available any time after school next week.(2016全国卷)I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is so interesting as I have read.I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have r
6、ead.(2015安徽卷)Successfully，I have helped her in several English activities of my class，which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.2.更新换
7、代，避免重复写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，以此彰显你驾驭语言的能力。Apart from regular training，our team will join in a variety of activities,such as joining in some national competitions on behalf of our school.Apart from regular training,our team will join in a variety of activities,such as partici
8、pating in some national competitions on behalf of our school.(2017全国卷)Whats more,in order to know much about Chinese culture,it is important for you to know the content,Tang Poetry.Whats more,in order to have much knowledge ofChinese culture,it is of great importance for you to be aware of the conte
9、nt,Tang Poetry.(2017全国卷)We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may have different ways to deal with such a situation.We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may have various ways to deal with such a situation.(2015浙江卷)3.单词与短语巧妙互用一般情况下短语优先，应多使用词组、习语来
10、代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。Consequently,some viewers began to turn away from cinemas,causing a slower growth.As a consequence,some viewers began to turn away from cinemas，leading to a slower growth.(2017江苏卷)I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and Id like you to
11、help me.I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and Id like you to do me a favor.(2016全国卷)I think everyone here is a member of our big family and we learn a lot from each other.As far as Im concerned，everyone here is a member of our big family and we learn a lot from each
12、other.(2016天津卷)We should try to improve ourselves through learning and prepare for the future.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.(2015福建卷)I sincerely hope that you will consider my suggestions.I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions
13、into account.(浙江卷)4尽量用高级阶段学到的词代替低级阶段学到的词Firstly，what I want to stress is that we are about to start our next lesson in classroom 8 of the Teaching Building at 10 am next Friday.To start with,what I intend to stress is that we are about to start our next lesson in classroom 8 of the Teaching Building
14、 at 10 am next Friday.(2017全国卷)This summer I want to do a part-time job in a foreign company，through which I would like to broaden my horizons，get some working experience and meet more new friends.This summer I intend to take up a part-time job in a foreign company，through which I would like to broa
15、den my horizons，gain some working experience and meet more new friends.(2016全国卷)In my opinion，Internet voting has begun to show its negative effects on people and society.In my opinion，Internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society.(2016江苏卷)Whats worse，some drivers，cycl
16、ists and pedestrians do not think it important to obey traffic rules.Whats worse，some drivers，cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.(2015江苏卷)应用落实体验A(2017银川质检)假定你是一名高三学生，名叫李华。在母亲节来临之际，请你用英文给你的妈妈写一封信表示感恩，并借此机会和妈妈说说知心话，具体内容应包括：1.表示感恩；2你的现状(生活、学习情况)：(1)你的高考奋斗目标；(2)你对自己的信心。
17、参考词汇：高考 the College Entrance Examination注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可根据内容适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数。Dear Mom，_Mum,happy Mothers Day!I love you.Yours lovely，Li Hua考生作文Dear_Mom，Mothers Day is coming.Im writing to you to thank youfor bringing me up and showing me unselfish help，care andlove.Ill tell you somet
18、hing about my present life.As you know，it will be about one month before I take the College Entrance Examination，which makes my life a little busy and tiring.Luckily，my hard work is paying off.I have been making great progress in my studies，especially in English.Perhaps there is still a lot for me t
19、o do before I realize my dream going to Peking University.I firmly believe I can succeed.Please dont worry about me.Ill never let you feel disappointed.Mum，happy_Mothers_Day！I_love_you.Yours_lovely，Li_Hua我来提升 将文中加黑词汇升级1coming_2thank you_3and_4Luckily_5succeed_6worry about_7let you feel disappointed_
20、approaching/around the cornergive my gratitude to youas well asFortunatelymake itbe anxious aboutlet you down积累练习 将下列短语进行升级1think of_2stand up_3be used to_4be sure to_5be bored with_6be busy in(with)_come up withget to ones feetbe accustomed tobe bound tobe fed up withbe occupied in(with)/be buried
21、in/be engaged in 7try/do ones best to do sth._8ask sb.for help_9a lot of_10all kinds of_spare no effort to do sth.turn to sb.for helpa large quantity/amount of/endlessa wide range ofB(2017太原五中模拟)假设你是李红，你的一位美国笔友Robert 写 E-mail 问及你高考后暑假的安排。请根据以下要点，写一封 E-mail 回复他。1.学开车；2参加英语培训课程；3.游览各地名胜。注意：1.词数 100 左右
22、；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Robert，How time flies！_Yours，Li Hong考生作文Dear_Robert，How_time_flies！My College Entrance Examination is coming soon，which will announce the end of this stressful life.Therefore，I want to have a colorful and meaningful summer vacation.First，I will learn how to dri
23、ve to get a driving license，because I like driving very much.Second，I will take some English courses to improve my spoken English.After that，I will visit some tourist attractions throughout China to widen my horizon.Surely，I will take some photos to send to you via the Internet.Finally，I will have a
24、 good rest and enjoy my hobbies.This is the plan for my vacation.I am eagerly looking forward to it.Yours，Li_Hong我来提升 将文中加黑词汇升级1coming soon_2want_3First_4like_5Second_6visit_7Finally_approaching/around the cornerintendTo begin with/To start witham fond ofIn addition/Whats morepay a visit toAt last/E
25、ventually积累练习 将下列动词进行升级1meet_2face_3bear_4solve_5decide_6consider_7understand_8use_9apologize_10happen_come acrossbe faced withput up withdeal with/cope withmake up ones mindtake.into account/considerationmake sense of/figure outemploy/make use of/take advantage ofmake an apology occur/come about本部分内容讲解结束 按ESC键退出全屏播放