1、 专题 05 读后续写之精彩结尾 -新高考满分作文读后续写高分突破好的开端需要精彩的结尾，精彩的结尾可以吸引读者的眼球，这是获取高分的关键。一 主题升华1 名言警句式结尾升华主题使用名言结尾往往能给文章增添文采和说服力，同时也能起到深化主旨的作用，这样的结尾可以抒发感情和渲染氛围，合理运用名言警句可以为读后续写起到画龙点睛的作用。同时也应当注意具体文本具体分析，使用名言警句合理得当。【2022年高考浙江卷1月】One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease. I felt so sorry to
2、 hear that and I thought I should visit him in any case. He was a little surprised to see me when I stepped into his ward with some flowers and fruits. I offered to do the rest work of our project and he invited me to share my ideas to perfect it. We began to work as a fine team and finally finished
3、 our project on time. Our hard work paid off and Dr. Hendersons was very satisfied with our wonderful findings. From this project, we also learned the significance of teammates. Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.【译文】有一天，我得到消息，他因重病入院。听到这个消息，我感到非
4、常遗憾，我想无论如何我都应该去看他。当我带着一些鲜花和水果走进他的病房时，他有点惊讶。我提出做我们项目的其余工作，他邀请我分享我的想法以完善它。我们开始作为一个优秀的团队工作，最终按时完成了我们的项目。我们的辛勤工作得到了回报，亨德森博士对我们精彩的发现非常满意。从这个项目中，我们也了解到了队友的重要性。俗话说，一个人可以走得更远，但一群人可以走得更远。【结尾升华】Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.2 特殊句型结尾升华主题（强调句、倒装句、虚拟语气等
5、）【2022年新高考全国1卷】I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. The race started. It seemed that the runway was extremely long for young children, not to mention a child with a brain disease. David insisted on running as if he had forgotten all his weaknesses, though he was t
6、ripped over within the a few kilometers. It didnt take long before he picked himself up again and continued his mission. Classmates all appeared on the racing track, cheering for him. “Come on! You can make it! We are proud of you!” they shouted enthusiastically. To everyones joy, he reached the fin
7、al line and ranked the 20th. It was no more important whether he won the first place or not. It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally.【译文】我看着大卫和其他跑步者一起走到起跑线上。比赛开始了。对于年幼的孩子来说，跑道似乎非常长，更不用说患有脑病的孩子了。大卫坚持要跑，好像他忘记了他所有的弱点，尽管他在几公里内被绊倒了。没过多久，他又重新振作起来，继续他的使命。同学们
8、都出现在赛道上，为他加油。“来吧！你可以做到！我们为你感到骄傲！“他们热情地喊道。令所有人高兴的是，他到达了最后一条线，排名第 20 位。他是否获得第一名并不重要。正是他勇敢的心和坚定的信念，才能让不寻常的事情最终发生。【结尾升华】It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally.3 情感升华法 【2022年高考浙江卷6月】I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. This exper
9、ience made me realize that there are so many people in this world who need our help. It also made me realize that our small act of kindness can make them feel warm and make a great difference to them. I will never forget the way they looked at me when they were given food. I am anxious to urge the w
10、orld to do everything possible to help those in need.【译文】我很高兴我以这种方式赢得了我的服务时间。这次经历让我意识到，这个世界上有这么多人需要我们的帮助。这也让我意识到，我们的小善举可以让他们感到温暖，并对他们产生巨大的影响。我永远不会忘记他们得到食物时看着我的样子。我急于敦促世界尽一切可能帮助那些有需要的人。【结尾升华】I am anxious to urge the world to do everything possible to help those in need.二 画面定格1. 人物动作的画面定格1.【2021年高考浙江卷
11、6月】I understood immediately what my parents wereworried about. They were worried that I was too selfish to give. I realized that my labor was very hard, but my growth and our whole family had been depending on the hard work of my parents! Dad never complained about unfairness! He even seemed to thin
12、k that was fair. I thought, “Ive only worked for two weeks, but how many years my father has worked!” In the evening, Dad came back. I proudly took out my own money and handed it to Dad. 【译文】我立刻明白了父母在担心什么。他们担心我太自私了，不能给予。我意识到我的劳动非常辛苦，但我的成长和我们整个家庭一直依赖于我父母的辛勤工作！爸爸从不抱怨不公平！他甚至似乎认为这是公平的。我想：“我只工作了两个星期，但我父亲
13、工作了多少年！晚上，爸爸回来了。我自豪地拿出自己的钱递给爸爸。【动作画面定格】In the evening, Dad came back. I proudly took out my own money and handed it to Dad. 2. His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch. The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door an
14、d placed it in Doras hand. Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.【译文】他的努力得到了回报！鲁本紧紧地握着汽水罐，冲向商店去买胸针。他一拿到那枚漂亮的胸针，就冲进前门，把它放在朵拉的手里。多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。她高兴得说不出话来，紧紧地把儿子抱在怀里，眼泪涌了出来。【动作画面定格】Speechless and happy, she h
15、eld her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.3. 【2021年新高考全国I卷】The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of the ch
16、ildren for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didnt expect. The children said loudly, “Happy Mothers Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.【译文】双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒了妈妈。当他们的母亲看到眼前美味完美的早餐时，她非常惊讶。让她非常感动的不仅是礼物，还有孩子们对她的爱。两个孩子能做完早餐，
17、她没想到。孩子们大声说：“母亲节快乐！母亲紧紧地抱着他们，一次又一次地亲吻他们。【动作画面定格】Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.4.The butterfly cleaned her tears on the face，“No.” God felt a bit relieved and said，“Tomorrow you can become human again.” But she shook her head and said, “No, I want to be a butterfly for th
18、e rest of my life.” Then the butterfly would stay together with her lover forever. On the top of the mountain, she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset happily with them.【译文】蝴蝶擦干了脸上的眼泪，说，“不。”上帝松了一口气，说。“明天你就可以变回人类了。”但她摇了摇头说，“不，我想做一辈子蝴蝶. ”然后蝴蝶就会永远和她的爱人在一起。在山顶上，她似乎和他们一起快乐地享受着日出和日落。【动作画面定格】On the
19、top of the mountain, she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset happily with them. 2. 写景画面定格1.【2021年新高考全国I卷】Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm
20、and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh d
21、ear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.【译文】然后杰夫注意到蒸汽从锅里喷出来，盖子开始摇晃。下一分钟，粥沸腾了，灭火了。珍娜惊慌失措。值得庆幸的是，杰夫保持冷静，迅速关掉了煤气。但是炉子现在一团糟。珍娜告诉杰夫清理一下，这样他们就可以继续煮剩下的粥了。但是杰夫的手碰到了热火器，他发出了痛苦的叫声。珍娜让他把手放在冷水中。然后她闻到了燃烧的味道。哦，天啊！锅里的那块面包也变黑了。【场景画面定格】Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as we
22、ll. 2.【 湖南师范大学附属中学2022-2023学年高三上学期月考 】And so it was that George left all his painting equipment to me. “You have the best talent and are most likely to use it well,” he said. After considerable persuasion, I accepted this precious gift, insisting that he could reclaim it at any time. He never did, o
23、f course, and I still use much of his equipment today, more than 20 years later. As I paint, I often remember George, his sunny personality, generous spirit and unfailing encouragement. The red tool box witnessed a friendship that lasted for 25 years until the day he passed away.【译文】就这样，乔治把他所有的绘画设备都
24、留给了我。“你有最好的才能，最有可能很好地使用它，”他说。经过相当多的劝说，我接受了这份珍贵的礼物，坚持他可以随时收回它。当然，他从来没有这样做过，20多年后的今天，我仍然使用他的许多设备。当我画画时，我经常想起乔治，他阳光的个性，慷慨的精神和不懈的鼓励。红色工具箱见证了一段持续了25年的友谊直到他去世的那一天。【场景画面定格】The red tool box witnessed a friendship that lasted for 25 years until the day he passed away.3. Looking up, I saw the sun shine bright
25、er than I ever knew before. I saw a tree in the distance glisten gently as it reflected the suns rays. My consciousness ebbed away with the heat. I took a few blinks before I landed with a thud. 【译文】抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。我的意识随着热度而衰退。我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中，恢复了知觉。4. The sky was
26、a billion pure eyes of light and the grass green underfoot, it was as if night and day had become one beautiful moment. Dawn had come. 【译文】天空像是十亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。（黎明到来的画面）5.Dawn sent shimmering rays over the placid ocean, bestowing a golden path from the shore to the horizo
27、n.【译文】黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。（黎明前的海面）6. The lingering sunlight was obliterated by the rapidly falling night，resembling a pitch-black curtain draped over the sky.【译文】逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。（日落的美景）7. Kissed by the rain and glistening, the wet ground is cold under foo
28、t. A dense earthly sweet smell rises from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.【译文】潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。（雨后的清新）三 收尾呼应 首尾呼应不仅能强调主题，引起共鸣，也能使文章结构更加紧凑、严谨和自然。可以起到画龙点睛的功能，但是不一定照搬开头原词，可以使用词汇替换或者变换句式的方法做到收尾呼应。【开头典例1】 It was summer and my dad wanted to tr
29、eat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.【续写结尾1】Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind. 我从来没有过这么刺激又危险的假期。那次去西部的特别旅行，深深地印在我的脑海里。【开头典例2】I had an interesting childho
30、od. It was filled with suprises and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange faimly trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.【续写结尾2】Despite moms being absent-minded and forgetful, she was still a kind and nice mom. 尽管妈妈总是心不在焉，健忘，但她仍
31、然是一个和蔼可亲的妈妈。【开头典例3】A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.【续写结尾3】What a funny day. Arthur couldnt stop laughing whenever he looked back on this hilarious experience. 多么有趣的一天啊，每当亚瑟回想起这次欢乐的经历，他就忍不住笑个不停。四 对话结尾 以简单的对话形式结尾，适合记叙文续写，简单灵活，精心构建的对话可以感染读者，从而起到升华主题的作用。1.【2022年新高
32、考全国I卷】I watched as David moved up to the starting line.The starters gun sounded. But he had only gone a few metres before he tripped and fell flat on the ground. My heart sank. As I started to shout encouragement, other voices around me took up the call. “Come on David, you can do it!” David picked
33、himself up and started again until he crossed the finish line to wild cheers and applause. Then, when Davids coach slapped him on the back and said proudly, “Good job, David!” he caught my eye, flashed me a toothy grin and said, “That was easy!”【译文】我看着大卫走到起跑线上。发令枪响起。但他只走了几米，就被绊倒在地上。我的心沉了下去。当我开始大声鼓励时
34、，我周围的其他声音接听了电话。“来吧大卫，你可以做到的！”大卫振作起来，重新开始，直到他在疯狂的欢呼和掌声中越过终点线。然后，当大卫的教练拍打他的背，自豪地说：“干得好，大卫！”他吸引了我的视线，冲我露出一个露齿的笑容，说：“这很容易！”2.【2023届浙江省杭州第二中学新高三上学期适应性测试英语试题 】 Through its window, Edun saw faraway meadows and lakes, and many more mountains, a whole new world emerging before her eyes. That night, everybody
35、 stayed up late to see the stars. So many stars clustering up there, Edun proposed, “I need to take a picture of them.” “Click!” The camera froze the moment. Radiant with a smile, Edun approached Mom and hugged her, whispering, “Mom, thank you for having me come!”【译文】透过窗户，艾顿看到了遥远的草地和湖泊，还有更多的山脉，一个全新的
36、世界出现在她的眼前。那天晚上，大家都熬夜看星星。这么多星星聚集在那里，Edun提议，“我需要给它们拍照。“咔嚓！”镜头定格了这一刻。艾顿笑容满面，走近妈妈，拥抱她，低声说：“妈妈，谢谢你让我来！3. 【广东省汕头市金山中学2022-2023学年高三上学期第二次月考】As the music ended，thunderous applause filled the stadium. With the final marks announced，Mary knew she achieved her goal and tears began to well up in her eyes. As sh
37、e headed back to the dressing room，Linda came up to her cheerfully and held her hand tightly，“Congratulations! Youve done an amazing performance! You win!” Mary smiled happily，“I win.”【译文】随着音乐的结束，雷鸣般的掌声充满了体育场。随着最后的分数宣布，玛丽知道她实现了自己的目标，泪水开始在她的眼睛里涌出。当她回到更衣室时，琳达高兴地走到她身边，紧紧地握住她的手，“恭喜！你做了一个惊人的表演！你赢了！玛丽开心地笑
38、了，“我赢了。4. Her husband spoke to the director of Heightvale, Dolores Haworth. Soon she offered him a job working for the company. She said，“He just had a brilliant working attitude and is definitely the type of employee we are looking for. I was told, If he does this for free, imagine his jobs if he w
39、as being paid. I met him and he was a lovely and polite young man and he has already started working for us.”【译文】她丈夫和 Heightvale 的主管 Dolores Haworth 谈过了。很快她就给了他一份为公司工作的工作。她说，“他的工作态度很好，绝对是我们要找的那种员工。有人告诉我，如果他这么做是免费的，想象一下他的工作是有报酬的。我见过他，他是个可爱又有礼貌的年轻人，他已经开始为我们工作了。”五 结尾留白 结尾留白，这样的结尾给读者留下思考的空间，引入入胜，从而起到加深主
40、题的作用。1.While she wrapped them, I took a deep breath and asked Joy, “Do you have dinner plans?” I explained that Id like to wait a bit before I went back to the hospital to give Grace and her husband some time alone with baby. “Would you be interested in joining me in a bite to eat?” I asked. “Id lov
41、e to,” she replied, her eyes sparkling like diamonds. And, this was the beginning of the end to my months of heartbreak following Betsys death.【译文】当她把它们包起来的时候，我深吸了一口气，问 Joy：“你晚餐有安排吗? ”我解释说我想等一会儿再回医院让Grace 和她丈夫有时间单独和孩子在一起。“你有兴趣和我一起吃点东西吗? ”我问。“我很乐意，”她回答，她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光。而且，这是我在 Betsy 死后几个月心碎的结束的开始。2.The
42、beggar hesitated for a moment, then he decided to open it. He declared aloud, “Who cares? He wanted me to have it anyway. I might as well enjoy it now.” With that, he unwrapped the white tissue paper, but to his surprise, there was no hard rock candy inside. Instead, into his fingers fell a shiny wh
43、ite pearl worth thousands of dollars.【译文】乞丐犹豫了一会儿，然后决定打开它。他大声宣布: “谁在乎呢？不管怎样，他还是想让我拥有它。我还不如现在就享受呢。”说着，他打开了白色的纸巾，但令他惊讶的是，里面没有硬糖。相反，一颗价值数千美元的闪亮的白珍珠掉进了他的手指里。 即时练一练 (广东省深圳市光明区2022-2023学年高三一模)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A Mothers Heartfelt Note of LoveEverything seemed to have changed for me when
44、 I entered high school. I never saw a single person I knew from middle school. At home I was just as lonely. “My brothers and sister all fit in.” I thought, coming in the door after another bad day at school. “Why cant I?”Mom was there waiting for me. “Karole, your bedrooms a disaster. Why cant you
45、keep it clean?” The last thing I needed was criticism from my mother. What had happened to the mother who used to snuggle (依偎) with me on the sofa, loving me with complete acceptance? Who thought everything I did was wonderful? I didnt bother trying to explain my unhappiness. It was easier to hide i
46、n my bedroom, without saying a word, like I did every afternoon.Clearing off some space, I sat down at my desk. Yet another thing I wasnt good at anymore. My grades had slipped along with my confidence. I turned to a new page in my notebook and started working out the first problem. Almost immediate
47、ly, I saw Id made a mistake. “Wrong again!” I thought. “You cant do anything right!” I tore the paper out of my notebook, balled it up in my fist and threw it at the wastepaper basket. The ball landed on the floor. I heard my mothers voice in my head, “Why cant you keep your room clean?”By the time
48、I finished my homework, the floor was littered with crumpled (弄皱的) paper. It gave me a kind of satisfaction to see the mess Id made. Like it was proof of all my shortcomings. Every time I looked at those crumpled balls, I reminded myself what a failure I was. But my unhappiness stayed hidden away, j
49、ust like those mistakes. With my face a mask of indifference, no one knew what I was really feeling. Who would want to listen?One day, I came home to an empty house. It was a relief not to be met with Moms latest complaint. “Nothing I do is right in her eyes.” I thought. “Or anyone elses, including
50、mine.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。When I opened my bedroom door, I froze at the sight of a neat and orderly room._I sat down at my desk, staring at those words._【答案】One possible version:When I opened my bedroom door, I froze at the sight of a neat and orderly room. Mom had obviously decided
51、 to clean it herself. I was surprised to see the clean floor below my bed. All the crumpled paper had disappeared. Except one. A single sheet lay in plain view. I picked up the sheet and recognized Moms perfect handwriting, saying “I have found that I have also been very critical of you lately. For
52、that, I am truly sorry. I only expect that you are to be your same sweet self.”I sat down at my desk, staring at those words. A weight seemed to lift from me. I realized that Mom still loved me the same way. When she got home, I found the confidence to let down my guard and talk to her about how I f
53、elt. She and my father teamed up to offer some ideas that might help, like joining after-school clubs. I seemed like everything changed in high school, but one heartfelt note set the stage for the rest of my teenage years.【导语】文章以作者的情绪变化展开，讲述作者因为在新学校的不适应导致心情低落，成绩也下降，加上妈妈批评她不打扫房间，作者更是难受，于是她故意把房间弄得更乱，并
54、且用冷漠来伪装自己。直到一天回家看到自己整洁干净的房间，一切有了变化。【详解】1.段落续写：根据第一段首句“当我打开卧室的门时，我被房间整洁有序的景象惊呆了”可知，下文可描写作者知道是妈妈打扫了房间，发现妈妈留的字条，明白了妈妈其实一直爱着自己。根据第二段首句“我坐在桌前，盯着这些字”可知，下文可描写作者放下防备，主动和妈妈交流，并且一起讨论该如何适应新的学校生活。2.续写线索：惊叹于房间整洁有序知道是妈妈打扫的发现字条看着上面的话放下防备主动交流探索适应学校生活的方法改变，感悟3.词类激活行为类决定做某事：decide to do/be determined to do/make up on
55、es mind to do看见：see/spot/notice/find意识到：recognize/realize情绪类对不满：be critical of/be unsastified with真诚的：heartfelt/sincere/【点睛】高分句型1I have found that I have also been very critical of you lately. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）高分句型2When she got home, I found the confidence to let down my guard and talk to her about h
56、ow I felt. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句和how引导的宾语从句）2.（湖北省九师联盟2022-2023学年高三上学期质量检测联考试题）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I couldnt believe it. As I walked into campus, I saw posters everywhere with the words “Throw out the student union president!” on them. As my schoolmates began arriving on campus, I watch
57、ed them gather around the posters and then looked toward me because I was the president. At that moment, I felt that I was torn into pieces and tried my best to stay calm. When I was elected the president, my friends said it was one of the best campaigns they had ever seen. I started it by organizin
58、g a group of students to climb the mountain near our school. When we reached the top of the mountain, it felt like we were at summer camp. We laughed, danced and told jokes. It was really fun. While playing like little children, we agreed to do it again the following week and decided that each of us
59、 would bring a new friend. We started out with a small group of hikers. But as the word spread, the number of participants increased. One day on campus, I met a girl in a wheelchair and we started talking. Her name was Grace. I asked her if she had ever been to the top of the mountain. She said she
60、hadnt. I told her that my friends and I would carry her if she were up for it. Grace accepted the offer. The next time when we went up the mountain, we took turns to carry her in her chair all the way to the mountain top. This was probably one of the most meaningful things I did during the campaign.
61、 By the end, we had over seventy-five people climbing the mountain on Thursdays, including Grace. All of us who participated felt like we were part of something much bigger than we were. We were building a community and it felt great and no one was surprised that I had won the election. 注意：1.续写词数应为1
62、50左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。But I was so proud of my accomplishment that I let my pride out of control. _When I realized I had made a mistake, I decided to change. _【答案】But I was so proud of my accomplishment that I let my pride out of control. I began speaking down to people, demanding they listen to
63、me. My friends and supporters tried to communicate to me that I had changed and that I was abusing my position, but I wasnt listening. It wasnt long before the very people who had trusted me began to turn against me. But I still wasnt paying attention and even had public conflicts with them. When I
64、realized I had made a mistake, I decided to change. I used to think that I had to pretend to know what I was doing and that I was in charge. It was that kind of thinking that got me into trouble in the first place. Now, I was finding that the easiest way to gain other peoples respect was to admit to
65、 them what I did not know. I felt greatly ashamed. Eventually, I finished my term as president.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者通过努力，克服困难，成功当上了学生会主席。但很快作者被胜利冲昏了头脑，骄傲自满，滥用职权，最后遭到了众人的反对。最后，作者认识到自己的错误，并且改过自新。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“但我对自己的成就太骄傲了，以至于我的骄傲失去了控制。”可知，第一段可描写作者居高临下，滥用职权，甚至引发冲突。由第二段首句内容“当我意识到我犯了一个错误时，我决定改变。”可知，
66、第二段可描写作者为改变做出的行动，认识自己的不足，去赢得别人尊重 。2.续写线索：被指责不对发生冲突突然意识到问题愧疚改变感悟3.词汇激活行为类滥用：abuse/misuse某人陷入麻烦：get sb. into trouble/sb. be stuck in trouble承认：admit/acknowledge情绪类羞愧：feel ashamed/feel guilty 【点睛】高分句型1. It wasnt long before the very people who had trusted me began to turn against me. (句中使用who引导的定语从句)高分
67、句型2. Now, I was finding that the easiest way to gain other peoples respect was to admit to them what I did not know. (句中使用that引导的宾语从句以及what引导的宾语从句)3. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “t
68、he polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe distance. When Im face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a t
69、elephoto lens. But sometimes，that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence
70、. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard，and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not
71、this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter(相遇), I took some pictures of the bear.Elli an
72、d I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears eyes, but doesnt hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and，through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar(吼叫), t
73、he bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp._Paragraph2:At that very moment, the helicopter arrived._【答案】A few minutes later, the bear headed b
74、ack to our camp, then we realized the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence.
75、 It worked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasnt long before he eat up all the bread and came back again.At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. “Thank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved.
76、When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to the spot that the bear had finally tore down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene- we were robbed by a polar bear.【解析】【分析】本文以事件为线索展开，讲述了作者和妻子前往被称为“北极熊之都”的加拿大
77、丘吉尔镇拍摄北极熊。夫妻二人做饭之时，一头饥饿的雄性幼熊跟着面包的蒜香味，靠近了营地，猛烈撞击营地边上的铁丝围栏。作者和妻子使出浑身解数，想吓退这头熊，不料它“不破篱笆誓不归”。无奈之下，作者求助营地管理员，被告知救援直升机要30分钟后才能赶到，只得先尝试用胡椒喷雾喷洒北极熊的眼睛，不料这使熊变得更加暴躁，在千钧一发之际直升机及时赶到，他们得救了的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“几分钟后，熊返回了我们的营地。”可知，第一段可描写作者夫妻二人如何再次对付熊及两人在此过程中的紧张害怕。由第二段首句内容“就在那时，直升机赶到了。”可知，第二段可描写作者夫妻二人获救时的心情。2.续写线索
78、：熊返回营地紧张害怕用面包攻击直升机赶到快速登上飞机熊把篱笆推到拍下熊“打劫”的画面3.词汇激活行为类激怒：anger/provoke / enrage抓起：grab/snatch up拿出：take out/fetch out情绪类疯狂的：mad/crazy兴奋的：excited/thrilled【点睛】高分句型1 then we realized the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My
79、heart raced wildly.（for引导的原因状语从句）高分句型2 My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. （现在分词作状语）高分句型3 Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. (once引导时间状语从句和形容词作状语)4. （浙江省十校联盟2022-2023学年高三上学期10月联考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Charles Rose lived in the count
80、ry with his father, who taught him to read and to write. Mr. Rose told his son that, when his morning lessons were over, he might amuse himself for one hour as he pleased.There was a river near by. On its bank stood the hut of a poor fisherman, who lived by selling fish. His careful wife kept her wh
81、eel going early and late. They both worked very hard to keep themselves above want. But they were greatly troubled for fear that their only son should never learn to read and to write. They could not teach him themselves, and they were too poor to send him to school.Charles called at the hut of this
82、 fisherman one day, to inquire about his dog, which was missing. He found the little boy, whose name was Joe, siting by the table, on which he was making marks with a piece of chalk. Charles asked him whether he was drawing pictures.“No. I am trying to write,” said little Joe, “but I know only two w
83、ords. Those I saw upon a sign, and I am trying to write them.”“If I could only learn to read and write,” said he, “I should be the happiest boy in the world.”“Then I will make you happy said Charles.” I am only a little boy, but I can teach you that.”“My father gives me an hour every day for myself.
84、 Now, if you will try to learn, you shall soon know how to read and to write.”Both Joe and his mother were ready to fall on their knees to thank Charles. They told him it was what they wished above all things.So, on the next day when the hour came, Charles put his book in his pocket, and went to tea
85、ch Joe. Joe learned very fast, and Charles son began to teach him how to write.Some time after, a gentleman called on Mr. Rose, and said, “Charles did not always amuse himself. I often see him go to the house of the fisherman. I fear he goes out in their boat.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Th
86、e moment the gentleman left, Mr. Rose went in search of his son._The next day, his father took him to town, and gave him books for himself and Joe, with writing paper, pens, and ink._【答案】The moment the gentleman left, Mr. Rose went in search of his son. He went to the river, and walked up and down,
87、in hope of seeing the boat. Not seeing it, he grew uneasy. He thought Charles must have gone a long way off. Unwilling to leave without learning something of him, he went to the hut. He put his head in at the window, which was open. There a pleasant sight met his eyes. Charles was at the table, ruli
88、ng a copybook Joe was reading to him, while his mother was spinning in the corner. Charles was a little confused. He feared his father might not be pleased; but he had no need to be uneasy, for his father was delighted.The next day, his father took him to town, and gave him books for himself and Joe
89、, with writing paper, pens, and ink. Charles was the happiest boy in the world when he came home. He ran to Joe, his hands filled with parcels, and his heart beating with joy.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了查尔斯罗斯和他的父亲住在乡下，父亲教他读书写字，查尔斯认识了附近的渔夫的儿子乔，于是教他写字和阅读，这天父亲前来找罗斯，看到罗斯在教乔，感到很高兴。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“那位先生一走，罗斯先生就去
90、找他的儿子”可知，第一段可描写罗斯先生找到儿子后的事情。由第二段首句内容“第二天，他的父亲带他到城里，给他自己和乔的书，还有信纸、笔和墨水”可知，第二段可描写查尔斯拿到这些东西时的反应。2.续写线索：陪走路帮助感谢陪回家拒绝感悟3.词汇激活行为类寻找：in search of /look for害怕：fear/scare装满：be filled with /be full of情绪类担心：uneasy /concerned快乐：joy/happiness【点睛】高分句型1 He put his head in at the window, which was open. (运用了which引导
91、非限制性定语从句)高分句型2 He ran to Joe, his hands filled with parcels, and his heart beating with joy. (运用了独立主格结构)5. （江苏省扬州中学2022-2023学年高三上学期英语试题）阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Lucy was very nervous. She had a swimming competition in the morning and could not sleep. She tossed and turned all night. She
92、 was no stranger to competition. In fact, she loved it. Lucy was very athletic and was not only part of a swim team, but a soccer team as well. But this particular competition was important. She had made it all the way to the finals and didnt want to let her teammates down. When her alarm went off a
93、t 6: 00 am, she hit the snooze button and rolled onto her side, wishing she could just stay in bed all day. Having slept so poorly, Lucy was not at all ready for the day. After a few minutes, she stretched her arms above her head and yawned before throwing her covers back and climbing out of bed.She
94、 was terribly anxious about the competition, so much that she couldnt even eat breakfast. It felt as though her stomach was doing somersaults (翻腾). Lucys mother looked concerned. “You have to eat something,” she said. “Its important to keep your strength up.” “I know, Im just not hungry this morning
95、,” Lucy replied, picking at her eggs with a fork. All she could think about was facing the competition. What if she performed poorly? What if she disappointed her coach and teammates? She wouldnt be able to forgive herself.Lucys mom sensed her daughters worry and gave her a reassuring (令人宽慰的) pat on
96、 the back. “Youll be great, dear. Just do your best. Thats all that matters.”Lucy felt a bit of relief and appreciated her mothers kind words. But by the time she got to the athletic club where the swim meet was being held, that feeling of comfort had dissolved (消融). She went to the locker room to p
97、repare for the competition, but when she opened her gym bag, she was quite surprised.注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1: She didnt expect to find a handwritten note. _Paragraph 2:She saw her soccer uniform and realized she had grabbed the wrong bag. _【答案】She didnt expect to find a h
98、andwritten note. It was scribbled with signatures from members of the soccer team and a lovely hand-drawn smiley face, symbolizing optimism and victory. This inspiring note reminded her of the critical moment last year when the soccer team made it to the finals. Excited but anxious, everyone joined
99、hands and decided to give it a shot. It turned out to be an unforgettable and fierce competition in which their team spirit led to a miracle. Lucy lost herself in this uplifting memory before she came back to reality with the gym bag in her hand. She saw her soccer uniform and realized she had grabb
100、ed the wrong bag. “What shall I do? Without a swimsuit, I wont be allowed to enter the pool!” A fit of dizziness came over her, and she hardly had the strength to stand firm. “Lucy, heres your bag.” It was her mother who arrived just in time, out of breath, stretching her arms with the bag. Never ha
101、d Lucy felt so lucky to be blessed with care, encouragement and a devoted mother. Without hesitation, she headed for the swimming pool with a brilliant smile, anticipating the championship.【导语】本文以比赛为线索展开，讲述了Lucy即将参加一场重要的游泳比赛，但她很紧张，担心会让教练和队友失望，她误将足球包带到赛场，并发现足球队友鼓励她的纸条，这让她发现自己没带游泳包。正在绝望时，母亲将游泳包送来，使Luc
102、y意识到自己的幸运及母亲和朋友的鼓励，自信地参赛。【详解】1. 段落续写：由第一段首句内容“她没想到能找到一张手写的纸条。”可知，第一段可描写纸条的内容及Lucy的回忆。由第二段首句内容“她看到自己的足球服，意识到自己拿错了包。”可知，第二段可描写Lucy绝望时，母亲及时送来游泳包，使Lucy意识到自己的幸运，并带着鼓励和信心去比赛。2. 续写线索：发现字条足球队友的鼓励回忆意识到拿错包母亲送来游泳包感悟自信地参赛3. 词汇激活行为类使失望：let sb. down/ disappoint到达get to/ reach表现：perform/ display情绪类担心的：concerned/ worried紧张焦虑的：anxious/ nervous/ tight【点睛】高分句型1 This inspiring note reminded her of the critical moment last year when the soccer team made it to the finals. (运用when引导定语从句)高分句型2 It was her mother who arrived just in time, out of breath, stretching her arms with the bag. (运用It waswho引导强调句)