1、高考书面表达训练如何审题、如何遣词造句 最近，你校师生帮助辍学的李明同学返校。请根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观介绍这一情况。李明情况师生情况1、学习好；品德好；2、父病故；母病重；3、退学；1、震惊；2、捐款、募捐；3、使李明返校学习；注意：1、信的开头已为你写好。2、词数：100左右。3、参考词汇：捐款 offer money;募捐collect money1、审定体裁、题材；2、审定人称；3、审定时态；4、审定要点；5、审定结构。1、审定体裁、题材：2、审定人称：3、审定时态：4、审定要点：5、审定结构：审题提示:书信、李明遭遇第三和第一人称 现在时、过去时 见作业纸 可分为两段
2、Li Ming was one top students of of our school.He was good at his studies and always ready to help others.However,he has to leave school.His father died and his mother is seriously ill in bed.Correct mistakes if any!学生习作2：学生习作2：The whole school was shocked at the news and anxious about it.Quickly the
3、y decided to help him out.Every teacher and student offered money to him and some students went to look after his mother in turn.At weekends they went out to collect money.Correct mistakes if any!学生习作3：With their help,Li Ming will return to school soon.Thats all.Thank you.Yours,Wei FangCorrect mista
4、kes if any!Dear editor，Im writing to tell you what the teachers and students have done to help a student who discontinued his studies in our school.Li Ming is a student of our school.He is not onlygood at his studies but also always ready to help others.But he had to leave school because his father
5、died and his mother is seriously ill.As a result,he had to make money to help his family.Hearing the news,all the teachers and students were shocked.In order to help Li Ming,we decided to offer money to him and some students went out to collect money for him in the streets.With our help,Li Ming has
6、already returned to school.With best wishes!(100)Yours,Wei Fang学生佳作欣赏！Dear Bob,Its my hometown Jiangcheng.ThecitystandsonthebankoftheChangjiang River.It is a beautiful place forpeopletolivein.Itseconomyhasbeendeveloping rapidly in the past ten years.Newfactories,houses have been built.More schoolsan
7、d hospitals are available for its people.However,there are some problems,such as waterand air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.In my opinion,Jiangcheng should develop itseconomy scientifically.I would also think thatthe growth population should be brought undercontrol so that well have a be
8、tter hometown infuture.请赏析高考书面表达如何遣词造句！如何遣词造句？掌握5种简单句句型1、主语连系动词表语；2、主语 vi.3、主语 vt.宾语；4、主语 vt.双宾语；5、主语 vt.复合宾语；最常见的连系动词？1、be；2、look,feel,smell,sound,taste；3、seem,appear；4、become,get,turn,come,go,grow；5、continue,keep,remain,；6、come,fall,prove,turn out；1、会后，她看起来有点疲倦。2、他好像在写什么东西。3、夏季，鸡蛋容易变坏(go)。4、她知道她必须
9、保持镇静(keep)。5、她终于梦想成真(come)。请用适当的连系动词造句：英语中最常见的四十个及物动词agree askbelieveconsidercontinuedecideexpectenjoyfeelfindfinishforget gethavehearhelphopeimagine knowlearnlike mindneednoticeofferorderprefer pretendpromiseregretremembersaysee suggesttellthinkwantwarnwatchwish请按要求将下列句子翻译成英文 1、我们班有50个学生（来自农村）(ther
10、e be)。2、昨天是小王打扫了教室(it that)。3、我认为学好英语很重要(it)。4、为了在高考中取得好成绩，我们正努力学习(in order to,in order that)。5、他起得迟，结果又迟到了(so that)。高考书面表达五大常用句型1、There be 句型；2、It is(was)+被强调部分+that(who)；3、it 作形式主语或形式宾语的句型；4、to/in order to/so as to/so that/in order that 表示“目的”5、sothat/suchthat/soas to/enough to/tooto 表示“结果”书面表达解题步
11、骤：1、审，即：审定体裁、题材、人 称、时态、结构等；2、编，即：编写要点，按顺序列出；3、写，即：连词成句，连句成文；4、查，即：查内容，查格式，查语法，查书写等。1、Li Hua，22，the English Department of Yangzhou University；2、be good at English listening，speak a little German,operate a computer；3、work as a typist,a guide；4、get more information from,gofor a talk；审定要点：Dear sir,I hav
12、e just read in the newspaper that asecretary of the English language is wanted in yourcompany.I am therefore writing to you to introducemyself.Id like to get the job.My name is Li Hua,a college student of 22.NowI am studying in the English Department ofYangzhou University.Not only can I listen to,sp
13、eak,read and write English well,but also I can read andspeak a little German.Besides,I can operate thecomputer.Once I worked as a typist during myspare time,and as a guide during summer holidays.The bosses I worked for were all satisfied with mywork.You can get more information about me from myuniversity.I am willing to visit your firm at anytime for a talk.With best wishes.(103)Yours faithfully,Li Ping学生佳作欣赏!Correct any mistakes in your partners composition if there are any.