1、写 作 专 项 提升 第三讲 文章优美2维度英 语 2023高 考 总 复 习 优 化 设 计 GAO KAO ZONG FU XI YOU HUA SHE JI 一、引人入胜的开头 应用文的字数要求是80词左右,因此要用最少的字数表达最丰富的内容。开头要开门见山,一句话让读者感兴趣,知道你要写什么。下面介绍几种开头的常见写法:1.书信的开头:问候,说明写信的目的(2020全国卷,书面表达)How is everything going?I am writing in sincerity to ask you to give us some guidance on a play we adap
2、ted according to the textbook.一切都好吗?我写这封信是真诚地想请你就我们根据教科书改编的一个剧本给予一些指导。Im writing to apply for./invite./make an apology./offer some suggestions./express my thanks./inform you that.我写信想申请/邀请/道歉/提些建议/表达我的谢意/通知你 2.新闻报道的开头:一句话表达时间、地点、人物、事件及影响(2020新高考全国卷,写作)Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-cou
3、ntry running race,which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.上星期天,我们学校举行了一场非同寻常的越野赛跑,这几乎引起了全校师生的注意。3.通知的开头:开门见山说明通知的内容 Our American teacher Eric will give a lecture on America culture and history at the school hall next Sunday.我们的美籍教师Eric将于下周日在学校大厅举行一场关于美国文化与历史的讲座。4.演
4、讲稿的开头:一句话说明演讲的心情和具体内容 Its a great honour for me to give a speech on traditional Chinese culture here.我非常荣幸能在这里发表关于中国传统文化的演讲。5.说明文的开头(1)开门见山点明所要介绍的事物 The mouse is a quite effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.鼠标是人们用电脑交流时使用的一种非常有效的设备。(2)运用数据引出所要论证的主题 A recent study shows that
5、more than 40%of the students dont have breakfast.最近的一项研究表明,有超过40%的学生不吃早饭。6.议论文的开头(1)提出一个观点作为文章要论述的主题(2019江苏卷,书面表达)Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what to wear when receiving the British students next month.Li recommends the traditional Chinese dress while Su prefers the school uniform.李江和苏华正在讨论下个
6、月接待英国学生时穿什么。李推荐中国传统服装,而苏更喜欢校服。(2)引用名人名言或习语谚语 When it comes to how to succeed,many people may think of the proverb“Where there is a will,there is a way.”当谈及如何成功时,很多人或许会想起谚语“有志者,事竟成。”(3)通过一个实例或现象引出话题 Three years ago,I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school.三年前,我
7、在人生的一次重要考试中失利,成为一所普通学校的一名学生。二、回味无穷的结尾 短文的结尾起着总结全文,升华主题的作用,主要有以下写法:1.书信的结尾:表达感谢和期盼 Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.再次感谢,祝你回家旅途愉快。Looking forward to your early reply.期待你早日回复。2.新闻报道的结尾:收获和意义 This activity provides an opportunity for us to get close to nature.这次活动给我们提供了一次亲近大自然的机会。The c
8、ompetition aroused students interest in Chinese ancient culture.这次比赛激发了学生们对中国古代文化的兴趣。3.通知的结尾:注意事项与期盼 Have an active part in it,and wish you good luck!快来积极参加吧,祝你们好运!4.演讲稿的结尾:感谢倾听 Thats all I want to say about this point.Thanks for your listening.关于这一点我就讲这么多。感谢您的倾听。5.说明文的结尾:再次强调重点,回扣主题 In a word,chang
9、es in our life in the past twenty years have brought us convenience and comfort.总之,在过去的20年里我们生活中的变化给我们带来了便利和舒适。6.议论文的结尾(1)提出建议或者应对措施 I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places.Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.我认为,我们都应该注意自己在公共场合的行为。只有这样,我们才能
10、生活在更加舒服和美丽的环境中。(2)用名言总结全文 If you“do as the Romans do when in Rome”,you will enjoy more your stay here.如果你“入乡随俗”,你就会更好地享受这里的生活。(3)对开头进行照应 Different ways of traveling can make people happy,but I like traveling by train most.不同的旅行方式都能让人愉快,但是我最喜欢乘火车旅行。对点过关训练.根据要求,为下面的话题写作设计一个开头段和结尾段 一、外教史密斯先生国庆节不打算回美国了。
11、请你给他写一封80词左右的邀请信,邀请他和你一起过节,并告诉他你的安排,要点如下:1.邀请他去你家做客,包饺子,品尝各种中国传统美食;2.带他到公园赏花,赏心悦目;3.陪他去博物馆看看,了解一下我们的历史。开头:开门见山 结尾:表达期盼 开头:As the National Day is around the corner,Im writing to invite you to stay with me for the holiday.结尾:I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.Looking forward to yo
12、ur reply at your earliest convenience.二、(2021山东聊城二模)你校正在组织英语作文比赛,要求讲述你人生中的一次宝贵经历。请写一篇标题为“The experience I value”的短文参赛,内容包括:1.简述经历;2.经历的意义与启发。开头:引出话题 结尾:阐明意义 开头:There are many valuable experiences in our life.As for me,cooking for my mother on her birthday is an unforgettable incident.结尾:I guess love
13、 is indeed a magical ingredient.Actually,we ended up laughing and ate them all.写作练习 你受邀参加一场中外高中生的在线交流,讨论话题为各国高中生的毕业庆祝活动。请你写一篇英文发言稿,介绍你们学校的活动情况。内容包括:1.活动内容;2.活动意义;3.邀请对方访问你校网站。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear friends,I am delighted to exchange views about graduation celebration.In my school,the bi
14、ggest event,no doubt,is the graduation ceremony,usually held after the National College Entrance Examination.The ceremony starts with an address by our principal.Then comes the presenting of the diploma.The highlight is to appreciate a short video recording the past school life,which often moves us students into tears.The event provides us with an outlet for our pressure from the exam,and it is a special occasion to express our appreciation to the teachers.For further information about the events,you are welcome to check out our school website.I do hope you will enjoy it.Thank you!