1、2015届高三英语 名校试题解析分项汇编（第01期）专题16 短文改错（含解析）1.【四川省宜宾市2015届高三第一次诊】短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每句不超过两个错误；2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Having a dream is of great importance. Your dreams are ordinary and
2、 realistic. I hope I will admitted into a top university and become a good doctor after I will graduate from university. I hoped one day I can find a cure for cancer. I hope those whom love me and those whom I love will be healthy and live happy every day. To realize my dreams, I will take more exer
3、cises to build up my body. I will try my best to focus time and energy to my study. I must work hard at my lessons or be fully preparing for the entrance exam. 【答案】【解析】【小题1】通篇都在讲我的梦想，因此代词Your- My。【小题2】will 加动词原形，“被录取” be admitted into ,will 后面加be.考点：短文改错2.【黑龙江省双鸭山市第一中学2015届高三上学期期末】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改
4、作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。One night, I was on my home for my Christmas holiday when my car broke down. It was complete dead, and I was a few miles away f
5、rom my home in that cold, wet night. I decided to walk around a little after accepting that Id have to spend the night in the car. Maybe I can find a telephone. Actually, I didnt have to walk far before I found the small house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room. I knocked t
6、he door was delighted when a pleasant old man opened the door and listened to my story carefully. He said he had no telephone and that it wasnt any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go to repair my car.【答案】【小题1】complete改为completely【小题2】in改为on【小题3】after改为before【小题4】can改为could【小题
7、5】the改为a【小题6】shone改为shining【小题7】knocked后加at/ on【小题8】was前加and【小题9】it改为there【小题10】who删掉【解析】考点：考查句子理解、语法、时态等重点知识。3.【山东省青岛市2015届高三上学期期末考试】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
8、 2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 3改错格式错误不得分。My name is Li Hua. I was born in Qingdao，Shandong province on February 1995I started the school in 2001 when I was six. I studied happy in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007. After that I went to No. 39 Middle School of Qingdao and graduate last summerThe
9、 main subjects I study at schoo1 included Chinese，maths，English，physics，chemistry and computerI like English and computer best and I am very good at it .Last year I winned first prize in the school computer competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening popular music and collecting stampMy favourit
10、e sports is swimming in summer and skating in winter【答案】【小题1】on-in【小题2】去掉the【小题3】happy- happily【小题4】graduate- graduated【小题5】study- studied【小题6】it-them【小题7】winned-won【小题8】listening- listening to【小题9】stamp- stamps【小题10】is-are【解析】试题分析：本题考查短文改错。考点：考查时态、词形变换、介词搭配等4.【辽宁省锦州市2015届高三上学期期末考试英语】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交
11、换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Mary is a high school student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day. Last Saturday,as usual, she went to se
12、veral class. In the evening, she continued to study until deeply into night.She was too sleepy and tired that she couldnt work effectively. On the Sunday morning, she wasabout to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her to take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. We decided to go
13、cycling in the countryside. Mary enjoyed herself, competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On Monday, Mary was energetic but active in class.【答案】【小题1】devoted改为devotes【小题2】class改为classes【小题3】deeply改为deep【小题4】too改为so【小题5】去掉the【小题6】while改为when【小题7】加上with【小题8】We改为They【小
14、题9】relaxing改为relaxed【小题10】but改为and【解析】【小题7】加上with；根据第六句Soon they came up a good idea.，come up with 固定短语意为想出.故加上with【小题8】We改为They；根据第七句We decided to go cycling in the countryside.前文说他们想出一个主意，此处应是他们决定去骑车，故We改为They【小题9】relaxing改为relaxed；根据第七句and felt relaxing in the open air，relaxed才是relax的形容词放松的，故rela
15、xing改为relaxed【小题10】but改为and；根据最后一句On Monday, Mary was energetic but active in class.精力充沛的与积极的两者应是并列关系，故but改为and考点：考查短文改错5.【2015届河北保定市高三调研试题】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修
16、改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain can not stop us. We set off early and went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirit. On either side of the road was green fields. We could hear the sound of the rain mixing with our laughter. At noon w
17、e reached to the top of the mountain, there we were amazed by the beauty of the scenes. After short rest, we started going down It rained more harder. We were wet all over, and we still felt happy.【答案】【小题1】can 改为could【小题2】extreme改为extremely【小题3】spirit改为spirits【小题4】was改为were【小题5】mixing改为mixed【小题6】去掉t
18、op【小题7】theres改为where【小题8】加上a【小题9】more改为much【小题10】and改为but【解析】考点：考查短文改错6.【河北省正定中学2015届高三1月月考】假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分Even today, a man with good m
19、anner will politely open the door for a lady, help her put on her coat when necessary and see her safely to the door of her home before a date. When a man takes a woman out for a dinner, it is considered impolite to help her with her chair when she gets up or sits down. On a crowding train or bus, i
20、t is proper for a man offer a woman his seat, particular if she is old or carries a baby. Even when it comes to shake hands, ladies come first. It is impolite for a man to extend his hand for a handshake upon first greeting. Unless a woman does not extend her hand to the man first, the man shouldnt
21、offer theirs.【答案】【小题4】impolitepolite 考查形容词。根据常识男士帮助她搬椅子被认为是礼貌的。impolite polite考点：考查代词、形容词、冠词、连词以及固定短语等7.【河北省邯郸市2015届高三上学期1月份教学质量检测】 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一
22、词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear Mike,How are you doing? Thank you for your help and good treat while I was stayed in Sydneylast summer vacation. You were so kindly and friendly to treat me to the local food, and takeus to do a lot of sightseeing. Its really nice to visit Sydney, which beautiful sc
23、enery anddelicious food gave me a better impression. I have a great time here and learned a lot aboutSydney. Mike, are you free these days? I would like to invite you visit China. Ill act like a guideto show you around the places of interests in my hometown. Yours, Li Hua【答案】【小题1】was去掉【小题2】kindly-ki
24、nd【小题3】us-me【小题4】which-whose【小题5】better-good【小题6】have-had【小题7】here-there【小题8】to visit【小题9】like-as【小题10】interests-interest【解析】考点：名词；形容词；副词；介词；人称代词；时态；定语从句8.【江西省吉安市第一中学2015届高三上学期第二次阶段考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处, 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的
25、词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词汇。2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处记)不计分。短文改错When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin. Therefore. I couldnt understand “real music” After I graduated from high school, the friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar
26、 because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. Here I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed. He became my first guitar teacher. There were too many wonderful models to choose that it took me a long time to
27、 buy one Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day. 【答案】【小题1】 learn-learning 【小题5】 这里指“我的朋友和我”是两个人，不是指所有人，因此all-both。【小题6】 先行词是 day，在定语从句中作宾语，介词后用which，that-which. 【小题7】在吉他店那里，不是这里，因此Here- There 。 【小题8】.“如此多. . .以至于” so . . . that，因此too-so 。【小题9】 可以从中选择，缺少介词f
28、rom，因此 choose后加 from 【小题10】 系动词后用形容词，importantly-important。考点：短文改错9.【山西省大同一中、同煤一中2015届高三联考】文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。This morning , I go to the store near my home to d
29、o some shopping.I was walking down the passage while I gave a violent cough. The woman standing next to me was so shocking that she consequently dropped a jar of oil. For that very moment, a girl was walking by. She slipped on the oil, fell onto the broke glass and hit her head on the floor. After a
30、 while ,there were blood pour down her face. I felt really guilty and sent the girl to the nearest hospital without the delay. The doctor examined her wound carefully. To my relief, it was not serious. The girl had a little smile on her face before the doctor dressed wound. 【答案】【小题1】go-went【小题2】whil
31、e-when【小题3】shocking-shocked,【小题4】For-At,【小题5】broke-broken, 【小题6】were-was,【小题7】pour-pouring,【小题8】the delay去the,【小题9】before-after，【小题10】wound前加 the/her考点：考查短文改错10.【山东省实验中学第三次诊断考试】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修
32、改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear schoolmates，In order to get high school students to attaching importance to the environment and raise our awareness to protect the environment，and China Daily is planning to hold an interestingly knowledge contestA contest sta
33、rts on October 14th and end on 31 stRemember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that is very popular among high school studentThe answer sheet must cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after the deadlinePlease pay more attention to the related information of the contest an
34、d take an active part in them on timeStudents Union【答案】【小题1】attaching 改为attach 【小题2】第二行and去掉 【小题3】interestingly改为interesting【小题4】第三行A改为The【小题5】end后面加s【小题6】第四行that改为which 【小题7】student后面加s【小题8】must后面加be 【小题9】after改为before【小题10】最后一句话中them改为it【解析】考点：考查名词，副词，非谓语，固定句式，固定短语等一些语法知识。 11.【辽宁省丹东五校协作体2015届高三期末考
35、试】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有2处.涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/），在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线（）划掉 。 修改:在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。 注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分 。Dear Andy, Im glad to hear from you. You ask about my health in your last email. So Im going to
36、tell you about diet. Im a very health person. Thats why we live near the sea and we often have fish. I dont know exactly what my mother will cook for us tonight, and there will probable be fish and vegetables. And of course there will also be some rices. If you come to visit me in China on one day,
37、you wont eat many sweets. So I hope you dont have sweet tooth.Im going to ask my father to take some photos for the football match and Ill email them to you. I think youll like our teams clothes.【答案】试题分析：【小题1】文中第二句。根据此句中的in your last email.可知是在上一封邮件中问起我的健康。故把ask改成asked。句意为：在你的上一封信中，你问起了我的健康。12.【山东省潍
38、坊市重点中学2015届高三12月阶段性教学质量检测】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come a
39、t a stop. Thirty minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then
40、 do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, Ill think of this experience.【答案】【小题1】添加for【小题2】past改为pasted 【小题3】feet改为foot【小题4】when改为than【小题5】a改为the【小题6】other改为another【小题7】do改为did【小题8】possible改为possib
41、ly【小题9】去掉it【小题10】lose改为losing【解析】【小题6】other改为another 考查another用法。第七句“If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for 考点：考查句子改错。13.【浙江省重点中学协作体2015届高三第二次适应性测试】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线
42、，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. Id like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time Ill h
43、ave during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They dont want me go out. They are afraid Ill be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom,
44、I will try to persuade them.【答案】【小题1】made改为makes；【小题2】at改为to；【小题3】movie改为movies【小题4】去掉the；【小题5】How改为What；【小题6】different 改为differently【小题7】加to；【小题8】fallen改为fall；【小题9】Beside改为Besides；【小题10】keeping改为kept；【解析】【小题8】fallen改为fall；文中第八句 Ill be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others
45、.主语是 Ill，连词or连接两个并列短语，后面的是动词原形，故fallen改为fall。【小题9】Beside改为Besides；文中第九句Beside, they are afraid.句子开头且用逗号隔开，所以前面是一个连词，另外，除之外（还有）是besides，故Beside改为Besides。【小题10】keeping改为kept；文中第十句I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. 句意：我讨厌像笼子里的鸟一样对待。后面的是一个后置定语，主语是the bird，物作主语，后面要用过去分词，故keeping改为kept。考点：考查篇章理解及语法知识。24