1、考点二十八图表类 Writing 1限时20分音乐丰富了人们的生活,不同的人喜欢不同风格的音乐。假如你最近对班上的同学进行了主题为“影响你选择音乐的因素”的调查,其结果如图表所示。请用英语为班级黑板报写一篇短文。要求:1.简要说明调查结果; 2.指出影响你选择的因素是哪一个,并加以说明。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数;3可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Recently I have carried out a survey among the students in our class. The survey was conducted to find out
2、 what influences the music we listen to._【写作指导】本篇写作是典型的图表类作文。审题时,要注意文章内容表达上的层次和结构。如本题先写调查的内容,后写调查对象和人数,即“影响因素和比例”,这样层次感就有了。最后再给出作者自己的观点。特别要明确要点:在Friends, Radio, TV/Film, Parents等四个因素中,最具影响力的因素是哪一个。表达时注意图表上百分率的正确表达;思路应清晰、简洁和准确。标准范文:Recently_I_have_carried_out_a_survey_among_the_students_in_our_class.
3、_The_survey_was_conducted_to_find_out_what_influences_the_music_we_listen_to.According to the survey, TV and films have the strongest effect on our choice of music, 50 percent of the students sharing the opinion. 30 percent of the students say they are influenced by friends when deciding what music
4、to listen to. Radio comes third, with 20 percent of the students choosing it. Parents seem to have very little influence. Only 10 percent of the students say they listen to what their parents recommend.As far as I am concerned, what influences me most is TV and films. The reason is that the music on
5、 TV or in the films usually goes with beautiful pictures, or expresses certain feelings of my favorite heroes. Good TV or film music, as is often the case, can accompany a persons entire life.Writing 2限时22分假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom将于7月来你校学习汉语,让你帮他在学校附近租一套合适的公寓。请根据下图和文字提示,给他回一封英文电子邮件。要点包括:1.表示欢迎;2公寓概况;3期盼回复。注
6、意:1.词数100左右;2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Tom,_Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】本篇写作属图表类作文。审题时,注意图中公寓所在的位置及周围设施,表述要清晰。按题目中所要求的三个要点来写作,层次分明,一气呵成。标准范文:Dear_Tom,Im glad to hear that you are coming to China to learn Chinese in July. Here Id like to tell you what Ive rented for you.The apartment is on the 5th f
7、loor in a building, which lies at the corner of Xinhua Road and Qingnian Road. It is convenient to live here, because on the opposite is just our school. In addition, both a supermarket and a bus stop are within 10 minutes walk from it. Im sure youll like the apartment and the surroundings. If you h
8、ave any other requests, please dont hesitate to let me know. Im willing to offer help whenever you have problems.Im longing to see you.Yours,Li_HuaWriting 3限时20分网络游戏使许多中学生沉溺其中,这种现象引发了人们不同的看法。请你按照下面图表中的内容写一篇英文短文。注意:1.词数120左右;2.内容充实,结构完整,语义连贯。_【写作指导】本文属于半开放性议论文,要求考生依据图表信息谈谈不同人群对网络游戏的看法,并陈述自己的观点和理由。(1)
9、首先要仔细读图并审题,确定文章要点:好多中学生认为网络游戏给他们带来了乐趣;家长认为长时间沉迷网络既浪费了时间,又损害健康;教师认为有的学生分散了精力,甚至逃学;专家认为游戏不利于学生形成正确的价值观;你的看法和理由。(2)确定文章要使用的词汇和句型,并灵活运用复杂句式 spend time (in) doing sth., devote oneself to, be absent from, do harm to, be bad for, concentrate on, so that等。(3)使用正确的时态和语态:本文根据现象阐述人们的看法,时态以一般现在时为主。(4)恰当使用过渡词,使文
10、章语义连贯,层次分明。如:as you know, however, besides, meanwhile, personally speaking等。(5)合理布局:本文可分为三部分:首先根据文字提示进行客观描述,然后引出主题;第二段陈述要点;第三段提出自己的看法和理由。标准范文:As you know, online games are popular with students. Some even play games by their cellphones at class, which they think bring them much pleasure.However, oth
11、ers dont think so. Some parents believe that much time has been wasted playing games and it does great harm to their health. Besides, some teachers think some children are addicted to these games and they are even absent from school so that they cant devote themselves to their study. Meanwhile, some
12、 experts are afraid that it will be bad for the students to form right opinion of values.Personally speaking, I think games can help us relax. But the most important thing is that we should concentrate on our study.Writing 4限时20分假设你叫李华,最近在某英文购物网站上购买了一双鞋子,但出现了一些问题。【写作内容】请给网站写一封投诉信,包括以下内容:1写信的目的;2投诉内容
13、;申购情况实际情况颜色黑色白色码数98.5到货日期4月10日4月20日要求:1.重新邮寄或退款;2询问:若寄回,谁承担邮费?(信的开头和结尾已给出)Dear Sir,_Thank you for your consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【写作指导】本篇书面表达要求写一封投诉信,因此要注意句子的长度,可以用不同的形式,如定语或状语来扩充句子。此外,要注意用词的准确和语气。语言要清晰简洁,通俗易懂。标准范文:Dear_Sir,Im writing to complain about a pair of sneakers I recently purchas
14、ed from your website. What I ordered was a pair of black, size9 shoes but I received a pair of white, size8.5 shoes instead. Worse still, there was a tenday delay in delivering my shoes, which should have been received on April 10. For the above reasons, I demand either a new pair of black sizenine
15、shoes be posted to me immediately or I be given a full refund. Also, if I send back the wrong shoes, will your company pay for the postage?Thank_you_for_your_consideration.Yours_sincerely,Li_HuaWriting 5限时20分最近,你班学生就暑假上辅导班的问题进行了讨论。结果如下:赞成52%培养学习兴趣,增长知识,提高成绩反对48%增加学习负担,减少娱乐和放松的时间请你根据以上表格的内容,写一篇100词左右
16、的英语短文,反映讨论结果,并谈谈你对上暑假辅导班的看法。注意:开头已经为你写好,不计入总词数。参考词汇:辅导班auxiliary classesRecently our class have had a discussion about whether the students should attend auxiliary classes during the summer vacation._【写作指导】本篇书面表达要求根据图表内容回信,因此考生必须读懂图表所反映的问题。在叙述时要点必须全面,不能遗漏,要使用过渡性词语和连接词,以使文章更加通顺,另外句式要尽量多样化,避免单调的单一句式。标
17、准范文:Recently_our_class_have_had_a_discussion_about_whether_the_students_should_attend_auxiliary_classes_during_the_summer_vacation.52% of the students agree to it because they can follow their interests and learn more about their favorite subjects. Besides, they can gain more knowledge by receiving
18、instructions from their tutors so that they can improve their academic performance.However, 48% of the students are strongly against it. They think it adds more burdens to their study, which in turn reduces their time to have fun and relax.In my opinion, the summer vacation is a good time for us to
19、rest and to do what we like. You can make your own decision based on your interests.Writing 6限时20分随着社会对“富二代”各方面负面新闻不断的报道,最近你校学生就“金钱是否能带来幸福”这一话题进行了一场激烈的辩论,辩论的结果如下表所示:正方反方1.钱非常重要,生活离不开钱;2钱可以帮助我们解决很多问题;3钱使我们的生活更舒适。1.金钱不是万能的;2金钱买不到幸福和健康;3过分在乎金钱就会失去人生的意义。请根据以上素材为某英语报刊写一篇英语稿件,介绍这次辩论的内容,并谈谈我们应该如何看待金钱。注意:1.
20、词数100左右;2.开头已给出,但不计入总词数;3.不要逐条翻译,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。Recently we have had a discussion about whether money can bring us happiness._ _【写作指导】本文要求考生根据讨论的结果写一篇作文,观点分为正反两方面,因此考生在写作时要分清层次,另外还要表达自己的观点,因此应为三或四段式。写作时切忌逐条翻译,应使用过渡性词语和连接词以使行文连贯。标准范文:Recently we have had a discussion about whether money can bring us ha
21、ppiness. The students have different opinions.Some students think that money is so important that we couldnt survive without money. Besides, money can help us to solve many problems in life. In addition, it is money that allows us to live a comfortable life.Others, however, have opposite opinion. Th
22、ey think money doesnt mean everything. For example, money cannot buy happiness or health. If we attach too much importance to money, we cannot find the real meaning of life, and nor can we find pleasure in life.Personally, we should not regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that helps us
23、to get what we need. We should use it wisely and properly. Only in this way can we enjoy life to the fullest.Writing 7限时22分生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张。请你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。简要描述事情的经过打篮球、碰撞、争执,等等分析发生冲突的原因1.遇事不够冷静2.谈谈避免冲突的做法(请考生根据自己的经历或感想,提出至少两种做法)注意:1.对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥
24、,不要简单翻译。2词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。3作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。Conflicts with others are common in everyday life._ _【写作指导】1.本文属于文字引导类题型。考生应该注意其中时态的变化。描述事情的经过和分析发生冲突的原因应该采用一般过去时,避免冲突的做法可用一般现在时或者一般将来时。2内容要点:(1)描述事情的经过。打篮球、碰撞、争执,等等。建议考生把它编成一个小故事,注意时间、地点、人物、起因、经过和结果。(2)分析发生冲突的原因。遇事不够冷静;缺乏相互之间的交流;过于关注球赛的胜负
25、等。(3)避免冲突的做法。考生根据自己的经历或感想,提出至少两点如何避免冲突的建议,如:待人友善,学会宽容,充分交流,避免以自我为中心等。3参考词汇及句型:bump into撞上;sb.be to blame某人该受到责备;care too much about.太关注;be kind to.对友好;be selfcentered以自我为中心;put oneself in others place换位思考;It is ones fault.是某人的错;It is a virtue to do sth.做某事是一种美德。标准范文:Conflicts_with_others_are_common_
26、in_everyday_life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.To be honest, it was Sus fault, but Li was also to blamethey were not calm enough and
27、both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgiv
28、e and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others place.Dont be selfcentered. Try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.Writing 8限时20分假如你是李明,目前正在英国学习。你在网上看到某宠物收容
29、中心(Dogs Trust)正招募志愿者,请根据以下招聘信息,给中心负责人John Smith写一封申请信。注意:1.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;2词数100左右。_【写作指导】本篇写作是一封书信,考生要注意书信的格式。首先,考生要认真审题,确定收信人是John Smith,写信人是李明。本封书信可以分为三段来写:第一段写看到招聘信息想申请这份工作;第二段陈述自己申请并能胜任这份工作的理由;第三段简单写自己渴望得到这份工作,希望早日得到回复。在写作中,考生可以使用一些高级词汇和高级句式,或使用一些连接词和过渡语,以使文章连贯、过渡自然。标准范文:Dear John Smith,My name
30、is Li Ming. Im writing to you for the position because I really want to do something to help those lovely dogs.I joined a volunteer activity when I was young. I really enjoyed it. If I have this chance I believe I can do better than before.In my opinion, animals are our friends. As we all know, on t
31、he one hand, we can help them to live better; on the other hand, helping them makes us happier.Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li MingWriting 9限时20分假设你是李华,今年将要参加高考。你想在大学里学习外语专业,但是你的老师和父母都对你的选择提出了不同看法,对此你很苦恼。请你根据下表提示,用英语给你的英国笔友David发一封邮件,谈谈你的专业选择问题。建议 专业 理由父母的建议 金融 为将来从商做准备老师的建
32、议 法律 就业前景好你的想法 外语 充分发挥自己的语言天赋注意:1.词数100左右;2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3信的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。Dear David,I am at a loss nowadays._I am looking forward to your advice.Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】本文要求写一封邮件,考生要看清要求:(1)自己想学外语专业,(2)老师和父母有不同的建议,(3)自己的看法,(4)要增加相应的细节以使内容丰富,行文连贯,(5)应使用一般现在时和一般将来时。标准范文:Dear_David,I_am_at_a_loss_nowada
33、ys. My teacher and parents have different opinions about choosing my major in college. My parents think I should major in finance because they feel that it will prepare me for a career in the world of business. However, my teacher says I should choose law, who thinks that our society is in great nee
34、d of skilled workers and experts in law and I will find a good job after graduation. Despite their opinions, I want to learn a foreign language because language is what I am interested in and good at. I know it would be a waste if I dont make full use of my talent for language. What should I do?I_am
35、_looking_forward_to_your_advice.Yours,Li_HuaWriting 10限时20分假定你是李华,你的澳大利亚笔友Nancy要来你所在城市沈阳学习,在上一封邮件中她请你帮她在学校附近租一套房子。下面是你找到的适合她的出租房信息。请给她回复邮件,把相关信息告诉她。面积50平方米位置位于青年大街,3楼,距学校10分钟车程特征一室一厅,独立厨房和卫生间;整洁,明亮;周围环境好租金按日算,每天60元;按月算,每月1500元注意:1.包括所有要点;2词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Nancy,_Looking forward to meetin
36、g you soon.Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】本文要求根据图表内容给笔友回信。在时态上应以一般现在时为主。要用过渡性词语和连接词把要点连接起来,句式要多样化,不要自始至终只用一种句型。此外要注意含有数字的表达方式,准确地表达出租房信息。标准范文:Dear_Nancy,After learning that youre going to study in my hometown, Im very happy and have been looking for an apartment for you as you hoped. Now, Ive found one that may
37、satisfy you. It is an apartment with an area of 50 square meters, which has one living room, one bedroom, one separated kitchen and one bathroom. It is on the 3rd floor, which guarantees enough sunlight during the day. Located on the Youth Street and surrounded by green trees and flowers, it is only
38、 10 minutes bus ride from your school. What interests me most is the clean and nice surroundings. You can rent it by the day at 60 yuan or by the month with the cost of 1,500 yuan per month. Im sure you will like it when you see it for yourself.Looking_forward_to_meeting_you_soon.Yours,Li_Hua书面表达策略探
39、究(三)图表/图画类作文主要以图画或图表为载体,附带少量文字提示或说明,要求考生通过对图画和图表内容的理解,发挥个人的想象,根据所提供的信息写一篇短文,以描述某一事物或事情,或揭示某个道理、说明某个问题。另外,考生还需要阐述自己的观点。需要说明的是,观点的提炼最为重要,考生阐述的观点应建立在个人视角与社会视角相结合之上,方能贴近考题的立意,达到命题者的要求。写作指导:仔细审题,确定体裁、时态、人称要审清题意,看懂图画或图表所表达的意思,防止因对图画或图表的错误理解而出现跑题。有些图画或图表上附有提示,注意仔细参阅。此外,这类文章一般以记叙文、说明文和议论文为主。在人称方面,如果以日记等形式来写
40、,一般采用第一人称;如果是以讲故事的形式来写,则一般采用第三人称。分析要点,写出关键词分析要点时,要注意进行合理、适度的联想。这类文章的说明一般都要求考生进行适度的联想和发挥,以便使上下文能更好地连贯起来。确定句型,组词成句在构思成句的过程中,要注意虚实结合、详略得当。比如图画或图表中的时间、数字或言论需写清楚,而有些过程或原因则可适当简略。合理安排,串句成文认真检查,注意修改此外,看图议论文通常采用三段式的结构,即第一段描述图画内容以及图画所反映的问题;第二段分析问题或现象产生的原因;第三段从自己的观点出发,谈一下解决问题的措施。常用句式:As is described in the pic
41、ture above.This cartoon tells/warns us that.The purpose of the pictures is to.This picture brings me back to.The picture reminds me of.The cartoon vividly illustrates.The purpose of the drawing is to show us that.Such an image draws our attention to the fact that.As can be seen from the drawings.Loo
42、king at the picture, I cant help thinking of the more and more serious phenomenon of.The bar chart illustrates that.The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that.Writing 1限时20分2016辽宁抚顺质检在一次课堂讨论中,大家对朋友和友谊进行了讨论。请根据下表内容,用英语写一篇短文,并谈谈你对友谊的看法。为什么需要朋友1.许多问题靠自己无法解决,要靠朋友帮助;2可与朋友分享快乐、分担忧愁、少受寂寞。什么
43、是真正的朋友和友谊1.敬重你而你也敬重的人;2在你需要他的时候绝不离开你;3牺牲自己的利益,给你真诚和无私的帮助;4鼓励你坚持正确的东西,少犯些错误。你对友谊的看法(自由发挥)注意:1.短文必须包括所有要点;2词数100左右;3短文开头已写好,不计入总词数。In life we can hardly do anything without friends. There are many difficulties and problems we cant overcome with only our own efforts. Besides, we need friends to share o
44、ur joys and sorrows, otherwise we will feel lonely._【写作指导】本文为图表类作文。考生可据图表分三段来写。写作时注意勿逐条翻译,应使用过渡性词语和连接词以使行文连贯顺畅。标准范文:In_life_we_can_hardly_do_anything_without_friends._There_are_many_difficulties_and_problems_we_cant_overcome_with_only_our_own_efforts._Besides,_we_need_friends_to_share_our_joys_and_s
45、orrows,_otherwise_we_will_feel_lonely.What is true friendship? A good friend is someone who respects you and who you respect. As the saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” True friends are those who never desert you when you are in need. On the contrary, they will offer you sincere and
46、selfless help even at the cost of their own interests. Moreover, they will encourage you to stick to what is right and tell you not to do what is wrong or illegal.In my opinion, true friendship is largely based on supporting each other. Whenever we have problems, we never hesitate to offer support t
47、o each other. Besides, we are supposed to help and trust each other. In conclusion, true friendship will stand the test of time.Writing 2限时20分2015江苏高考请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。写作内容:1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;2结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;3根据你的分析,从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。写作要求:1.写
48、作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3不必写标题。评分标准:内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。_【写作指导】本文为图表类作文。可分三段来写,第一段按题目要求用约30个单词简要概括写作材料的要点;第二段结合材料信息简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;第三段简要阐明自己对交通问题的观点。写作时注意句子之间和段落之间衔接词的使用,以使行文流畅。标准范文:The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people
49、s lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the largescale construction of roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing number of cars these years. Whats worse, som
50、e drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone dont secure an orderly society.
51、 It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybodys duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.Writing 3限时20分2017河北衡水高三调研假如你是李华,你所在城市的孔子学院(the Confucius Institute)将举办“汉语桥”比赛,该比赛面向学习汉语的外国青年学生。你的美国笔友David学习汉语多年,你想建议他参加这个比赛。请你根据下列提示给David写一封信介绍这个比赛并鼓励他
52、参赛。 “汉语桥”比赛活动目的提供展示汉语能力的舞台激发学生学习汉语的热情增进对中华文化的理解参赛对象30岁以下、母语非汉语的外国高校学生比赛内容演讲(3分钟)当场问答(2分钟)中国文化技艺表演(3分钟)参赛方式参赛者必须在2015年2月1日前向组委会提交个人信息资料邮箱:chinesebridgehanban.org_【写作指导】本文为图表类作文。在写作时应注意要点必须全面,不能遗漏。句式尽量多样化,避免单一。标准范文:Dear David,The Confucius Institute in my city is holding a competition named “Chinese B
53、ridge”, and I think you can have a try. It aims to provide foreign college students with a platform to show their ability in the Chinese language, motivate their passion for it, and promote their understanding of Chinese culture.The competitors must be college students less than 30 years old whose m
54、other tongue is not Chinese. The competition includes three parts: a threeminute speech, a twominute questionandanswer, and a threeminute performance of skills related to Chinese culture.Participants are required to submit their personal information to the organizing committee before February 1st, 2
55、015, at chinesebridgehanban.org.Writing 4限时22分2016陕西咸阳三模假如你是李华,是校学生会的一名成员。请代表校办写一份英文书面通知,公告学校4月2729日迎五一活动安排。内容要点如下:年级活动内容活动地点活动时间活动要求高一、高二田径运动会操场三天,每日8:00开始全体师生按时参加高三歌舞表演礼堂4月29日8:0012:00注意:1.总词数100左右;2可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;3不允许写真实校名;4开头语和结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数。参考词汇:礼堂auditoriumNoticeApril 25, 2016A notice is given
56、 that _The Headmasters Office 【写作指导】1.本文时态应以一般将来时为主;2第一段告知学校为迎五一于4月2729日举行一些庆祝活动;3第二段根据表中内容对高一、高二年级和高三年级的活动内容、活动地点、活动时间进行介绍;4第三段介绍活动要求。标准范文:NoticeApril_25,_2016A_notice_is_given_that some activities will be carried out to celebrate Labor Day from April 27 to 29, according to our school schedule.The
57、students in Senior 1 and 2 will hold the yearly sports meet in the playground, which will begin at 8:00 every morning. Those who wont have any events shall be cheerleaders to cheer the players up. Almost meanwhile, Senior 3 students will put on singing and dancing performances from 8:00 to 12:00 on
58、April 29 in the school auditorium. The music records must be prepared and turned in to the Student Union in advance.All the students and teachers are required to be present on time.The_Headmasters_OfficeWriting 5限时20分2016河北模拟高中生熬夜现象开始上升。下面两个表格是高中生熬夜情况的调查结果。请你根据表格的内容,写一篇调查报告,并提出个人建议。表一:熬夜原因学习45.65%玩网
59、络游戏19.57%受别人影响15.22%其他19.56%表二:熬夜的结果听课效率低50.25%身体不适16.87%成绩有提高11.7%其他21.18%注意:1.词数120左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_【写作指导】本篇写作是叙述一则调查结果,因此时态应以一般现在时为主。在写作中还要注意使用连接词和过渡词以使文章连贯,不要罗列各条内容。另外要分层叙述,并提出个人建议。标准范文: As is shown in the survey, more and more senior students are staying up late at night now. Why they prefe
60、r doing so is shown in the first form. Most of those students stay up for study, which makes up 45.65%, while 19.57% are playing online games and 19.56% are doing something else. There are even 15.22% who are just following this trend. But it has brought something really bad to the students. More st
61、udents are influenced by staying up. 50.25% of the students feel inefficient when listening to the teacher in class, and 16.87% feel uneasy in their body. However, only 11.7% do better in their study. So in my opinion, they should arrange their time scientifically, and try not to stay up. Meanwhile,
62、 they should spend time in studying rather than playing online games.Writing 6限时20分2014全国卷假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。注意:1.词数100左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:住宿 accommodation_【写作指导】本篇写作要求考生询问该广告的细节问题,所以时态应以一般将来时为主,并且要点要全面。在写作时要注意使用多种句型以使文章连贯丰富。标准范文:Dear Sir/Madam,I am a
63、student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. Ive seen your ad, and Id like to know something more about your sixweek English course. First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too ma
64、ny students in a class. Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be host family or university dormitory?I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li HuaWriting 7限时22分2017南京建邺高级中学模拟下列图表反映的是某高中2015年与2016年学生健康状况调查的部分数据
65、,请你用英语为某报写一份报告,反映你校三年间学生健康状况的变化情况,分析其中原因,并提出一些改进措施。注意事项:1.报告必须包括图表中所有内容,但不要逐条罗列;2词数120左右;3标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。HealthA recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years._【写作指导】本文为一篇典型的图表类作文。写作时应注意:(1)正确使用百分数表达法;(2)时态应以一般现在时为主;(3)句式尽
66、量多样化,避免单一。标准范文:HealthA_recent_survey_shows_that_the_health_of_the_students_in_our_school_has_been_going_from_bad_to_worse_in_the_past_three_years. The number of nearsighted students has increased from 77% in 2015 to 93.5% in 2016, while that of overweight students from 38% to 57.5%. Nearly 15% more
67、students dont have enough sleep because of more homework. Besides, over 21% more students become mentally unhealthy.It seems to me that the reasons for this lie in heavier burden of study and more homework, thus making students unable to spare any time to take exercise or have enough sleep. To impro
68、ve students health, we call for less homework. Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and be more healthy. Proper diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they wont easily put on weight. With their heavy burdens removed, students can then keep in normal mental health.Wr
69、iting 8限时22分2016大庆模拟假如你校最近就“家长应该如何对待孩子”的问题进行了调查,结果如下。请根据图表1中提供的信息描述调查结果,并针对图表2中的一个数据所反映的情况表达你的看法。_【写作指导】这是一篇典型的图表类作文。要求考生准确地表述调查结果并表达自己的看法。在写作时应注意:(1)正确使用分数的表达法;(2)时态应以一般现在时为主;(3)分层次叙述,分为喜欢不喜欢两个方面;(4)句式要复杂多样,可使用从句等句式来表达。标准范文:Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how par
70、ents treat their children.According to Chart 1, three kinds of behavior from parents are considered the most welcome among the students. 33.5% of the students feel happy that their parents trust them, laying a basic foundation for family communication. 31.7% are content to be in the equal position w
71、ith their parents when they are talking with each other. Whats more, 22.7% feel happy to receive constant praise or encouragement from their parents.As is shown in Chart 2, 32% of the students think their parents expect too much of them, especially in their studies, putting great pressure on them. A
72、lthough all parents love their children and want the best for them, they put too much pressure on their children. Some students think they will fail if they are not admitted into a top school or university.I think parents should have practical expectations of their children. This way,the children wi
73、ll feel more confident about themselves and really make a difference in the future.Writing 9限时22分2016汕头模拟某英文报纸以“一个有魅力的人”为话题开展征文活动,请你写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你对有魅力的人的看法。【写作内容】你的调查几乎所有的人都希望自己能成为一个有魅力的人;有魅力的人在聚会上似乎与所有的人都熟悉,所有的人似乎都被他吸引。如何成为有魅力的人热爱运动,让你处于快乐积极的精神状态中;优雅着装,让自己和他人感觉良好;善于交流,乐意倾听并关注他人的讲话,谈论积极的事物,让别人在与你交流之后感觉
74、舒畅很多。你的结论尊重他人,才会受到他人的尊重。参考词汇:有魅力的charming_【写作指导】本篇习作要求考生根据调查结果谈自己的看法,因此全文应以一般现在时为主。在写作时还要注意:(1)要点全面,不能遗漏;(2)要使用过渡性词语和复杂句式表述,不能逐句翻译,平铺直叙。标准范文:According to my survey, almost everyone hopes that he or she can become a charming person. Most people agree that a charming person seems to know everybody and
75、 everybody just seems drawn to him at a gathering. To become a charming person, first, youd better exercise to get you in a happy and positive state and put on the nice clothes to make you and others feel good. Then you should also be good at communicating with others, always ready to listen to othe
76、rs and keep on discussing positive things so that people feel better after talking with you. So, in my opinion, a charming person should respect others because only those who respect others are respected.Writing 10限时22分2016山西重点中学二模近期,山西某校组织高三学生进行了一场讨论。主题是:高三学生要不要集中进行晚自习。根据下图提供的信息,写一篇120词左右的英语短文,客观地介
77、绍一下讨论的情况,注意要涵盖所有要点。注意:开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。Recently there was a heated discussion among Senior 3 students in our school. The students were questioned whether they were willing to have the evening selfstudy at school or not. Here is the result according to the survey._【写作指导】1.时态以一般现在时为主;人称使用第三人称。2要点:(1)60%
78、的学生认为集中进行晚自习是个好主意,因为有老师管理,有同学陪伴,此外有良好的学习环境;(2)25%的学生不支持集中进行晚自习,有时受同学影响,学习效果不好,晚上独自回家不安全;(3)15%的学生认为无所谓,但如果学校要求,他们会来学校集中上晚自习。标准范文:Recently_there_was_a_heated_discussion_among_Senior_3_students_in_our_school._The_students_were_questioned_whether_they_were_willing_to_have_the_evening_selfstudy_at_schoo
79、l_or_not._Here_is_the_result_according_to_the_survey.60 percent of the students think its a good idea to have the evening selfstudy at school. They think they can do better in their study with the help of the teachers. Also, they can concentrate on their lessons better in the classroom in company wi
80、th their fellow classmates.There are 25 percent of the students who think they prefer to study at home. They suppose that they may get disturbed by others and there are possible dangers on their way home alone.At the same time, still 15 percent of the students dont have a clear answer to the questio
81、n. They say they will go to school to have the evening selfstudy if they are asked to, but they promise they can also do well at home.书面表达策略探究(四)书面表达常用词语和结构1先后次序关系at this time, first, second, at last, next, previously, eventually, last but not least, to begin with, to start with, to end with, finall
82、y, seeing.“由于,因为”, since then, first of all, afterwards“后来”, following this, preceding“先前的”, originally“最初地”2因果关系because, because of this, being that “(口语)既然, 因为”, another important factor/reason for., since, as, for, in that., owing to“由于”, due to“由于”, for the reason that., in view of “鉴于,考虑到”, res
83、ult from, The reason seems to be obvious, There are about., for this reason, as a result of this, therefore, .and so., consequently “所以,因此”, as a result, thus, hence “因此”, so, so that., in consequence“结果”, as a consequence, accordingly “因此,于是,相应地”,inevitably “不可避免地”3转折关系but, even so, however, though
84、, even though, independent of, regardless of, despite that, in spite of that, yet., and yet, but unless, nonetheless “尽管如此”4并列关系and, also, too, as well as, either.or., both.and.5(补充)递进关系furthermore “此外,而且”, moreover “此外,而且”, further “进一步地,此外”, in this way, still, not only.but also., not.but., in add
85、ition (to), additionally, much more interesting, more specifically “更确切地说”, next, besides, as far as. be concerned “至于”, moreover“此外”, in other words, on the other hand., even, as a saying goes., in order to do it., meanwhile “同时”, at the same time, accordingly “因此”, in the first place., in the seco
86、nd place., equally important, of even greater appeal6比较关系similarly, in comparison with, when compared with, compared with, like., similarly important7归纳总结in a word, in sum, in short, in brief, in conclusion, in summary, therefore “因此”, hence “因此”, to sum up, to conclude, the conclusion can be drawn that, for this reason, on the whole