1、热点08 书面表达之热点话题类（三）【热点话题】 话题：祖国70周年庆；传统文化；科技创新；学生安全；环境保护；共享单车【限时检测】（建议用时：30分钟）A（2018届山东泰安市肥城市九年级中考第三次模拟）话题：祖国70周年难度：建议用时：5分青少年是祖国未来的建设者，为了实现伟大的中国梦，应该不断地补充正能量(positive energy)。正能量包括以下几个方面：品行正能量：热爱祖国(motherland)，关爱他人，保护环境学业正能量：好学上进，成为有用的人才(an able man)健康正能量：锻炼身体，远离垃圾食品，生活习惯健康要求：根据以上提示，就如何补充正能量写一篇英语短文谈谈
2、自己的看法，可以适当发挥，不少于80词。_【参考范文】Young people are the builders of the motherlands future. In order to achieve the great Chinese dream, we should add more positive energy.Firstly, we should love our motherland, care for others, and protect the environment.Secondly, if we want to make progress, we should wo
3、rk hard. When we grow up, we can become able men.At last, to keep healthy, we must stay away from junk food. We must have healthy eating diet, we can do more exercise.【名师点评】这篇短文主要介绍三方面的内容。我们要注意内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。【写作亮点】这篇短文基本覆盖了所有内容要点；应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇；句子通顺、表达清楚，没有语言错误；书写工整；字数符合要求。达到了预期的写作目的。
4、B(2018年广东省广州市白云区中考一模)话题：传统文化难度：建议用时：5分为了弘扬中华传统文化，你校即将举行中华传统文化大家谈的演讲比赛，你打算参加比赛，请根据以下内容提示，写一篇演讲稿，介绍广州的传统文化逛花街。时间春节前夕地点各区不同，最传统的是西湖路花市活动1. 赏花、买花2. 吃传统小吃3. 观赏传统灯饰感受与家人朋友一起、增进感情（至少一点）对传统文化的看法（至少一点）要求：1.词数80字左右（开头已给出，不计入词数）2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。3.参考词汇：灯笼lantern Guangzhou is a beautiful city which is f
5、ull of traditional culture. Visiting the Flower Market is one of the traditions in Guangzhou. Now let me introduce it to you. _ 【参考范文】Guangzhou is a beautiful city which is full of traditional culture. Visiting the Flower Market is one of the traditions in Guangzhou. Now let me introduce it to you.P
6、eople in Guangzhou like to visit the Flower Market before the Spring Festival. Different district has different places. The most famous Flower Market lies in Xihu Road. You can enjoy different kinds of flowers there. If you like, you can also buy some. Besides flowers, you will also taste a lot of t
7、raditional snacks. Along the street, you can also enjoy the beauty of different traditional lanterns and lights. I like visiting the Flower Market because it is a good way for people to get together and communicate with each other. When you are there, you will have a strong feeling that the New Year
8、 is coming. China has much traditional culture. Its our duty to spread/introduce our traditional culture to the world and let them learn more about China.【名师点评】1.题干解读：本题要求介绍广州的传统文化逛花街，是表格式作文。作者开门见山点出话题Visiting the Flower Market is one of the traditions in Guangzhou；然后从时间、地点和活动三个方面介绍逛花街的传统习俗；最后介绍自己的感
9、受和对传统文化的看法。2.例文点评：这篇习作是总分总结构。用第二和第一人称展开论述，时态是一般现在时；短文开篇点题，内容充实，衔接自然，结构完整，表达条理，是一篇优秀的习作。3.高分亮点：短语：full of, one of, different kinds of, like to do, Spring Festival, a lot of traditional snacks, get together, communicate with, each other, in a word, let sb. do sth.句型：Its our duty to spread/introduce ou
10、r traditional culture to the world and let them learn more about China.（固定句型）If you like, you can also buy some.（条件状语从句）I like visiting the Flower Market because it is a good way for people to get together and communicate with each other.（原因状语从句）When you are there, you will have a strong feeling tha
11、t the New Year is coming.（复合时间状语从句结构）C（2017年初中毕业升学考试（广州卷)）话题：科技创新难度：建议用时：5分假如你发明的飞行单车在学校科技节中获奖，被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展览。请用英语介绍你的发明，内容包括下图中14项。飞行单车1.外观：两个轮子，两只翅膀2.用途：行驶于地面和空中、可拍照、能对话3.特点：速度快、使用太阳能、环保4.改进计划（12点）注意：（1）参考词汇：轮子wheel 太阳能solar power （2）词数80左右（文章的开头己给出，不计入词数）。（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。My invention
12、 is a flying bike. ._【参考范文】My invention is a flying bikeIt is fast，convenient and green! The flying bike has two wheels and two wingsIt has a top speed of 300km/h. You can go to farther places in a shorter timeIt can run on land and fly in the airIf you shout fly the bike will turn into a plane in 3
13、0 secondsThen you can fly in the airYou will be as free as a birdIt can take photos，tooInstead of petrol, the bike uses solar power，so it will not pollute the airI will add a seat behind it so that it can carry two persons. My invention will help people live a better life in the futureD（2019年广东省广州市越
14、秀区七中中考一模）话题：学生安全难度：建议用时：5分建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。作为一名学生，我们更应该珍惜自己的生命，更应该注意自己的人身安全。假如你是Li Hua，并担任校学生会主席，请你就安全问题，向全校学生发出倡议，写一封安全倡议书。包括以下要点：1）不带管制刀具到学校；2）不打架；3）上学放学的途中应该注意交通安全；4）遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。5） 参考词汇：管制的：restricted；紧急情况：emergency写作要求：1）用词恰当，要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范。2）可适当发挥，80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。3）严禁出现自己的真实姓名和学校等相关
15、信息。Dear students,As you know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. _Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear students,As you know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. In my opinion, following these safety rules can make us live in peace.Firstly, we mustnt bring restricted knives or things to
16、our school because these things may cause serious problems. Secondly, we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned. And, it is necessary for us to pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Furthermore, mind the steps when you are going down the stairs. Dont play wi
17、th others at that time. Last but not the least, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers.In a word, we should try our best to make sure we are safe.Yours Li Hua【名师点评】1. 题干解读：该题目属于应用文，文章需使用书信格式写作。在文章开头应该写出写作目的，并引出下文；第二段详细讲述自己的观点；第三段总结自己的观点。2. 例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态使用的
18、是一般现在时；作者对于自己的观点阐述非常完整，而且条理清晰。3. 高分亮点：短语：as you know; in my opinion; firstly; secondly; furthermore; Last but not the least; In a word句型：it is necessary for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说做某事是必要的 We should do sth. 我们应该做某事E话题：环境保护难度：建议用时：5分今天是星期天，你以环境保护为主题，与老师和同学们一起展开了一系列的活动。请你根据此活动，写一篇70词左右的日记。要点包括：1出发时间和地点：上午
19、8:00 ；校门口；2目的地：苏州市附近的一个小镇；3交通工具：校车；4. 活动内容：捡垃圾、塑料袋，打扫街道，种树、种花；5返回时间：下午6点。_【写作思路】对于话题作文，句子要达意、完整、语法正确、合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词的形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。写作时要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。要忠实于材料，不必扩展过多，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。【参考范文】Sunday June 3, 2018 Fine Today I was very
20、 excited because I did a lot of things with my teachers and classmates to protect our environment. We met at the school gate at 8:00 in the morning. We went to a small town near Suzhou in our school bus. We collected litter and picked up plastic bags. We cleaned the dirty streets. Then we planted ma
21、ny trees and flowers. At six we came back home. I felt very tired but happy.F (福建省厦门市第一中学2019届初三年级第一学期期中考试)话题：共享单车难度：建议用时：5分共享单车(bike-sharing)被誉为中国现代新四大发明之一。如今厦门的大街小巷也随处可见共享单车的身影。请你根据表格内容，简要介绍共享单车的发展及使用方法，并表达一下你自己对共享单车的看法。DevelopmentFirst used in Holland,1965introduced in China in 2007been popular s
22、ince 2016Instructionscan the QR code(二维码)unlock the smart lockpay the billOpinionhealthy,.blocking(堵塞) the way,.要求：1.必须包含所提示信息，字数100词左右；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名及提示信息之外的地名。提示词：shared bikes 共享的自行车_ 【写作思路】这是一篇给材料作文。要求根据表格中所给出的内容，简要介绍共享单车的发展及使用方法，并表达一下你自己对共享单车的看法。文章时态主要用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称主要是第一
23、、第三人称。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。【参考范文】With the development of the economy, shared bikes are seen everywhere. It was first used in Holland in 1965. It was introduced i
24、n China in 2007 and it has been popular since 2016.How can we use the shared bikes? Firstly, we need to scan the QR code if we want to use them. Secondly, when we get to our destination, we should unlock the smart lock. Finally, we need to pay the bill.Different people have different opinions about
25、shared bikes. Some people believe that riding shared bikes is healthy. It can build up our body. However, others argues that it blocks the way. In my opinion, it is good to ride shared bikes, because it is good for our health. Whats more, we can enjoy beautiful scenery. Nevertheless, we should use them properly.【写作亮点】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
