1、1书面表达 第26课时图画类五2 图画类作文以图画和文字相结合的方式呈现内容要点。通过一幅或一组画来引导考生看懂画面的情节，深刻理解图画所反映的事实或包含的思想内容，从而以文字的形式将其表达出来，难度在于图画是形象语言，要转化为逻辑语言。考生需要仔细观察，否则容易遗漏要点。图画类文章按功能可分为两类：一是通过图画叙述一个活动；二是通过图画揭示某一问题。3(2011江苏卷)下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家的妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。4你的短文应包含以下内容：1.描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；2.结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；3.举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。
2、5注意：1.可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。6The burden of students has been a hot topic for years,but the load of parents has received little attention,especially from their own children._ 7【解题步骤】1.审题：该书面表达为图画类，图片内容为小女孩为下班回家的妈妈拿包的情景；文章题材为“家长减负”；体裁根据写作要求为夹叙夹议；注意文章中
3、的动词应与不同的人称保持一致；并注意选择合适的时态表达。82.根据要点，列提纲文章要点：(1)照片的情景、人物、动作等Mom comes home after work；a little girl comesto greet her working mom;remove the bag from hershoulder;mother kneels down(2)结合自身实际谈感想My mother does a lot for me;always gives me thebest;she is very busy preparing for my life;I seldompay attent
4、ion to what mother needs and feels;alwaysthink studying well is the only thing I could do in return9(3)自己能为家长减负做什么I can do my bit to share mothers daily burden,such as washing,room cleaning,preparing breakfastmyself10文章提纲：第一段：阐述文章的主题。该书面表达开头已给出主题句。第二段：阐述照片的内容要点。用常见的开头From this picture,we can see/As
5、is shown in thepicture等。第三段：结合自身体会谈感想，并简述自己能为家长减负做什么。113.连句成篇时，要注意正确使用连接词。The burden of students has been a hot topic foryears,but the load of parents has received littleattention,especially from their own children.The picture shows us a touching moment when alittle girl comes to greet her working m
6、om.Realizingher mom must be tired after a days work,the little girlhelps to remove the bag from her shoulder.Inresponse,the mom kneels down to show how happyand thankful she feels.12All this reminds me of my mother who has beendoing whatever she could to let me have the best.However,totally engaged
7、in my own study,I seldompay attention to what mother needs and feels,andalways think studying well is the only thing I could doin return.Now I know I can do my bit to help with theeveryday washing,bedroom cleaning,or at leastprepare breakfast myself,so as to share mothers dailyburden.The picture convinces me it is even moreimportant to be a good daughter than a“good”student.134.全面检查，书法规范。注意检查拼写、标点符号及人称、时态、语态、句子结构及逻辑的错误；注意文章的连贯性和得体性，句式的多样化以及高级词汇的运用。