1、第六讲吸引眼球的定语从句定语从句的正确使用能够比较明显地反映出考生对于语言具有较高的掌握能力，所以建议考生一定要在写作中至少使用一个恰到好处的定语从句。1关系代词引导的定语从句关系代词who，whom，whose，that，which，as引导的定语从句是写作的一大重点，尤其是which和as引导的非限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜。(湖北高考书面表达)I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon.我记忆犹新的是发生在一个雨天的周日下午的一个事件。(2015福建高考书面表达)Only t
2、hose who spare no effort to confront problems can achieve what they long for.只有那些面对困难不遗余力的人才能取得他们渴望的成就。(2015重庆高考书面表达)As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass.正如古老的谚语所说，生活没有清晰可达成的目标，犹如航海没有指南针。2关系副词引导的定语从句关系副词引导的定语从句是指when，where，why引导的定语从句。(全国卷
3、书面表达)During holiday seasons，I will live in the countryside, where air is fresh and people are friendly.在假期，我会住在乡下，那里空气新鲜而且人们友好。(安徽高考书面表达)I think the reason why you are always angry may be the high pressure of study.我认为你总是发脾气的原因可能是学习上的巨大压力。3“介词which/whom”引导的定语从句(2015四川高考书面表达)Speaking and listening ar
4、e very important for a language learning，by which you are sure to make great progress.听和说对于一门语言的学习非常重要，通过它们你一定会取得很大进步。I bought a great many books，on which I spent all my money that I saved.我买了很多书，这些书花了我所有的积蓄。一句多译1(2017武汉调研)事实上，我来这儿拜访我叔叔，目前他碰巧在你们城市工作。As a matter of fact, I am here visiting my uncle.H
5、e happens to be working in your city at presentAs a matter of fact, I am here visiting my uncle, who happens to be working in your city at present(定语从句)2(2015陕西高考书面表达)在几次我班的英语活动中我已帮助她，这受到老师和同学的欣赏。I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class. It has been appreciated by
6、both teachers and my classmatesI have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which has been appreciated by both teachers and my classmates(定语从句)3我总是盼望着我独立的那一天。Ive always longed for the day. I will be able to be independent thenIve always longed for the day when I will
7、be able to be independent(定语从句)4因此，我认为我能得一个高分，这个分数能使我进入一个理想的大学。So I suppose I can get a good mark.It will enable me to enter my ideal collegeSo I suppose I can get a good mark which will enable me to enter my ideal college(定语从句)5我们都喜欢我们的英语老师，我们已向她学习了很多东西。We all like our English teacher. We have lear
8、ned a lot from herWe all like our English teacher from whom we have learned a lot(定语从句)1As we all know/As is known to all众所周知As we all know，children and elderly people both need warmth and care.众所周知，小孩和老年人都需要温暖和关心。2As sb.puts it按照某人所说的As he often puts it，university education determines ones future.按
9、照他常说的，大学教育决定一个人的未来。3suchas像这样的；诸如此类的He is not such a fool as he looks.他并不像看上去的那样愚蠢。4As the old saying goes,常言道As the old saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.”常言道，熟能生巧。5the sameas/the same as像一样的Her manner and attitudes towards him were quite the same as they had always been.她对他的方式和态度与以前完全一样。6one of
10、 the复数名词定语从句 中的一个As far as I know，your sister is one of the students who have passed the exam.据我所知，你妹妹是通过考试的学生之一。7the only one of the复数名词定语从句 中唯一的一个Mr.Green was the only one of the workers that was invited to Beijing.格林先生是这些工人中唯一被邀请去北京的。单句写作1(2015福建高考书面表达)我们大家都知道，这幅画讲述的是古代中国的一个故事。As we all know，the
11、picture tells a story of ancient China.2据我所知，她就是这样一个总是乐于助人的女孩。As far as I know，she is such a girl as is always ready to help others.3长城是吸引大批游客的世界著名的建筑之一。The Great Wall is one of the worldfamous buildings that attract lots of visitors.4(广东高考书面表达)另外，正如古老的谚语所说，“赠人玫瑰，手有余香”。For another, as the old saying
12、 goes，“The roses in her hand; the flavor in mine.”5(2015湖南高考书面表达)使我非常高兴的是，老师在我同学面前高度评价了我的好成绩，这使我感到自豪。Much to my delight, the teacher sang high praise for my great achievements before my classmates, which made me very proud1误用关系词误：I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China.正：I live in Beijing,
13、which is the capital of China.误：I have a friend, whos name is Liu Mei.正：I have a friend, whose name is Liu Mei.2句子成分残缺误：There were many students took part in the English competition.正：There were many students who took part in the English competition.误：Those who in favor of the proposal, please raise
14、 your hands.正：Those who are in favor of the proposal, please raise your hands.3有多余的代词或副词误：The film I saw it last night was really very good.正：The film I saw last night was really very good.误：Last week, I returned to the village where I grew up there in my childhood.正：Last week, I returned to the vil
15、lage where I grew up in my childhood.4混淆定语从句与并列句误：In fact, smoking is a bad habit, it does great harm to peoples health.正：In fact, smoking is a bad habit, which/and it does great harm to peoples health.误：His parents told him many times not to play beside the river, it didnt help.正：His parents told h
16、im many times not to play beside the river, which/but it didnt help.单句改错1China has many islands, one of them is Taiwan.themwhich2(2017山东省实验中学模拟)John invited about 40 people to his wedding, most of who were family members.whowhom3(2017山西忻州四校联考)The yellow house which windows face south is the place wh
17、ere I spent my childhood.whichwhose4She has been a teacher for 30 years in the place where used to be a poor area. wherewhich/that5As a child, Jack studied in a village school, it is named after his grandfather.itwhich或在it前加and 用定语从句完成句子1(天津高考书面表达)我希望你能帮助我们班的学生更多地了解英语和西方文化，这能增进我们的理解并有助于我们建立良好的关系。I h
18、ope you can help the students in our class to learn more about English and western culture, which can increase understanding and help build good relationships between us.2(重庆高考书面表达)我们都知道，当我们需要帮助时，我们的朋友会伸出援手，他们会帮我们渡过难关。As we all know，our friends lend us a helping hand when we need help and they help
19、us get through difficult situations. 3他谈到了他在那个国家所见到的人和所参观的地方。He talked about the people and the place that he had met and visited in that country4(全国卷书面表达)首先，我将有一个温暖的家庭，在这个家庭中我们互相爱护、互相关心。First of all, I will have a warm family where the members will love each other and care about each other5(福建高考)没经
20、历过暴风雨的水手永远不会成为一名优秀的水手。A sailor who has experienced no storm will never become an excellent sailor. 请按以下内容要点写一篇有关你的同学Kate的英语短文,尽可能多地使用定语从句1我有一个同学叫Kate，她的妈妈是我以前的英语老师。2Kate是一个容易相处的人，我们都喜欢她。3Kate在此次口语竞赛中获得第一名，这使得她妈妈很高兴。4新年就要到了，到时Kate会和她妈妈一起去香港。5众所周知，香港是一个购物天堂，Kate打算在那里买她需要的东西。_One possible version：I hav
21、e a classmate called Kate, whose mother is my former English teacher. Kate is a girl who is easy to get along with and we all like her. Kate took the first place in the Speech Contest, which makes her mother happy. The New Year is coming, when Kate will go to Hong Kong together with her mother. As we all know, Hong Kong is a shopping paradise, where Kate intends to buy what she needs.