1、1书面表达 第25课时图表类五2 图表类作文要求将图表形式的信息转化成段落文字信息,类似于提纲作文,信息的提供通常以图表的形式列出来,要求考生弄清所给的图表、数据、标题及文字说明等各种信息之间的关系,通过分析、研究,提炼和确定文章的中心思想,得出令人信服的结论。图表式作文的几种形式有曲线图(line graph)、表格(table)、饼状图(pie chart)和柱状图(bar chart)等。3 注意:1)图表和数据内容不必全部描述,要突出重点,抓住图表中的极端点。如:最大或最小、最多或最少、最好或最差。2)善于抓住总的规律、趋势,归纳增减率。3)特定时间用过去时,经常出现的情况或自己评述用
2、一般现在时。4(2011南京市高三模拟)目前,就业形势越来越严峻。就业压力不仅是大学毕业生无法回避的现实,也是高中生需要考虑的问题。请你根据下表提供的内容提要,以How to face the pressure of finding jobs为题,写一篇演讲稿,以便在你校即将举行的英语演讲比赛中使用。5造成就业压力的原因你对如何解决就业压力的看法和建议1.大学扩大招生造成大学毕业生逐年增多。1.建议减少大学的招生数而扩大职业院校的招生数。2.全球性的经济危机造成一些行业裁员。2.作为高中生应努力学习,提高自身素质,获得就业机会。3.有些大学毕业生对工资、工种要求太高。3.自由发挥(起码30个英
3、语单词)6注意:1.对所给要点逐一陈述并适当发挥,但不要简单翻译。2.词数:150左右。开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数。3.演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。4.参考词语:招生 enroll students;经济危机economic crisis;职业院校 vocational colleges andschools7Good afternoon,everyone!The topic of my speechtoday is“How to face the pressure of finding jobs”.As weall know,the employment situation
4、is getting more seriousnow.There are different reasons for this situation._Thank you for listening!8【解题步骤】1.审题:该书面表达为图表类,其主题为就业压力及解决对策;文章题材为“如何面对就业压力问题”;体裁为演讲稿,根据写作要求和提供的语言点,分析造成就业压力的原因以及个人对此的看法和建议;人称为第一人称;时态为一般现在时。92.文章要点:(1)造成就业压力的原因Firstly,universities have been enrolling toomany students.Secondl
5、y,the present global economiccrisis has caused some industries and businesses to cutdown the number of their employees/workers.Thirdly,some graduates set too high a demand for salary andfor the kind of job.10(2)解决就业压力的看法和建议gradually reduce the enrollment;to be betterqualified for good and satisfacto
6、ry jobs in the future;learn how to put our knowledge we learn at school intopractice at work(3)个人观点和倡议meet the needs of the changing society and findjobs we can do well113.列提纲,连句成篇文章提纲:第一段:提出演讲的主题,指出形势的严峻性,该书面表达开头已给出主题句。第二段:阐述造成就业压力的原因,用一系列事实来说明。采用一些过渡性的词语来表明顺序,常见有Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly等,起到层次分明的作用
7、。12第三段:提出解决问题的途径,从多方面论述如何解决就业压力问题。第四段:用经典的话语和独特的结构概括文章的主题,使个人观点跃然纸上。134.连句成篇时,要注意正确使用连接词。Good afternoon,everyone!The topic of myspeech today is“How to face the pressure of findingjobs”.As we all know,the employment situation isgetting more serious now.There are different reasonsfor this situation.14
8、Firstly,universities have been enrolling toomany students,which results in an everincreasingnumber of graduates.Secondly,the present globaleconomic crisis has caused some industries andbusinesses to cut down the number of their employees.Thirdly,some graduates set too high a demand forsalary and for
9、 the kind of job,which means they willhave fewer job chances.15In my opinion,in order to deal with the pressure,universities should gradually reduce the enrollment,while vocational colleges and schools should takemore students.As high school students,we shouldattach great importance to our study so
10、as to be betterqualified for good and satisfactory jobs in the future.Whats more,we should learn how to put ourknowledge we learn at school into practice at work.Only in this way can we meet the needs of thechanging society and find jobs we can do well.Thank you for listening!165.全面检查,语言点是否齐全;格式是否规范;阐述是否深刻;是否有效的使用高级词汇或短语使文章熠熠生辉,读上去胜人一筹。