1、2021高考英语读后续写专题（五）一：典题技法指导Old Man Donovan was a mean man who hated children. He threw rocks at them and even shot at them with a shotgun. At least thats what we had heard.His small farm bordered our neighborhood where my younger sister, Leigh Ann, and I lived when we were growing up. His farm was lon
2、g, narrow, and quaint. It held two treasures. One was his beautiful fruit.There were many varieties of fruit: pears, apples, and lots more I just cant think of. The fruit naturally drew the children to his land. It made them into thieves. But my sister and I didnt dare to take his fruit because of t
3、he horrible rumors we had heard about Old Man Donovan.One summer day, we were playing in a nearby field. It was time to head back home. My sister and I were feeling very daring that day. There was a short cut to our house that went through the Donovan farm. We thought he wouldnt be able to see us ru
4、n across his property around the luscious fruit trees. We were almost through the farm when we heard, Hey, girl! in a gruff, low voice. We stopped dead in our tracks! There we were, face to face with Old Man Donovan. Our knees were shaking. We had visions of rocks pounding our bodies and bullets pie
5、rcing our hearts.Come here, he said, reaching up to one of his apple trees. Still shaking, we went over to him. He held out several ripe, juicy, red apples. Take these home, he commanded. We took the apples with surprised hearts and ran all the way home. Of course, Leigh Ann and I ate the apples.As
6、time went on, we often went through Old Man Donovans farm, and he kept on giving us more luscious fruit. One day, we stopped by to see him when he was on his front porch. We talked to him for hours. While he was talking, we realized that we had found the other hidden treasure: the sweet, kind heart
7、hidden behind his gruff voice. Soon, he was one of our favorite people to talk to. Unfortunately, his family never seemed to enjoy our company. They never smiled or welcomed us in.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: Every summe
8、r, we would visit Mr. Donovan and talk to him. Paragraph 2: The next winter, word got around that Old Man Donovan had died. 写作思路1. 确定主题：大主题是人与人的关系。故事告诉我们不要相信谣传，不要以貌取人。故事中Old Man Donovan是一个外表可怕，其实是一个心地善良的老人。短文结构清晰，以农场中有two treasures为线索，原文描写了第一个treasure-his beautiful fruit, 第二个看不见的treasure，就是老人善良的内心，这
9、是续写的重点描写内容。2. 时空变化： 要特别注意第二句句首提示语的时间The next winter,.这就意味着第一段必须提到某一个夏天，而不是every summer。所以，第一段应该有两个时间，第一个是每年夏天做了什么，第二个时间应该是某一个夏天发生的事。在这一点上估计会出现离题。3. 续写难点：第一是主题难以把握，估计都会提到a kind heart, 但是最好在结尾处有不能以貌取人的感悟。第二是时间空间的转换，尤其是对the next winter的理解，容易跑题。第三原文中提到老人的家人对他们不友好，在续写部分应该有相关的交代(his family never seemed to
10、 enjoy our company. They never smiled or welcomed us in)。第四原文情节相对曲折，多叙述少细节描写。提纲Paragraph 1: Every summer, we would visit Mr. Donovan and talk to him.1. As always, he welcomed us with open arms and treated us to some red apples.2. Sometimes, he even let us climb up the fruit trees to pick the ones we
11、 liked.3. On his farm, we talked and laughed cheerfully, as if a hidden treasure had been discovered. 4. While talking to him, we got to know why there were horrible rumors about him.5. One summer morning, however, when we got there, we were shocked to find that he was ill and his health was declini
12、ng rapidly.6. But we could see the joy in his eyes, whenever my sister and I kept him company.7. So we went to see him now and then, hoping that he would recover soon.Paragraph 2: The next winter, word got around that Old Man Donovan had died. .1. When we heard the bad news, a sense of grief overwhe
13、lmed us.2. At the idea of never seeing our old friend again, we stood still, tears streaming down our cheeks.3. Then we dashed to the farm, only to find that our friend was nowhere to be seen.4. In spite of the fact that his family were a little unfriendly, we plucked our courage to go to his funera
14、l.5. Thinking back to the happy moments we spent together, we started to weep uncontrollably.6. To date, we remember Old Man Donovan and the lesson we learned:7. Never believe rumors, never judge a person from his appearance, or you may miss a person with a kind heart.参考范文Paragraph 1: Every summer,
15、we would visit Mr. Donovan and talk to him. As always, he welcomed us with open arms and treated us to some red apples. Sometimes, he even let us climb up the fruit trees to pick the ones we liked. On his farm, we talked and laughed cheerfully, as if a hidden treasure had been discovered. While talk
16、ing to him, we got to know why there were horrible rumors about him. One summer morning, however, when we got there, we were shocked to find that he was ill and his health was declining rapidly. But we could see the joy in his eyes, whenever my sister and I kept him company. So we went to see him no
17、w and then, hoping that he would recover soon.Paragraph 2: The next winter, word got around that Old Man Donovan had died. When we heard the bad news, a sense of grief overwhelmed us. At the idea of never seeing our old friend again, we stood still, tears streaming down our cheeks. Then we dashed to
18、 the farm, only to find that our friend was nowhere to be seen. In spite of the fact that his family were a little unfriendly, we plucked our courage to go to his funeral. Thinking back to the happy moments we spent together, we started to weep uncontrollably. To date, we remember Old Man Donovan an
19、d the lesson we learned: Never believe rumors, never judge a person from his appearance, or you may miss a person with a kind heart.二：课后练习When tragedy struck his little girl during the Depression(大萧条), this father did the only thing he could.The tragedy happened in the year 1933. I was only 6 years
20、old when I was rushed to the hospital with two crushed feet. My parents were told I might neverwalkagain. The accident happened when I was sitting in front of our house in Lowell, Massachusetts. I was playing in a puddle(水坑) after a rainstorm and suddenly felt a huge weight on my feet. When I looked
21、 up, there was a car tire on them. Icriedout, but the motor was running and no one could hear me over the engine.The driver had run across the street for a newspaper. When he got back to his car, he drove awaynever knowing he had parked on my feet.Just about then, our neighbors son came home and saw
22、 me bent over my feet in pain. He immediately carried me home, and I remember thinking how tall and strong he was.An ambulance came, and I remained in the hospital for 3 weeks while my feet were “repaired”. When I returned home, I could hardly walk.I sat in our bay window and watched the children pl
23、ay on the street and longed to join thembut I couldnt. I felt so left out despite my parentscompany.My parents were told that if I was ever to walk again, Id need treatment, which in those days meantridingatricycle(三轮车)to strengthen the muscle and eventually get my feet back into condition for walki
24、ng.Our family couldnt afford such an extravagance(奢侈品). Times were tough during the Depression, and there were five mouths to feed, besides buying coal and wood for the stove.Dadcouldnt afford the bus fare and on coldwinter dayshe walked 7 miles every day in his onlywinter coatto get to work. No, th
25、ere was nomoneyfor a tricycle. I would be a cripple(瘸子)all my life.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：Then on day, while sitting at my usual place in the window, I saw my father walking up the street carrying a tricycle on his shou
26、lder._Paragraph2:It was many years later before I learned where and how Dad had got the tricycle._参考答案：Paragraph 1:Then one day while sitting at my usual place in the window, I saw my father walking up the street carrying a tricycle on his shoulder. Was that true?I couldnt believe my eyes. I opened
27、the window andcriedout, “Is thattricyclefor me?” Having put down the tricycle，Dadtold me that it belonged to me. “Ride the tricycle every day，and then you will be all right，my girl！”From then on，with my fatherscompany，I rode it every day to strengthen my muscle. Regardless of pain，I kept on practici
28、ngridingEventually I got myfeetback into condition，and could walknormally!Paragraph 2:ItwasmanyyearslaterbeforeIlearnedwhereandhowDadhadgotthetricycle. My mother told me what happened on those coldwinter daysIn his onlywinter coat，he was wandering around the hospital. He begged the doctor to save my feet. Moved by my father，the doctor asked the hospital to give my father a part-time job to do. With the doctors help，my father got the job. Working day and night，eventually，he earned enoughmoneyto buy the tricycle.
