1、山东省新高考质量测评12月联合调研监测46. 今气12月21日是中国传统节气冬至。假定你是李华,请用英文写封信邀请交换生 Chns来家做客，一起包饺子，体验冬至文化。内容如下：1. 介绍冬至；2. 真诚邀请。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。参考词汇:冬至Winter Solstice节气solar termDear Chris,_Looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Im writing to you to invite you to vi
2、sit my family on December 21. That day is Winter Solstice. We can make Jiaozi together and experience the Winter Solstice culture. Winter Solstice, as the name implies, means the coming of winter. As an important solar term in the traditional Chinese calendar, it is also a traditional holiday for Ch
3、inese. Winter Solstice is a time for the family to get together, when we will eat Jiaozi and do some interesting activities.Please join us that day if it is convenient for you.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写封信邀请交换生Chns来家做客，一起包饺子，体验冬至文化。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作总说，把支持句作为分说，
4、并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 介绍冬至；2. 真诚邀请。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）invite you to visit my family; experience the Winter Solstice culture; means the coming of winter; a traditional holiday for Chinese; get together第三步：连词成句1. Im writing to you to invite you to visit my family on December 21. 2. Winter Solstice, as the nam
5、e implies, means the coming of winter. 3. As an important solar term in the traditional Chinese calendar, it is also a traditional holiday for Chinese.4. Winter Solstice is a time for the family to get together, when we will eat Jiaozi and do some interesting activities.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题
6、。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表并列补充关系：also连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】高分句型1. Winter Solstice, as the name implies, means the coming of winter. （as引导的定语从句）高分句型2. Winter Solstice is a time for the family to get together, when we will eat Jiaozi and do some interesting activities.（when引导的定语从句）高分句型3. Ple
7、ase join us that day if it is convenient for you.（if引导的条件状语从句）2021年浙江省长兴、余杭、缙云三校模拟考试66. 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Lucy即将回国，希望你能推荐一款具有中国特色的纪念品以馈赠亲友。请你给她写封邮件。内容包括：1推荐的物品；2推荐原因；3表达期望。注意：1词数 80 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Lucy,I am so delighted to know that you want to buy some souvenirs with Chinese characteristi
8、cs. Im glad to recommend the Chinese brush to you.The Chinese brush, a traditional writing tool dating back to 2000 years ago, is ranked as one of the Four Treasures of the Chinese Study. Frankly speaking, in ancient China, calligraphy and paintings were mostly created with it. As far as Im concerne
9、d, the Chinese brush is a perfect gift for your relatives who are fond of Chinese items.I sincerely hope my advice can be of great benefit to you.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Lucy写封邮件，推荐一款具有中国特色的纪念品以馈赠亲友的建议。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量一般将来时。结构：总分法要求：1）推荐的物品；2）推荐原因；3）表达期望。第二步:列提纲
10、 （重点词组）be delighted to know, recommend sth. to sb., date back to , be ranked as , Frankly speaking, As far as Im concerned, be fond of , be of great benefit .第三步：连词成句1.I am so delighted to know that you want to buy some souvenirs with Chinese characteristics. 2.Im glad to recommend the Chinese brush
11、 to you.The Chinese brush, a traditional writing tool dating back to 2000 years ago, is ranked as one of the Four Treasures of the Chinese Study.3. Frankly speaking, in ancient China, calligraphy and paintings were mostly created with it. 4.As far as Im concerned, the Chinese brush is a perfect gift
12、 for your relatives who are fond of Chinese items.5.I sincerely hope my advice can be of great benefit to you.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly2.表并列补充关系： Besides3.表因果关系：As连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】高分句型1 The Chinese brush, a traditional writing tool dati
13、ng back to 2000 years ago, is ranked as one of the Four Treasures of the Chinese Study.(运用现在分词作定语)高分句型2 As far as Im concerned, the Chinese brush is a perfect gift for your relatives who are fond of Chinese items.(运用定语从句)苏州市相城区2021届高三第一学期阶段性诊断测试46. 假定你是李华，重阳节（Double Ninth Festival）将至，你计划和班里一些同学去敬老院（
14、the nursing home）慰问老人。请给你们班的外教Jack写封邮件，告知他重阳节的意义和活动安排，并邀请他一同前往。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Jack,_YoursLi Hua【答案】One possible version:Dear Jack,Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nursing home next Sunday for the Double Ninth Festival.Its a festival of respecting the old and lov
15、ing, helping them. Well present the elderly with flowers and self-made cards. Then well do some cleaning and washing for them. As some old people feel lonely, we may chat with them. Also, some performances have been well prepared for them to enjoy.If you are able to come, please keep me informed. Lo
16、oking forward to your reply.YoursLi Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生给外教Jack写封邮件，告知他重阳节的意义和活动安排，并邀请他一同前往敬老院慰问老人。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般将来时和一般现在时。结构：三段式：第一段写出写信目的，引出主题；第二段介绍重阳节的意义和活动安排；第三段表示希望对方能一同前往。要求：1. 表明写信的目的2. 介绍重阳节的意义和活动安排3. 表示希望对方能一同前往第二步:列提纲 （重点单词及词组）invite sb. to do sth. (邀请某人做某事); respe
17、ct (尊敬); do some cleaning (打扫卫生); lonely (孤独的); chat with sb. (和某人聊天); performance (表演); look forward to (期待，盼望)第三步：连词成句1. Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nursing home next Sunday for the Double Ninth Festival. 2. Its a festival of respecting the old and loving, helping them.3. W
18、ell present the elderly with flowers and self-made cards.4. As some old people feel lonely, we may chat with them.5. Some performances have been well prepared for them to enjoy.6. If you are able to come, please keep me informed.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all; to
19、begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second ; and then; finally; in the end; at last2. 表并列补充关系：Whats more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; additionally; not only but also; as well as; bothand3. 表转折对比关系：but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand, on the
20、 other hand; some, while others4. 表因果关系：because; because of; for; so; since; thus; therefore; as a result; why 5. 表总结：in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改根据写作内容需要，加入高级句式，如名词性从句，定语从句，状语从句等。“We may chat with them.”本
21、句用来介绍在敬老院的活动之一。可以使用原因状语从句，进一步介绍为什么要准备这样的活动。润色修改为：As some old people feel lonely, we may chat with them.【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中合理使用了复合句，如：“As some old people feel lonely, we may chat with them.”这句话为as引导的原因状语从句；其次，使用了一些固定短语，如：invite sb. to do sth.; chat with sb.; look forw
22、ard to等，使语言更加丰富；同时使用了一些高级词汇，如respect; lonely; performance等，让语言更加地道。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。江苏省扬州市2021届高三上学期期初学情调研46. 假定你是李华，你校外教 Smith先生因为家乡遭遇了地震，心情低落。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，要点包括：1.表示同情；2.介绍同学们给予灾区的帮助；3.表示愿意帮助外教。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mr. Smith_YoursLi Hua【答案】D
23、ear Mr. SmithI was shocked at the news about the earthquake in your hometown. Its understandable that you sink into sadness.Upon hearing the news, all the students in our school lend a helping hand. We have raised some money, which will be put into your bank account. Besides, we have also collected
24、some basic necessities, such as clothes and food for the victims. We hope our small deeds can be of some help.I wish none of your family got injured. If you need any help, please dont hesitate to contact me.YoursLi Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，表达对朋友的同情以及想提供帮助的意愿。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
25、、一般将来时为主。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.表达同情 2.表达帮助意愿 1）介绍同学们给予灾区的帮助； 2）表示愿意帮助外教。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）be shocked at；sink into ；lend a helping hand ；put into；bank account.；basic necessities；be of some help；none of；hesitate to do.第三步：连词成句1. I was shocked at the news about the earthquake in you
26、r hometown.2. Its understandable that you sink into sadness.3. all the students in our school lend a helping hand.4. which will be put into your bank account.5. we have also collected some basic necessities,6. We hope our small deeds can be of some help.7. I wish none of your family got injured.8. I
27、f you need any help,please dont hesitate to contact me.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including
28、,3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】文章内容完整，包括了提示所给的所有要点，同时语言规范、语篇连贯、词数适当、上下文意思连贯
29、、符合逻辑关系。范文中使用了较多复合句，如：We have raised some money, which will be put into your bank account.这句话运用了which引导非限制性定语从句；如：If you need any help, please dont hesitate to contact me.这句话运用了if条件状语从句。益阳市2021届高三9月调研考试46. 假定你是高三学生李华，你的笔友Bob是一名高一新生。他发来邮件询问“What to learn in senior high school”，请根据以下要点给他回复一封邮件。1. 学会学习
30、：方法、习惯等；2. 学会做人：真诚、友善等；3. 学会 注意：1.词数：80词左右，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Bob,I am glad to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school. _Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Bob,I am glad to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.First, you should learn to lear
31、n efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class. In addition, you should learn how to g
32、et along well with others. Finally, you should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently, which were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life in senior high school.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表
33、达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给此前向你询问“What to learn in senior high school”的笔友Bob，给予他高中学什么的建议。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 学会学习：方法、习惯等；2. 学会做人：真诚、友善等；3. 学会。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）used to do sth.；benefit sb.；get involved in sth.；get along well with sb.；take part in sth.；b
34、uild up ones body第三步：连词成句1. I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals.2. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class,3. you should learn how to get along well with others.4. you should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently, which
35、 were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life. (根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As we
36、ll as, not onlybut (also), including, also3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,6.表进行举例说
37、明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing 7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking8表选择：eitheror，or连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review
38、what had been taught after class这句话中用了what引导的宾语从句，如Finally, you should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently, which were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life这句话中用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如used to do sth.，get involved in sth.，take part in sth.，build up ones
39、body等，为文章增色不少；并注意了句子的衔接，如 First，In addition，Finally。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。20202021学年金色联盟-浙江省百校联考66. 2020年8月，安徽省多地遭受特大洪水袭击，无数孩子失去家园。为此，校学生会号召大家本周日上午9：00在主教学楼前面为灾区孩子捐款。假定你是学生会主席李华，请你以学生会的名义写一则书面通知。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】One possible version:Dear fellow
40、 students,In August this year, catastrophic floods hit large areas of Anhui Province. The flood destroyed peoples homes and villages, leaving tens of thousands of people homeless, including little children. It was a great sorrow for every Chinese people. Therefore we call on all the students to dona
41、te money to the children in disaster areas who are desperate for help. The donation activity is scheduled to be held in front of the Main Building at 9:00 on Sunday a. m.We are looking forward to your active participation and your love!The Students Union【解析】【分析】本文是一篇提纲类作文。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，这是一篇提纲式作文：校学
42、生会号召大家本周日上午9：00在主教学楼前面为安徽省因多地特大洪水袭击而失去家园的灾区孩子捐款，假定你是学生会主席李华，要求你以学生会的名义写一则书面通知。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词(组)，如：catastrophic floods(灾难性洪水)，hit (袭击)，destroy(毁坏)，call on(号召)，donate money(捐款)等等。第3步：根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文
43、中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。The flood destroyed peoples homes and villages, leaving tens of thousands of people homeless, including little children.句中使用现在分词短语做结果状语；Therefore, we call on all the students to donate money to the children in disaster areas who are desperate for help.句中使用定语从句; 等等。