1、2021高考英语读后续写专题（四）一：典题技法指导It was a rainy November morning. Overcome with anger, I knew if I didnt leave the house soon I would lose my temper with my husband, Joe. As rain came down in sheets, Joe offered to take me to work. I struggled into my jacket, seized my bag and teaching plans and ignored him
2、.He insisted and reached for his boots. I looked at the piles of newspapers and the dirty dishes still on the table. Dont you have enough to do? I can take care of myself. I stormed out, not even kissing him good-bye. Joe shouted after me not to take the shortcut(捷径)Joe and I had been eagerly lookin
3、g forward to our retirement when a heart attack that past spring forced him to leave his job earlier than we had planned. As the medical bills mounted we realized I would have to continue working full-time while Joe stayed home and took over the housework.The new arrangement was a disaster. Exhauste
4、d after a day of full work, all I wanted was a hot homecooked meal and a good nights sleep. However, what greeted me at the table was a microwave package. Sometimes he would serve oatmeal(燕麦) for several nights in a row. One night when I dragged myself to bed, I was terrified to discover Joe had tur
5、ned our white sheets blue. He told me he had found out how to save on water, soap and electricity. He patted his blue trousers and announced proudly washing everything together was just the secret.Ten minutes later, ignoring Joes warning I turned off the main route(道路). I thought it hadnt rained eno
6、ugh to flood the road, but as I rounded the corner, water rushed across my path. After a few feet, the car got stuck. I opened the door and water poured in. I hurriedly closed the door. I couldnt risk walking in this. Almost 20 minutes passed. The car began to shake. I got frightened to death when I
7、 heard three long honks(喇叭声).注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. Paragraph 2: I screamed that I couldnt make it. 写作思路1. 确定主题：大主题是老夫老妻的爱情故事。以第一人称的视角进行叙述。故事讲
8、的是我对丈夫的一些生活琐事的误解，通过上班遇险，丈夫奋力抢救，误解得以消除，爱意涌上心头。2. 时空变化： 地点是在转弯处的一条被水淹没的小路上(.rounded the corner, water rushed across my path)。丈夫的卡车在车子的后面(Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. )。时间是上午上班路上。(It was a rainy November morning.Joe offered to take me to work. )3. 续写难点：情节安排相对较
9、复杂，尤其是对丈夫如何营救我的描写，涉及较多的动作描写。(问题解决类续写，要注意细节须紧扣主题，情节须合情合理，须反映解决问题的能力。) 此外，通过对险境的描写，突出丈夫的形象，为消除误解，体会真爱作铺垫。提纲Paragraph 1: Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck.1. A familiar figure leaped out, rushed towards me and waded into the water.2. Thank goodness, it was Joe who c
10、ame to my rescue.3. However, the water was running so rapidly that he had to go back. 4. Frightened and a little angry, I could hardly help shedding tears.5. How I wished that my husband were like a superman who could save me from disaster.6. But, after a while, it turned out that Joe returned with
11、one end of a rope in his hand and the other end tied to the truck.7. He struggled to throw the rope to me and shouted, “Catch! Open the door!”Paragraph 2: I screamed that I couldnt make it.1. At that moment, the sound of the raging water outside grew louder, and the car rocked more violently.2. Wors
12、e still, the water came up to Joes waist and he almost lost his footing in the water.3. After several vain attempts, Joe realized that there was no chance to make it.4. He put every ounce of strength into getting close to me and said soothingly, Dont panic, honey! Im here.5. With Joes help, I burst
13、the door open, and Joe immediately tied the rope around my waist.6. The moment we pulled ourselves out of the water, the car was washed away.7. What a narrow escape! I hugged Joe tightly, happiness and love welling up inside me.参考范文Paragraph 1: Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing li
14、ghts of a truck. A familiar figure leaped out, rushed towards me and waded into the water. Thank goodness, it was Joe who came to my rescue. However, the water was running so rapidly that he had to go back. Frightened and a little angry, I could hardly help shedding tears. How I wished that my husba
15、nd were like a superman who could save me from disaster. But, after a while, it turned out that Joe returned with one end of a rope in his hand and the other end tied to the truck. He struggled to throw the rope to me and shouted, Catch! Open the door!Paragraph 2: I screamed that I couldnt make it.
16、At that moment, the sound of the raging water outside grew louder, and the car rocked more violently. Worse still, the water came up to Joes waist and he almost lost his footing in the water. After several vain attempts, Joe realized that there was no chance to make it. He put every ounce of strengt
17、h into getting close to me and said soothingly, Dont panic, honey! Im here. With Joes help, I burst the door open, and Joe immediately tied the rope around my waist. The moment we pulled ourselves out of the water, the car was washed away. What a narrow escape! I hugged Joe tightly, happiness and lo
18、ve welling up inside me.二：课后练习It was the late 1930s, and things were tough. Mum had a hard time raising us on her own in our small community of New Westminster, BC. My dad had drowned in Pitt Lake, five years ago.Looking back, I realize what Mum went through sending us kids to school. Every morning
19、she would tuck a new piece of cardboard in our shoes, because our soles(鞋底)were worn out. When we got home, Mum would have “French toast” ready for us. Constant moving was typical for my family in those times. Rent was 25 dollars a month, but Mum couldnt pay it, and we knew we would be evicted right
20、 after Christmas on the first of January. Christmas was approaching, and we were entitled to a twenty-five-dollar Christmas fund from social services. The inspector came to our house, and searched it from top to bottom to be sure we didnt have any food hidden away. When he didnt find any, he issued
21、the cheque to Mum. Mum said that instead of buying food, she would use the 25 dollars to pay back rent, assuring us all of a roof over our heads for a little while longer. She told us then there would be nothing for Christmas. Unknown to Mum, I had been selling Christmas tree, shoveling snow, and do
22、ing odd jobs to earn enough money to buy a new pair of boots. Boots that werent patched, boots with no cardboard in the soles. I knew exactly which boots I wanted. They were ten-inch Top Genuine Pierre Paris and they had a price of 23 dollars.Well, the big day came on the afternoon of Christmas Eve.
23、 I was excited, as I hurried up the road to the shoe store, but on the way I noticed a house with Christmas lights and decorations. It was then I realized at our house, we had no lights, no decorations, nor any money for Christmas goodies. I knew that we would have no turkey or ham for Christmas, an
24、d I felt sad.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:AsIcontinuedwalking,Ibegantoreconsidermyplan_Paragraph2:Withgreatexcitementandtearsinmyeyes,Iknockedonthedoor._参考范文Paragraph 1:AsIcontinuedwalkingIbegantoreconsidermyplan.Iwasfeelingas
25、trangesenseofguilt.HereIwasgoingtobuyanewpairofbootswhilemymotherwashomeintears.Shewouldbetryingtoexplaintouswhytherewerenopresents.Acrossthestreetfromthebusstopwasabiggrocerystore.Irealizedthat25dollarsIhadworkedsohardforwentalongwaytowardslights,decorationsandaturkey.Afterfinishingshopping,Iwentho
26、me.Paragraph 2:Withgreatexcitementandtearsinmyeyes,Iknockedonthedoor.I could hardly wait to see my mothers face! When Mum opened the door, some of the groceries fell inside onto the floor, and she just stood there, dumb founded. Holding back the tears, I said, “Merry Christmas!” That day I got enough hug sand kisses from Mum to last two lifetimes.