1、专题09 书面表达【2020年】1.（2020新课标）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:1. 人物简介；2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。_【答案】The person I respectWe have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My
2、 father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work. When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and enc
3、ourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.人物简介：2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。第二步：列提纲（重点短语）As
4、for me；spare some time；listen to me patiently;第三步：连词成句1.As for me, my father is the person I respect mostly.2.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.3.My father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to o
5、vercome the difficulties bravely.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因2.表示并列补充关系：As for; and; but; So第五步：润色修改2.（2020新课标）上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:1. 农场情况；2. 采摘过程；3. 个人感受注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。题目:My Weekend_【答案】 My WeekendLast weekend，we took part in a picking
6、 activity. We drove from the school, and the farm was about 2 kilometers away from our school. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of animals, green fresh vegetables and fruit trees in the farm. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for picking fruits, the other pac
7、ked up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the activity was over. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it. Through this activity, we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is. We should treasure the food planted by the farmers.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生为英语角写一篇关于和同学一起参加采摘
8、活动的短文。第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.农场情况；2.采摘过程；3.个人感受第二步：列提纲（重点短语）took part in；was responsible for ；a meaningful day；should treasure第三步：连词成句1. Last weekend, we took part in a picking activity.2. One group was responsible for picking fruits the other packed up the fruits. 3. But it was
9、a meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it4. We should treasure the food planted by the farmers.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍农场；描述采摘过程；个人感受2.表示并列补充关系：and ;But; Through第五步：润色修改3.（2020新课标）假定你shi 李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1. 剧情简介；2. 指导内容；3. 商定时间地点。注意:
10、1. 词数100左右;2. 结束语已为你写好。_【答案】Dear Miss Evans,How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook. Wed like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on
11、 a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we dont want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some ti
12、me to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?Given your busy schedule, Id be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early
13、 reply. Best regards!Yours truly,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans对于the Steamboat改编短剧的支持。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。结构：总分总法第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）write to；according to ；combine ； adaption ；challenge；attached to ；convenien
14、t第三步：连词成句根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改4.（2020江苏卷）请阅读下面有关中国题材纪录片(documentary)的对话，并按照要求用英语写一篇150个词左右的文章。Su Hua: Hi, Li Jiang! Did you see the BBC documentary on CCTV 9 last week?Li Jiang: You mean Du Fu: Chinas Greatest Poet? Yes, I did. Fanta
15、stic!Su Hua: Just think an English actor recites Chinese poems.Li Jiang: I dont really understand every line he recites, but I believe he truly loves the poems himself.Su Hua: Right. It is reported that the film is well received outside China.Li Jiang: Yeah, Its my first time to hear Chinese stories
16、 told by an English speaker.Su Hua: In fact, documentaries about our country are plentiful both at home and abroad. These films can help foreign friends better understand this land-Chinese literature, geography history, food.Li Jiang: I couldnt agree more.【写作内容】1.用约30个词概括上述对话的主要内容；2.谈谈中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢
17、迎的原因(至少两点)。【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。_【答案】CCTV 9 broadcast Du Fu: Chinas Greatest Poet, a documentary produced by BBC. This well-made film provides foreign audiences with a fresh way of better knowing Chinas past and present.Documentaries about China
18、, produced either in China or in other countries, are becoming increasingly popular among foreigners. For one thing, the overall development over the past decades has been so striking that they feel eager to familiarize themselves with what is going on in China.For another, China enjoys a long histo
19、ry and rich culture. It has always been an attraction for those who are keen on anything that is Chinese. These documentaries present a splendid picture of China in front of their audiences-it history, landscape, art, food, or even traditional Chinese medicine.Because of these films, some foreigners
20、 have begun to think of coming to China. In this way, they can form a true picture of China themselves.【解析】这是一篇读写任务。第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。要求阅读中国题材纪录片的对话，写一篇150个词文章。包括两部分。(一)、用30词概括对话内容。(二)、谈谈中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因。要求至少两点原因。第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为四段。第一段，概括对话内容。第二段和第三段，中国题材纪录片受
21、到外国朋友欢迎的原因。第四段，总结因为电影吸引外国人想来到中国。第三步:确定关键词汇和短语: produced by, providewith, eitheror, be keen on, present , because of, in this way, the overall development，so striking that，feel eager to familiarize themselves with.第四步:确定较为高级的句子: 非谓语动词结构a documentary produced by BBC； 定语从句的运用:It has always been an attr
22、action for those who are keen on anything that is Chinese.第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: for one thing, for another.第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。5.（2020山东卷）假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:1. 参加人员:2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:3. 活动反响。注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右:2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。A Cross-Country Running Race_【答案】A C
23、ross-Country Running RaceLast Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.The students selected from every class took part in the competition. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the
24、foot of Nanshan Mountain. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessarily help as well as encouragement. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.The activity was highly spoken o
25、f, because not only did it provide chance for us to exercise, but also made us more cohesive.【解析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。体裁:应用文时态:根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主结构:总分总要求:1. 参加人员2. 跑步路线3. 活动反响第二步:列提纲(重点词组)attend/witness/ draw ones attention/ manage to do sth./ measure/ speak highly of/ provide sth. f
26、or sb.第三步:连词成句1. Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.2. The students selected from every class took part in the competition.3. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foo
27、t of Nanshan Mountain.4. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement.5. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.6. The activity is highly spoken
28、of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us more cohesive.第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语) 6.（2020天津卷）假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件
29、，介绍关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像)；(2)对活动的感受；(3)对自己未来的展望。注意:(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯；(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇:成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony新冠脑炎 COVID-F9Dear Chris,Im so glad to hear from you._Yours,Li Jin【答案】Dear Chris,I am so glad to hear from you. The coming-of-age ceremony was held i
30、n our school on June 8th this month. During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. After that, we all watched the video of alumnus fighting against the epidemic.Through the activity, what I felt is
31、that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them. In the future, I will be a good doctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devoting myself to my work.Best wishes！Yours,Li Jin【解析】这是一篇应用文
32、，要求写一封信。第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你校于6月8号举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris 很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris 回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)2. 对活动的感受。3. 对自己未来的展望。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段:成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)。第二段:对活动的感受；对自己未
33、来的展望。第三段，表达期望。第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:congratulate sb on sth., be faced with, heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devote oneself to doing sth.；第四步:确定较为高级的句子:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we
34、had experienced. that引导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:After that, besides, however.第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁
35、，避免划线，乱擦。7.（2020浙江卷）假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括:1. 询问近况；2. 分享班级最新消息；3. 表达祝愿。注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Peter,I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now?I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. Last m
36、onth, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.Yours,Li Hua
37、【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况，分享消息和表达祝愿。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。结构：三段式结构。第一段询问近况；第二段告知班级消息；第三段表达祝愿。要求：1.询问近况（How are you feeling now?） 2.告知班级消息（my good news; performed a song which you taught us） 3.表达祝愿（wish you a quick and complete recovery）第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）be sorry to do; on
38、 sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause; recovery第三步：连词成句1. I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.2. I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease.3. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause.4. We all miss
39、 you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【2019年】1. 【2019全国卷I】假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.个人优势；3.能做的事情。注意:：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结束语已为你写好。_Looking forward to your early repl
40、y. Yours, Li Hua.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。1.审题立意本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在式。2.谋篇布局书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。3.关键词根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，local city，advantages，a good command of，beneficial for，familiarity with，appreciate ，ta
41、ke my application into consideration。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First of all, Besides, to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least，等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。【范文】Dear sir or madam,I am a Chinese student named Li Hua, who is studying in London during the summer vacation. Kno
42、wing that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings, I am writing to apply for volunteering. As a student who has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old, I am very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce Chinese paintings to foreigners. Besides, my fluent spoken Engl
43、ish and rich knowledge about Chinese paintings will help visitors understand the meaning behind each painting deeply. I will appreciate it if I could be given the opportunity.Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua.2. 【2019全国卷II】假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括:1.比赛信息；2.赛前准备；3.
44、表达期待。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Chris,Im writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4th. We will play against the team from HongXing High School. In order to win the match, we should get
45、fully prepared and practice hard. So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours after school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.Youre an excellent player. With you on the team, we are confident that we can win the game. Lets try hard together!Cheers,Li Hua【解
46、析】今年的书面表达沿袭近几年的体裁，仍旧是应用文。本次书面表达要求考生写一封邮件告知队友有关比赛的信息。本篇书面表达是一封告知信。首先要告知写信目的；然后简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、地点以及赛前的准备事项，注意事件信息的三要素：时间、地点、人物，要交代清楚；第三则要表达对队友的期待和鼓励。3. 【2019全国卷III】假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括:1.时间；2.活动安排；3.欢迎他表演节目。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【范文】Dear Allen,How is everything going? Our
47、 school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And Im writing to invite you to join us.The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely
48、 welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.Looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes,Li Hua【解析】今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息，最后欢迎他表演节目。第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：How is everything going? a music festival，in the school hall，The opening cer
49、emony等。第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。4. 【2019北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。注意:1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim，_Yours,Li Hua【范文】Dear Jim,Im pleased that youre coming to tour in China.I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and Ill show you around. T
50、ianjin will be your next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities. Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.Looking forward to your arrival.Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】本文是一篇应用文，要求给朋友写回信。
51、【解析】红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件，内容包括: 1.交通出行； 2.必备衣物。本文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写：首先表达欢迎Jim来中国；然后交代交通出行和必备衣物；最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 【2019天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根
52、据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；（3）希望从中有何收获。注意：（1）词数不少于100：（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。Dear Chris，Im Li Jim，a student at Chenguang High School._Thank you for your time.Yours， Li Jin【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点
53、，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.【范文】Dear Chris，Im Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. I got the news that your school will send teachers to my school for a week-
54、long summer exchange. During the activity，you will give a lecture on Western art. You want to seek for advice on what topic the lecture will be about. From my personal note，music is my priority.I am interested in all kinds of music，among which Jazz is my favorite. I want to know about the history of
55、 jazz，and some famous jazz singers. I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz.Thank you for your time.Yours，Li Jin6. 【2019浙江卷】第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括:1.表示感谢；2.回顾Alex对你的帮助；3.临别祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_ 【解析】 这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给
56、出的要点表达出来.动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能选漏要点，跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。【范文】 Dear Chris,I am so regretful to know that you are going to return to your home before long.
57、We get along well during your stay in China and you offered me lots of help. I would like to express my gratitude to you for your help with my English. While studying in China, you always spent your free time in helping me polish up my oral English. It is you who shared me with rich knowledge of Eng
58、lish and English culture. Never will I forget you and your kindness. It is my hope that you can remember me as often as possible. Yours,Li Hua【2019北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：西瓜watermelon_【答案】Last week I took part in a farmwork programme
59、 in the suburbs.At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme “Working is most beautiful”. And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands. When I got home, I packed up my luggage for the trip.On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I reali
60、sed how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.When I came back home, I shared my experiences with my parents. And they were very proud of me.【写作指导】本文属于图画作文，要求根据图画内容写一篇英文周记。【解析】假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。要求根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。图画作文内容要点比较清晰，其中包括：老师宣布活动内容和意义，我为活动准备，在
61、农场的劳动过程，介绍活动感受。这样有利于学生写作时发挥与扩展。全文可分成三部分，开头段概括活动，中间段描述图画，结尾段总结收获和意义。文章用第一人称来写，使用一般过去时。【2018年】1.【2018全国卷I】假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1到达时间；2合适的礼物；3餐桌礼仪。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【解析】本文是一篇电子邮件类应用文写作。餐桌礼仪也是考生比较熟悉的话题。成文时注意以下几点：一、内容要点要齐全1到达时间；2合适的礼物；3餐桌礼仪。二、时态：主要用一般现在时和将来时；三、
62、人称：第二、三人称。四、注意使用恰当的高级词汇、短语或句型，以提高作文的水平；五、适当使用一些连接词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。1. 浏览信息要点2.三个任务点，第一段内容：问候对方，马上呈现对方所涉及的话题，拜访中国家庭，做客时间的要求和忌讳! 第二段内容：做客拜访的合适礼物，可以适当延展，初次拜访，亲密朋友之间拜访，二次拜访，家庭情况适合的礼物，通用的礼物等。第三段：table manners,可以描述两三个通常的中国人的餐桌礼节和忌讳的地方，有鲜明特色之处，最后一句表达祝愿。3.时态，给对方的建议和说明，用一般现在时，描述风俗礼仪这是客观规律性的东西，用一般现在时。4.头脑风暴短语、
63、句型结构，开始打草稿5.行文6.检查拼写和语法。 【满分范文】 Dear Terry,How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.Firstly, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Ch
64、inese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them o
65、n your dish is a smart choice.If you have any other problems, please dont hesitate to contact me. Yours Li Hua【素材积累】做客礼仪：1. 预先约定一个时间以便对方事先作好安排。如果事先已经约定好了时间，就应遵守约定，准时到达，如需提早十分钟二十分钟之内可以接受，不要迟到，以免主人等候，也不要太早到，以免主人未作好准备。这是一个基本礼节问题。 2.如果有专属地域文化特色的礼物是最好的。如果朋友家有长辈，带点烟酒和茶叶或一些老人家用的保健品等；如果朋友家有小孩，带点儿童玩具或买箱牛奶，然后
66、加点烟酒或茶叶；不要送钟、梨、伞等这些东西，被认为不吉祥。 3.主人会请客人入座上席，再请长辈入座客人旁。入座的时侯要从椅子的左边进入。在中餐结束时，筷子应整齐地放在靠碗右边的桌上，并应等客人们都放下筷子以后，主人示意离席后方可以离开，不能自己吃完了放下筷子就走，这样做是很没礼貌的表现。 常用词语和句子准时 on time/punctually餐桌礼仪 table manners 合适的、恰当的 appropriate拜访 pay a visit toYou are supposed/expected/required to doIts a good idea toIts appropriat
67、e/suitable to do Its sensible/reasonable/advisable to do Its good manners to do Its noteworthy thatI think it would be more helpful if you could doIt would be wise of you toIts desirable to do Its inappropriate to do Its impolite to doIts unwise/inadvisable to do Never （助动词/系动词/情态动词）主语+谓语动词Its not s
68、uitable for you to doin such a situation.【备考启示】近年来高考写作的命题常用的思想就是高起点低落点。高起点题目很高，中国文化，中国故事，中国礼仪等等，但最终都把它们落在应用文的框架里，这就是低落点。写这样的作文，一定要注意不能写过于具体的内容，要找最重要的，最熟悉的写，不要面面俱到，中国餐桌礼仪内容太多，100单词无法写。找重点，以点带面。但选择重要内容本身就是一种能力。2.【2018全国卷I I】你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：(1)短片内容：学校的发展；(2)放映时间
69、、地点；(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_ 【解析】英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主，多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。第二个注意点：层次一定要清晰，一个层次要表达一件事情，使人看起来一目了然。【满分范文】Boys and girls,May I have your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join us end enjoy it
70、! Here are some relevant details about it.To begin with, the name of the movie isGrowing together, which is about the development of our beloved school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, it will be in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th
71、. Whats more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments. Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.The Student Union3.【2018全国卷III】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Pe
72、ter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：1. 学校的体育场馆；2. 主要的运动项目；3. 你喜欢的项目。 注意：1. 词数100左右：2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【解析】本题作文为提纲式作文，形式依然是书信，即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况，属于学校生活话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际，学生并不陌生，有话可说。首先可以介绍学校的体育场馆，场馆的位置，大小，开放时间等等。然后简要介绍学校主要开设的体育项目有哪些，可挑选一到两个做详细介绍，如学生的活动时间，活动形式，以及此类活动的好处等。再次简要分析自己喜欢的体育项目是什么，并简单分析喜欢的原因，自己从中
73、得到的益处等。文章可主要采用一般现在时态，第一人称的方式来写。【满分范文】Dear Peter, I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become
74、 the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, Im intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the c
75、hallenges in my life.All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.Yours, Li Hua4.（2018浙江卷）第一节 应用文写作 假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：1. 口语能力：2. 相关经验；3. 应聘目的。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_ 【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写应聘信。第一步：根据提示可知，学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信，内容
76、包括：1. 口语能力：2. 相关经验；3. 应聘目的。第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组）。第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。【范文】Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English
77、association.I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. Whats more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.Im particularly interested in this job because I want to further
78、 improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.Yours faithfully,Li Hua5.（2018天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。（1）比赛的时间、地点；（2）邀请他的原因；（3）训练计划
79、将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics CompetitionDear Chris,I have good news to tell you. _Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin【解析】本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1. 代表兴趣小
80、组发出邀请；2. 介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；4. 告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，对于本文来说，以一般将来时为主，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【满分范文】Dear Chris,I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July. He
81、aring that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship betwe
82、en our two schools.With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice because you are more experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin6.（2018北京卷）第一节 假设你是红星中学高三学生
83、李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：(1) 表示欢迎；(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。注意：(1). 词数不少于50；(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中
84、国传统文化的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人称。【满分范文】Dear Jim,Im so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.Learni
85、ng your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in
86、needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment. I sincerely hope your dream will come true and its my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, pleas
87、e feel free to let me know.Yours,Li Hua【2017年】1.【2017全国卷I】假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【解析】今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知外国朋友汉语课的时间和内容(属学校生活、语言学习范畴)。与往年相比最大的变化是涉及我国优秀的传统文化，这符合2017年英语高考大纲提出的：在英语学习上重视和突出中华传统价值观，重视语言应用，回归了英语作
88、为语言功能的本质。因此，掌握一些传统文化方面的英语知识很有必要。文体：书信体，一种常见的告知信，相对简单。人物关系：朋友问候语及开头语：How are you? / How is everything going?/ How are things with you? /I am writing to you about./ I am writing to tell you something about.写信目的：告知上课时间，内容及课前准备结束语如：Looking forward to seeing you again. / Looking forward to your early rep
89、ly. /Hope to hear from you soon / Best wishes.个人发挥，适当增加相关细节语言分析话题词激活学校生活：take part in, attend, activity, knowledge语言学习：acquire, advises sb. to do sth.,在平时的学习中要注意话题词的积累。运用高级句式：如：since引导的状语从句，which引导的非限制性定语从句。【满分范文】Dear Leslie，I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and y
90、ou are interested in Chinese culture. Now Ill tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. There
91、fore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems. Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua【解析】随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1
92、. 要点要齐全：（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第二人称为主；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。2.【2017全国卷I I】假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【解析】题目要求写封邮件邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术展。写作情境设置真实，任务要求符合学生能力水平，自然地融入了我国优秀传
93、统文化(剪纸papercutting)的内容，能够引导学生在使用外语了解世界的同时，注重传承发扬中华民族优秀文明成果，运用中国元素讲中国故事，增强文化自信。该写作贴近学生生活，学生有话可说。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构采用三段成文：第一段自我介绍并引出话题；第二段具体交代活动时间、地点；第三段较为详细地交代展览内容。2. 时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主。3. 人称：第一人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级词汇和句型以提高作文档次。【满分范文】Dear Henry，Im Li Hua, one of your students in your cultu
94、ral class. I know youre interested in one of Chinese traditional art formspapercutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it. Itll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9：00 am to 7：00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City
95、 Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon? I will meet you at 2：00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like. You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which papercutting is one of the most popular. In t
96、he exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of papercuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting. Looking forward to your early reply.Regards, Li Hua3.【2017全国卷III】假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：1. 球队活动；2. 报名方式及截止日期。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【解析】该篇书
97、面表达是书信类文体，但是与体育有关，要求考生按照所给提示进行写作，可增加细节以使行文连贯。在写作本文时考生需注意以下几点：1. 确定文章的结构：书信的开头、正文和结尾。2. 确定文章的要点：写信的目的；表示感谢。3. 确定文章的布局。4. 确定文章的时态，在本文中根据要求判断应该用一般现在时和一般将来时。5. 正确使用较高级词汇和多种句式，如定语从句，状语从句，主语从句等。6. 准确使用一些恰当的连接成分以使语意更连贯。【满分范文】Dear Eric,I am Li Hua. I am writing to invite you to join the table tennis team in
98、 our school. It is known that we can benefit a lot from playing table tennis. It can prevent us from getting shortsighted and it can keep us physically healthy. As to the activities, we plan to invite experienced players to giving training to us every Friday afternoon. At the same time, we will divi
99、de the members into several groups to practice at 5:00pm after school. If you are interested, sign up on our school website before August 10.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua4.（2017浙江卷）第一节 应用文写作假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：1. 参加者；2. 时间、地点；3. 活动：登山、野餐等。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增
100、加细节，以使行文连贯。_【解析】本试题是一篇半开放的作文，写作文体是电子邮件，写一封邀请信给Chris。要点提示中只列出了大概内容，包括3点(参加者，时间、地点和活动)，具体细节需要考生自己发挥。邀请信一般分为以下几部分：首先，要列出写信的目的，并发出诚挚邀请；其次，要就邀请的具体内容给予明确的说明，什么时间，什么地点，做什么事情等；最后，要再次表示邀请，希望对方参加。【一句多译】My intention to write this letter is to tell you an outgoing that we will make these days.Our destination is
101、 Siming Mountain, where we will have a climb together with the local people we will hold a picnic party.【满分范文】Dear Chris,How are you now? The purpose of my writing is to tell you that there will be an outgoing for us these days. I would be honored to have you there with us, enjoying the colorful day
102、s.The occasion will start on the next Sunday morning. We will go to Siming Mountain, where we can have a climb. Whats more, we can also hold a picnic party with the local people.I really hope you can make it. And I do look forward to receiving your reply letter as soon as possible.5.（2017天津卷）假设你是李津，
103、与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天津等）；（3）希望她有机会重访天津。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：第十三届全运会 the 13th National GamesDear Mrs. Green,Im glad to hear from you. _Yours,Li Jin【解析】这是一封邮件，要点都已经给出，关键
104、在于要点要全面，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时要注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般现在时和现在完成时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。【满分范文】Dear Mrs. Green,Im so glad to hear from you.While it has been more than a yea
105、r since you taught us English, Ive missed you a lot, thinking about those happy moments when we stayed with you. Actually, Ive been doing pretty well in my studies as well as in my life. Apart from my academic studies, I always manage to find time for what Im interested in. For example, I have succe
106、ssfully got admitted as a volunteer for the 13th National Games, which is scheduled to be held at the end of this August. To get admitted, I have made good preparations beforehand, trying to know as much as I could about my city, Tianjin.By the way, its my sincere hope that you can spare some time f
107、or a visit to Tianjin again, which has changed greatly since you left.Please let me know if you come to Tianjin.Yours,Li Jin6.（2017北京卷）第一节 （15分）你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【解析】
108、本文为提纲类作文。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态,语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封信，按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构，三段式，其中第一段写你所建议的路线，第二部分是本文的主体，要阐述你所建议的路线的原因，好让 他们有很好的掌握，最后一段，提出你的祝愿。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。【答案】
109、Dear Jim, Im happy to receive your letter and know youre coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot abou
110、t the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.Hope youll have a good time in China.Yours,Li Hua【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。表语从句的使用
111、：Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.高级词汇的使用：highly recommended。连接词的合理使用：Personally，moreover。【2017江苏卷】请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(boxoffice income)的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Saturday Afternoon.In a Shopping Centre.Li Jiang：Hi，Su Hua. Which movie shall we see?Su Hua：Whateve
112、r. Weve got so many choices, Kung Fu Yoga, Journey to the WestEach sounds great! Li Jiang：Yeah！And some movie stars are fantastic.Su Hua: And the hightech！Li Jiang：Perfect！Lets get some food first. We only have 20 minutes left.Su Hua：No hurry. The cinema is on the same floor.One Day in 2016.At Home.
113、Son：Mum，shall we go and see a film tonight?Mother：Why bother? We can stay at home and watch films online. Its convenient with our new and faster network.Son：But it feels good in a cinema.Mother：And the priceWe have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.Son：Only 10 yuan more than last year.Mother：But still we cann
114、ot get the moneys worth. Some films are just boring【写作内容】1用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；2我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点)；3谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。【写作要求】1写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。_ 【解析】本题考查任务型读写。此类作文对考生的能力要求极高。首先考生要以30词左右概述短文内容。接下来要分析票房收入变化的原因并给出自己的看法，并谈谈
115、自己对票房走向的看法。作文以第三人称和一般现在时为主。要点：1. 概述：中国电影票房在20122016年间呈现不断增长的趋势，但是2016年的增长相比于前几年很缓慢。2. 分析原因：票房增长与人们生活水平的不断提高息息相关，人们有了多余的钱，才可能消费、娱乐；另一方面，电影的制作技术日臻成熟，许多优质的电影不断上映；再者，互联网的普及无疑起到了很大的宣传作用。3. 看法和理由：票房增速将会小幅上涨或有所回落。只要给出恰当的理由，对票房看涨或是看落皆可。写30词的概述时，语言要简练、不拖沓。遣词造句要符合英语的表达习惯，尽量用上定语从句、状语从句和非谓语动词与倒装句等语法和句型。同时注意语句的连
116、贯性。【参考范文】The boxoffice income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016.The reasons behind this are various. The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine
117、 driving the constant growth in the boxoffice income. The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase. However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the Internet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, som
118、e viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.Chinas economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies. Therefore, its boxoffice income will probably enjoy a s
119、light increase.【2017北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：视频video_【解析】本文属于看图说话类作文。首先要读懂图片隐含的信息，本文有四幅图，而且要求是按先后顺序，所以一定要注意顺序的问题；其次，根据图片隐含的信息把每幅图的主题找到，然后分别写出每幅图的主题句，也就是说把文章主体部分的大纲要列好，最后结合自己的看法，写出相应的总结和感受。写作的过程中一定要注意先后顺序，巧用连接词，巧妙衔接，合理安排。1. In order to le
120、ave some impressive memories for all of us before graduation, our class made a special video to express our appreciation to2. carried out a discussion/various ideas were put forward3. shot some wonderful videos in the school/interviewed our teachers4. Those who are talented in computer contributed t
121、o the making of the video.5. edited the video/added our love to6. The show received a warm welcome among our fellow schoolmates.7. Memories of the past flooded into our minds/firm bond to our school内容要点：1. 讨论分工2. 收集素材3. 编辑制作4. 放映视频【参考范文】One possible version：Graduation finally came. My classmates and
122、 I decided to do something. After a heated discussion, we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school. Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debat
123、ed over what to put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect. Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.【20
124、16年】1（2016北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：地球日Earth Day【答案】Actions for a Greener Earth A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener
125、earth. Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them a
126、way to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school. We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.
127、【解析】话题比较常规，整体难度适中。“地球日”系列活动属于保护环境的体裁内容，考生并不陌生。内容主要包括：公告栏了解活动、分工制作、变废为宝的宣传活动、主题讲座等。题目要求按照四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。词数不少于60词，参考词汇必须使用。使用一般过去时和第一人称进行写作。范文使用了非谓语动词calling upon us to join in the actions和so.that句型与宾语从句we can do more for a better world等，句式多样；还使用了固定词
128、组call upon sb to do sth, join in, come up with, make use of, turn.into, give away, be proud of等，使作文内容变得丰富。2（2016江苏卷）书面表达请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote
129、for competitions like the Most Beautiful Teacher and the Cutest Baby.Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the Best Police Officer competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers daily work. Li Jiang visits the website
130、and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the Future Singer competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle t
131、ells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.【写作内容】1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要；2. 用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用
132、23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。【写作要求】1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。【答案】Possible version one:On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to v
133、ote or not. In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes su
134、rveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible. To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the be
135、tter if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting. (150 words)Possible version two:Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting, although some are quite
136、happy with it, and active in doing it. In my opinion, Internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they dont want to. Secondly, voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, b
137、ut rather on how many social-networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.In short, Internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, rul
138、es should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.(150 words)【解析】此类作文对考生的能力要求极高。首先考生要以30字概述短文内容。接下来就网络投票发表个人看法并提出理由和根据。文章要使用第三人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1.概述：网络投票越来越流行，几乎人人都参与了网络投票，在给人们带来好处的同时，有时候也让人进退两难不知道是否应该参
139、加这样的投票。2.支持：网络投票和生活密切相关，我们应该积极参与。理由及依据：（1）它是一种社会生活的方式；网络投票方便容易，不受时间和地点的束缚，同时网络投票的反馈迅速可靠；（2）虽然有时候网络投票也会给我们带来困扰，但如果有更好的参与规则，网络投票会更加规范合理。3.反对：网络投票会给人带来负面影响：（1）人们会因为网络投票而产生被迫的感觉；（2）网络投票结果并不客观；（3）网络投票可能会被故意利用。建议考生在写作概述时，语言简练不拖沓。3（2016天津卷）假设你是某高中的学生会主席李华。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据
140、以下提示写一篇发言稿: 回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)； 谈谈收获或感想； 表达祝愿与期望。注意： 词数不少于100； 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。Dear friends，_Thank you.【答案】Dear friends，How time flies！Two weeks went by, and our exchange activities ended. On behalf of my school, I would like to express my feelings. As scheduled, we participated in severa
141、l instructive activities. We learnt many Chinese characters and took plenty of exercise together. We went to the restaurant to taste the Chinese traditional food. The food was very delicious. While visiting the art exhibition, we discussed the great artists works.In my opinion, everyone here is a me
142、mber of our big family and we learn a lot from each other. And at last I sincerely wish you a pleasant trip back to your country. I hope well get together again next year. Thank you.【解析】这是一篇发言稿，要点都已经给出，关键在于要点要全面涵盖，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法句型使文章更有文
143、采。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。4（2016新课标1卷）书面表达假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Ms Jenkins,I am Li Hua. I am writing
144、 to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the firs
145、t time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I dont even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, Im writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.Looking forward to your reply. And Id be really thankful.You
146、rs,Li Hua【解析】本文是一篇考生们熟悉的书信类体裁的书面表达，内容贴近学生生活，所以人人有话可说。文章没有给出开头和结尾，所以考生要注意书信的格式，包括称呼语，正文以及结束语等。在写作时要注意先列出写作要点，而且要注意将来时、现在时以及现在完成时的交错使用；注意使用高级句式和多种结构的使用，而且语气要委婉礼貌。本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语In order to get some practica
147、l experience, 现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help, 宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume也是文章的亮点所在。5（2016新课标2卷）书面表达假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容包括：1主题：环境保护；2展览时
148、间；3投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow.注意： 1词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Peter,Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15thand last for three weeks. Any student who is interest
149、ed is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, yo
150、u can send your photos to intlphotoshow.Hope to hear from you soon.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文属于半开放作文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Peter写信，建议他参加你校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展。文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1. 校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展，主题为环境保护；2.展览时间6月15日，持续三周；3.知道对方对摄影很感兴趣，也恰好有环保方面的图片，希望对方能够参加本次展览。4.投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow。在写作时，注意书信的格式以及过渡用语的正确使用；同时尽量使用
151、熟悉的词汇及短语，尤其注意不要出现中国式英语，恰当使用一些复合句或者谚语以增加获得高分的可能性。6（2016新课标3卷）书面表达假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Bob,Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an impo
152、rtant class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time su
153、its you best. I should be available any time after school next week.Yours,Li Hua【解析】题目要求写一封道歉信，李华因不能和Bob一起去书店而向Bob道歉，文章应使用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作。写作内容包括：表示歉意；说明原因；另约时间。注意使用连接词，使作文内容连贯。范文包括了所有要点内容，做到了语意连贯。范文使用了宾语从句that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon和the change will not cause you to
154、o much trouble；目的状语从句so that well have more time to read and select books；条件句If its convenient for you；省略句If not等，长短句结合，使内容显得更加丰富。7（2016浙江卷）书面表达。“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇100120词的短文。要求如下：1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。注意：1.文章的标题已给出（不计词数）：2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同
155、学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。Planning Is Good,But Doing Is Better_【答案】One Possible VersionPlanning Is Good,But Doing Is BetterPlanning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to do.However,a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.My experience in the English speech contest la
156、st October is a case in point.A month before the event,I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that,I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally
157、came out of the contest as the first prize winner.I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.【解析】本文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目可判断出主要是介绍将计划付诸实施的重要性。围绕这个主旨去写，不能跑题。提纲部分还要求三个方面：1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。这就确定了作文的结构框架。在主旨和结构确定下来后，还要注意文章应用第一人称和一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时发挥自己的想象，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将文章完整地表述出来。注意要主次分明、详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章自然连贯。最后要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
