1、Day 5A假定英语课上,老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Jack,Im more than pleasing to know that you are eager to learn Chinese. Confucius Institute may b
2、e a good choice, which are intended for the Chinese learners whom are not native.Confucius Institute provided various interesting subjects. You can learn from Chinese history as good as Chinese writing. Besides, teachers will introduce any traditional Chinese festivals, such as the Spring Festival,
3、Dragon Boat Festival and Mid-Autumn Festival. Some relevant activity will be held during different festivals, such as making dumplings and eating zongzi, where you can not only enjoy delicious meals but also have good knowledge of Chinese life.I hope you will find my recommendation helpfully.Yours,L
4、i HuaB假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在该词下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。Last weekend I happened to meet some American tourists at the gate of Summer Palace. I greeted them wi
5、th English and then we begin to chat. I got to know they were college students travel in China, most of whom was fond of Chinese medicine. They were busy taking photo and were surprised at the changes that had been taken place in the past few years. After that, we went boating and had a good time. W
6、e exchanged our email addresses such that we could write to each other in the future. I was happily to have a chance to practise your oral English.答案A【答案解析】 1.pleasing pleased2 are is3.whom who/that4. provided provides5.删除from6.good well7.any some8. activity activities9. have后面加a10. helpfully helpfu
7、l【分析】这是一篇建议信。讲述了我对Jack学习汉语的建议以及选择孔子学院的理由。【详解】1.考查固定短语。根据句意:我很高兴的了解到你渴望学习汉语。固定短语:be pleased to do“高兴做某事”,所以把pleasing 改成pleased。故pleasing 改成pleased。2.考查主谓一致。分析句子可知,本句的主句为Confucius Institute may be a good choice,其后的which are intended for the Chinese learners whom are not native为非限制性定语从句。其中which指代主句的主语C
8、onfucius Institute,属于第三人称,其后的谓语动词要用单数。所以are改为is。故are改为is。3.考查定语从句。在非限制性定语从句which are intended for the Chinese learners whom are not native中镶嵌了一个定语从句whom are not native,分析此定语从句可知,先行词the Chinese learners在从句中作主语,结合定语从句关系代词的用法。先行词指人时,在从句中作主语用关系代词who/that。所以whom改为who/that。故whom改为who/that。4.考查时态。分析本句Confu
9、cius Institute provided various interesting subjects.孔子雪雁提供各种各样有趣的科目。这是客观事实,所以时态要用一般现在时。所以provided改为provides。故provided改为provides。5.考查动词。动词learn为及物动词,因此,其后可以直接接宾语,无需使用介词。所以删掉其后的from。故删除from。6.考查固定短语。句意为:你可以学习中国历史和写作。固定短语as well as“和,也”,所以good改为well。故good改为well。7.考查形容词。句意:而且,老师会介绍一些传统的中国节日,例如:春节、端午节和中
10、秋节。some “一些”,用在肯定句中,any“什么,一些;任何的” 用于疑问句、否定句等,结合本句后面的举例,此处应用some。所以any改为some。故any改为some。8.考查名词复数。结合句子分析,activity为可数名词,同时之前有some修饰,所以用复数。故activity改为activities。9.考查冠词。knowledge可表示“了解,知道”或“知识,认识,学问”等,是不可数名词。在knowledge前可直接加上不定冠词a,表示“对有某种程度的了解或熟悉”。此处就是用到了第二种用法,所以要在have后加上冠词a, have a good knowledge of “对有
11、很好的了解”。故have后加a。10.考查形容词。句意:我希望你能从我的推荐信中得到帮助。结构find+宾语+补语,本处的宾语为名词,所以补语要用形容词,表示“怎么样”。故helpfully改为helpful。B【答案解析】 1.在Summer前加the2.within3.beginbegan4.traveltraveling/travelling5.waswere6.photophotos7.去掉been8.suchso9.happilyhappy10.yourour【分析】这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者在颐和园门口偶遇一群美国大学生并与他们共同游览交流,且凭借此次机会很好地练习了口语。
12、【详解】1.考查冠词。句意:上周末,我碰巧在颐和园门口遇到了一些美国游客。分析可知,“颐和园”为普通名词构成的专有名词,之前需要定冠词the。故在Summer前加the。2.考查介词。句意:我用英语和他们打招呼,然后我们开始聊天。“用英语”,in English。故将with改为in。3.考查时态。句意:我用英语和他们打招呼,然后我们开始聊天。分析可知,时间为last weekend, 过去时。故将begin改为began。4.考查非谓语。句意:我知道他们是在中国旅游的大学生,他们中的大多数都喜欢中医。分析可知,travel in China 为之前名词college students的后置定
13、语,之间为主动关系,应用现在分词形式。故将travel改为traveling/travelling。5.考查主谓一致。句意:我知道他们是在中国旅游的大学生,他们中的大多数都喜欢中医。分析可知,从句的先行词为之前的名词短语college students,复数形式,且most of whom在从句中作主语,谓语动词应是复数形式。故将was改为were。6.考查名词复数。句意:他们忙着拍照,对过去几年发生的变化感到惊讶。photo为可数名词,应用复数形式,take photos, “照相”。故将photo改为photos。7.考查被动语态。句意:他们忙着拍照,对过去几年发生的变化感到惊讶。分析可知
14、,take place 意为“发生”,为不及物动词短语,无需被动形式。故将been去掉。8.考查目的状语从句。句意:我们交换了电子邮件地址,这样我们以后就可以互相写信了。分析可知,此处“we could write to each other in the future”应是目的状语从句,由so that引导。故将such改为so。9.考查形容词。句意:我很高兴有机会练习我的英语口语。分析可知,be动词后应是形容词作表语。故将happily改为happy。10.考查物主代词。句意:我很高兴有机会练习我的英语口语。主语为I, 与他们交流练习了“我”的口语。故将your改为my。【点睛】代词指代一致性原则在做改错题时,要注意上下文中的代词指代应前后一致。如若不一致,多数是错误的,需要改正。比如本文的第10处错误:I was happily (happy) to have a chance to practise your oral English.此处的物主代词指代前面的主语“I”, 应是第一人称。因此要将your改为my。