1、书面表达（一）1、假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯。_2、假定你是李华,得知英国牛津大学面向海外高中生举办暑期夏令营。请你写一封英文信, 咨询相关情况,内容包括:1. 活动安排及费用;2. 住宿情况;3. 索取报名表及相关资料。注意:1.词数100 左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;3. 开头和结尾已为你写好。Dear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua, a Senior Three st
2、udent fromChina. _Yours faithfully,Li Hua3、假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。(1)比赛的时间、地点;(2)邀请他的原因;(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent
3、 Robotics CompetitionDear Chris, I have good news to tell you._ Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin4、假设你是李华,你在读美国中学生Jack的博客(blog)时了解到他即将作为一名交换生来北京学习,希望能够寄宿在一名擅长英语的中学生家里,以便更好地了解中国文化。请根据以下要点给Jack写一封电子邮件:1. 欢迎他来中国学习;2. 介绍你的个人情况;3. 邀请他住在你家并愿意为他提供帮助。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 _5、假如你是李华,你的网友
4、John即将外出旅行,请你根据以下提示,用英语给他写封电子邮件,向他介绍你对旅游的看法并提醒他旅行注意事项。1.旅游是一种非常好的活动。当你累了或有空的时候,到外地走走。欣赏美景,呼吸新鲜空气,交朋友,放松身心,有益健康。2. 旅行前的准备。了解天气,带好衣服、相机、常用药品等。3. 旅行时注意饮食卫生和安全,防止小偷。要求:1、行文连贯,不得逐句翻译;2、词数:100词左右_6、杭州是一座美丽的城市,一年四季都有游客前去旅游。请写一篇100词左右的文章,要点如下:1.杭州位于中国的东南部,东临东海,以其美丽的西湖而闻名于世。2.环绕西湖有许多公园和名胜古迹。3.节假日或周末人们在西湖上荡桨,
5、到公园游玩,度过愉快的时光。4.杭州自改革开放(the reform and opening-up policy)以来,许多高楼大厦拔地而起,发生了巨大的变化。_7、请根据所提示的信息,写一篇短文,从以下各个方面对比成都和大同。词数120左右。城市成都大同位置位于四川盆地西部,成都平原中部位于山西省北部气候大雾天气多冬季漫长且寒冷干燥.夏季短暂面积及人口1.2万多平方千米,人口1 400多万面积1.4万多平方千米,人口 300多万旅游旅游业发达,每年接待数百万来自世界各地的游客近些年旅游业发达,取得很大进步_8、去年夏天,在中国南方发生了严重的洪涝灾害,造成了很大的损失。请根据下面3个方面的内
6、容,写一篇英语短文,词数100左右。1.损失:农田被毁,房屋被冲走,很多人无家可归;2.洪涝灾害的原因:下雨达数月,森林被砍伐,湖泊被改造成农田;3.补救措施:保护河边树木,重建堤坝,还田造湖。_ 答案以及解析1答案及解析：答案：Dear Ms Jenkins,I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.In order to get some practical experien
7、ce, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I dont even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, Im writin
8、g you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.Looking forward to your reply. And Id be really thankful.Yours,Li Hua解析：【写作方法】首段:表明写信目的,请求帮助;中间段:要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容;结尾段:希望得到帮助。注意:语气委婉、其诚,并要向收信人表示感谢。 2答案及解析：答案：Dear Sir/Madam , Im Li Hua, a Senior Three stude
9、nt from China. Greatly interested in your summer club intended for international students, Im writing to inquire about the program. First, would you please tell me the specific time of the program and how long it will last, so that I can properly schedule my time. Second, what core lectures and soci
10、al activities does it offer to students? Are there any English cultural lessons and cultural tours? Besides, I also wonder how much I have to pay for the program and whether accommodations will be provided for the participants. I would appreciate it very much if you could send me the application for
11、ms and some related materials that provide further information regarding the program. Thank you for your time. I am looking forward to getting your reply!Yours faithfully,Li Hua解析：【写作方法】1.首段:复述题目场景,表明写作目的;遵守礼貌原则,只问相关信息;简要介绍自己,表明写作目的。2.主体:询问具体问题,注意疑问句式;提供背景材料及询问原因;强调所需信息的重要性;题目要求的内容均应涉及。3.尾段:表明急切心情,提
12、供联系方式;结尾彬彬有礼,表示诚挚谢意;希望得到对方的帮助并合作。 3答案及解析：答案：Dear Chris, I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, int
13、end to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools. With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice because you are m
14、ore experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin解析：本篇书面要求写一封邀请信,写作的时候要注意以下几点:一、动笔前,一定要认真分析要点.理解要点要表达的含义.不能遗漏要点.跑题偏越。内容要点包括:1.代表兴趣小组发出邀请;2.介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排;3.说明通请他的原因,包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖;4.告诉他训l练计划将发送其邮箱
15、.请他提出建议。二、写作时注意准确运用时态,对于本文来说,以一般将来时为主.上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽坛使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.点睛:书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误,看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句,当然,没有把握的句子不要写。 4答案及解析：答案： One possible version Dear Jack, I am very
16、glad to learn that you are coming to Beijing as an exchange student and want to stay in a local home with a middle school student who can speak excellent English. I am a high school student, and its my sincere hope that you can stay with me. I am good at English and can communicate with foreigners f
17、luently. Besides, I like reading and travelling in my spare time, so if you are with us, I can take you around Beijing and let you know more about our brilliant Chinese culture. Both my parents and I are friendly and enthusiastic in personality. So I believe we can be good friends. I am sure I will
18、do what I can to help you with your Chinese. I am looking forward to your coming. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua解析： 【写作指导】本篇书面表达是一封电子邮件。写作应包含三方面内容:对Jack表示欢迎,介绍个人情况,对他发出邀请并表示愿意为他提供帮助。考生可适当增加一些内容,使文章内容更加充实、完整。注意正确运用电子邮件的格式。在词汇运用方面,考生可以合理运用高级词汇或句式,以提高作文的逻辑性和得分档次。 5答案及解析：答案：Dear John, Im glad to hear that y
19、ou are going to travel. Now Id like to share my view on travelling with you.In my opinion, travelling is a very good activity. When you get tired with your work or study and when you have free time, you can go out to enjoy the beauty of nature. You can breathe the fresh air, meet different people an
20、d make friends with them. Only by relaxing yourself will you forget your tiredness and build your health. In order to have a pleasant journey, you need to make full preparations ahead of time. Youd better have clear information about the weather, and bring proper clothes, a camera, some medicine for
21、 common injuries and diseases and so on. On your journey, you must pay attention to what you eat. Be careful with everything everywhere in case your money gets stolen. Do you agree with me? Wish you a good journey.Yours,Li Hua解析：考查提纲类短文写作。本文的写作话题是对旅游的看法和旅行时的注意事项。要点在文字提示中已经给出,建议考生从对旅游的看法何旅行的注意事项两方面着手
22、。本文使用一般现在时进行陈述,并根据文字提示组织好要点的顺序,选择合适的词汇和句型,准确表达.写作时注意准确运用连接词,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。点评:本文属于提纲类作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。 6答案及解析：答案： The city of Hangzhou lies in the southeast of China and faces the East China Sea on the east. It is famous for i
23、ts beautiful West Lake with a long history. Whenever you come to this modern city, you will see many parks and some places of interest around the West Lake. During the holidays or festivals or at weekends, people like boating on the West Lake or walking on the paths of the woods or sitting on the gr
24、ound to have a picnic. What a good time they have! Since the reform and opening-up policy was carried out by the government of Hangzhou, plenty of tall buildings have been set up and great changes have taken place in this city.解析：要点翻译杭州位于中国的东南部,东临东海。The city of Hangzhou lies in the southeast of Chin
25、a and faces the East China Sea on the east.环绕西湖有许多公园和名胜古迹。You will see many parks and some places of interest around the West Lake.节假日或周末人们在西湖上荡桨。During the holidays or festivals or at weekends, people like boating on the West Lake.杭州自改革开放以来,许多高楼大厦拔地而起,发生了巨大的变化。Since the reform and opening-up policy
26、 was carried out by the government of Hangzhou, plenty of tall buildings have been set up and great changes have taken place in this city. 7答案及解析：答案： Located in the west of Sichuan Basin and in the center of Chengdu Plain, Chengdu covers a total of over 12 thousand square kilometers with a populatio
27、n of over 14 million. Foggy days are quite common in Chengdu. Its a city with developed tourism industry, which millions of tourists visit every year. As one of the famous historic and cultural cities in China, Datong lies in the north of Shanxi Province, covering an area of over 14 thousand square
28、kilometers with a population of over 3 million. Winter here is long and rather cold and dry, while summer is short. In recent years, the tourism industry has made great progress, which makes Datong a good place for tourists. Although Chengdu and Datong are very different, I like both of them very mu
29、ch.解析：要点翻译它是一个旅游业发达的城市,每年数百万的游客前来参观。Its a city with developed tourism industry, which millions of tourists visit every year.成都和大同很不相同,但这两个城市我都非常喜欢。Although Chengdu and Datong are very different, I like both of them very much.大同位于山西省北部,它占地面积1.4万多平方千米,拥有人口300多万。Datong lies in the north of Shanxi Provi
30、nce, covering an area of over 14 thousand square kilometers with a population of over 3 million. 8答案及解析：答案： Last summer, a big flood occurred in the south of China. lt was very serious. lt caused a great loss. Fields were ruined, houses were washed away and many people became homeless. There are thr
31、ee reasons for the flood. Firstly, it had kepi raining for months. Secondly, many forests had been cut down and the soil was washed away. Finally, some lakes had been turned into fields, which seriously blocked the waterway. Now, some measures have been taken to prevent floods from happening again.
32、The trees along the rivers have been protected. Old dams have been rebuilt and some fields have been turned back into lakes again.解析：要点翻译中国南方发生了严重的洪涝灾害。A big flood occurred in the south of China.农田被毁坏,房屋被冲走,许多人无家可归。Fields were ruined,houses were washed away and many people became homeless.一些湖泊变成农田,这严重阻塞了水路。Some lakes had been turned into fields, which seriously blocked the waterway.
