1、类型6| 感谢信1感谢信是重要的礼仪文书，是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的专业书信，有感谢和表扬双重意思。2感谢信的写作格式主要分以下三个部分：(1)开头部分要明确对对方提供的帮助或赠送的礼物表示谢意；(2)主体部分则需列举对方提供的帮助，说明该帮助所起的作用，或表达对所收礼物的喜爱以及以后如何使用及收藏等；(3)结尾部分需再次表达诚挚的谢意并问候对方。假如你是一名失学儿童，名叫李华，你有幸得到在中国工作的Mr.Brown的资助，可以重返校园。请你给Mr.Brown写一封信，内容如下：1收到钱和书后能重返校园，非常感激；2在老师的帮助下，学习有了很大的进步，受到老师的表扬和鼓励
2、；3决心更加努力学习，取得更大的进步；4盼望见到Mr.Brown，希望他寄来一张照片。注意：1书信应包括以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2词数80左右；文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。习作评阅自我修改三档作文Dear Mr.Brown，I am writing to express my deepest gratitude for the money and books you sent me.I could not return to school if you hadnt helped me.Thank you so much.I have been work hard s
3、ince I went back to school.I have made great progress in my studies under the help of my teachers.They often praise me and encourage me.I made up my mind to study harder and make great progress.How are you getting on with your life and work？I would like to meet you in person，but I have no opportunit
4、y to do so. (您能寄给我一张自己的照片吗？)Thank you again for your generous help and best wishes！Yours sincerely，Li Hua1.避免词汇搭配错误处under改为with处great改为greater2.杜绝语法错误处could not return改为could not have returned处work改为working处made改为have made3.要点一定不要遗漏补上处要点：Would you please send me a photo of yourself？自我提升向极优作文迈进Dear M
5、r.Brown，I am writing to express my deepest gratitude for the money and books you sent me.I could not have returned to school if you hadnt helped me.Thank you so much.I have been working hard since I went back to school.My teachers often praise me and encourage me.I have made great progress in my stu
6、dies with the help of them.I have made up my mind to study harder and make greater progress.How are you getting on with your life and work？I would like to meet you in person，but I have no opportunity to do so.Would you please send me a photo of yourself？Thank you again for your generous help and best wishes！Yours sincerely，Li Hua1.高级词汇处改为“without名词”形式：without your help2.高级句型用“介词关系代词”连接、句：My teachers often praise me and encourage me，with the help of whom I have made great progress in my studies.