1、Section Writing查理卓别林的遗产查理卓别林是英国演员、电影制作人和作曲家。他在20世纪最初十年成名,那时电影都是无声的而且是黑白的。查理卓别林是他那个时代最优秀的喜剧演员之一,因为他知道如何利用自己的身体和面部特征来逗人发笑。在我看来,查理卓别林最有趣的事情是他扮演流浪汉走路的样子,流浪汉是他扮演的最著名的角色。流浪汉是一个怀有善心的穷人,他拥有出人意料的冒险经历。这些经常涉及警察的冒险经历通常是最有趣的场景。我最喜欢的查理卓别林的电影是摩登时代,我最喜欢的场景是在工厂里,在那里查理卓别林在生产线上工作。当一只蜜蜂开始在查理的脸上盘旋时,他不能按时完成工作。看他努力赶上(工作进度
2、)真是太有趣了!我认为查理卓别林作品的力量不仅在于他的表演,还在于他创造的故事和人物。流浪汉是无声电影的象征,甚至许多年后,他仍能让人们开怀大笑。根据所提供的信息写一篇关于喜剧演员Billy Crystal的文章:1.他是美国著名的单口相声演员。20世纪70年代,他先是在纽约开始表演单口相声,后来又去了加利福尼亚。2.他主持的奥斯卡金像奖令全世界的观众都印象深刻。一个原因就是他思维异常敏捷,常常能就身边的人或事立即编出笑话来。3.他主持2004年的奥斯卡金像奖时,一位很老的演员上台发言,但技术故障使他很难堪。4.他放弃了事先准备好的笑话,说:“他似乎正适合从无声电影起家!”随后哄堂大笑。5.他
3、深受各年龄段人群的喜爱,他有能力让全世界的人开心。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇: stand-up单人喜剧表演的Oscar Academy Awards奥斯卡金像奖appropriate合适的写作指导本单元的写作话题是介绍一位喜剧演员。对喜剧演员的介绍属于人物介绍类的记叙文。此类文章主要介绍人物的生平、趣闻轶事、代表作品以及人们的评价等,写作时可重点突出该人物的风格。因此,在写作时要注意包含以下几方面的内容:(1)该喜剧演员的生平、主要事迹与他在喜剧领域中的地位;(2)该喜剧演员的性格特点,可通过几个事例进行佐证;(3)该喜剧演员的表演风格、代表作品及其作
4、品给我们带来的生活启示;(4)该喜剧演员所获得的荣誉以及人们的评价。审题谋篇词汇储备1.impress v.使钦佩,使留下深刻印象2.entertain v.使快乐3.roar v.哄笑,大笑4.put sb. on the spot使某人难堪词汇运用1.他主持的奥斯卡金像奖令全世界的观众都印象深刻。The Oscar Academy Awards he hosted impressed the audience all over the world.2.一个原因就是他思维异常敏捷,常常能就身边的人或事立即编出新的笑话来。One reason is that he is very quick-
5、thinking, and is often able to immediately make up new jokes about the people and things around him.3.一位很老的演员上台发言,但技术故障使他很难堪。A technical problem put a very old actor who was giving a speech on stage on the spot.4.他似乎正适合从无声电影起家!That he started in silent films seems appropriate!句式升级1.用被动语态和非限制性定语从句合并句
6、1和句2。The audience all over the world were impressed by the Oscar Academy Awards he hosted, one reason for which is that he is very quick-thinking, and is often able to immediately make up new jokes about the people and things around him.2.用现在分词短语作后置定语改写句3。A technical problem put a very old actor giv
7、ing a speech on stage on the spot.3.用含有it作形式主语的句子改写句4。It seems appropriate that he started in silent films.串句成文(注意使用and、so等衔接词)Billy Crystal is a well-known American stand-up comedian. He first started doing stand-up comedy in New York and then in California in the 1970s.The audience all over the wo
8、rld were impressed by the Oscar Academy Awards he hosted, one reason for which is that he is very quick-thinking, and is often able to immediately make up new jokes about the people and things around him. When he was the host of the 2004 Oscar Academy Awards, a technical problem put a very old actor
9、 giving a speech on stage on the spot. Instead of telling the joke he had planned, he said,“It seems appropriate that he started in silent films!” The audience roared with laughter.Crystal is popular with all age groups and has the ability to entertain people all over the world.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续
10、写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。A young woman was waiting for her flight at an airport. She was leaving for London because she got a new job there. It was said that her new boss was a typical English gentlemanpolite, modest, humorous and considerate. She was excited as well as a little nervous about her new life.Wi
11、th several long hours before her flight, the woman hunted for a book in the airport shops, bought a packet of cookies and found a place to sit on. She took out the book and started to read. Although she was absorbed in her book, she happened to see that a man sitting beside her, as bold (大胆的) as he
12、could be, grabbed a cookie or two from the bag between them. Educated to be well-mannered, she tried to ignore it to avoid an argument. But to show that she was the owner, she started to take cookies from that bag too. Unfortunately, the man didnt get that hint(暗示), since he didnt stop grabbing the
13、cookies.“How annoying!” She thought. As the greedy cookie thief kept eating, the woman munched (用力咀嚼) some cookies and watched the clock.She was getting angrier as minutes went by, thinking,“If I werent so nice, I would blacken his eyes.” With each cookie she took, he took one, too; when only one wa
14、s left, she wondered what he would do.With a smile on his face, and a nervous laugh, he took the last cookie and broke it in half. He offered her a half, and ate the other. She grabbed it from him, glared at him and thought,“Oh, brother. This guy has some nerve and he is so rude! Why didnt he even s
15、how any gratitude?”She had never known when she had been so angry, and sighed in relief when her flight was called.She gathered her belongings and headed to the gate quickly, refusing to look back at the rude thief. She boarded the plane, sank in her seat, and looked for her book, which was almost c
16、omplete.注意:续写的词数应为150左右。Paragraph 1:As she reached in her baggage, she gasped (喘气) in surprise. She took it out carefully and was surprised to see her own packet of cookies. At that moment, the woman was so ashamed that she covered her face with her mouth wide open and face turning red instantly. “I
17、 owe him a sincere apology,” she thought. Just as she was blank in her head, a soft and clear voice, “Excuse me, Lady,” woke her up to the real world. She looked back instinctively to see who he was. Paragraph 2:Surprisingly, she found the man sitting just behind her.She lowered a bit of her body sh
18、amefully, hesitated for a moment and introduced herself nervously. After further communication, she was surprised to find the gentleman was actually her new boss in London. All the air seemed to disappear and she felt as if the whole world was watching her. Seeing her embarrassment and nervousness,
19、the considerate boss calmed her down patiently and asked her to discuss her new job ahead of time. “What a coincidence! What an unforgivable mistake!” she thought.写作指导Step 1把握主题,确定思路(1)主旨大意:文章前两句话“A young woman was waiting for her flight at an airport. She was leaving for London because she got a ne
20、w job there.”点明故事发生的地点和这位女士的行程。(2)续写思路:一个是女士发现自己错怪那个人了,不该把他当作小偷;另外一个是上了飞机后两人座位一前一后,聊天中发现这个人是自己的新老板。Step 2拓展情节,选词构句根据第一段指导语(As she reached in her baggage, she gasped in surprise.) 和第二段指导语(Surprisingly, she found the man sitting just behind her.)可以想象女士错怪那位绅士,进一步聊天发现两人是老板和员工关系的故事。Step 3添加细节,注意风格(1)细节:注
21、意语言、动作、心理、情感等的细节描述。如:carefully、surprised、ashamed、turning red、looked back、lowered等。(2)风格:原文叙述语言比较朴实,没有华丽的辞藻,也没有使用修辞手法。使用的简单的动词、形容词、定语从句、宾语从句、状语从句、非谓语动词以及被动语态主要用于刻画人物的语言、动作心理、神态以及环境氛围,续写时要沿用原文的叙事风格,不要卖弄文采,弄巧成拙。另外,文章续写部分是故事的转折、高潮和结局部分,叙事节奏应该由原文的紧张激烈过渡到平和的状态。续写的文章要体现出女士的羞愧和男士的宽容大度。Step 4润色成文,复查誊写成文:沿用原文的叙事风格,使用一些动词、形容词、非谓语形式、插入语、状语从句、宾语从句、主语从句以及倒装句等高级表达手段。运用恰当的代词、衔接词把句子连接成文。复查:续写部分与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度。续写部分两段间的内在联系。应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性。要与原文的主题或作者的本来意图保持一致。要与原文的体裁、结构、写作手法保持一致。要与原文的语言特点和叙事风格保持一致。主要人物的思想行为、性格特点要与原文保持一致。人称、时态、单复数的一致性,词语使用准确、字数控制和卷面整洁等问题。