1、专题能力提升练六短文改错(二)Test 12020深圳市高三第二次检测 One afternoon after school, I found a beautiful little fox with a injured leg. She was like a Disney fox. Then I fed her some fish. A couple of week later the fox was back, completely well and she had been keeping visiting me ever since. She was comfortably enough
2、 to come really near to me. She allowed me to taking photos of her, the best of which I posted it on social media. Soon after, she took her cubs together to visit me, that was really unexpected. Its amazed to have this connection with something so wild this busy city. But happily the lovely fox stil
3、l keeps turning up.Test 22020昆明市高三“三诊一模”摸底诊断测试 At lunch in the first day of my high school, I saw a girl sit alone. I decided to sit with her and we had a pleasant chat. Late, we became close friends in following three years. One day, he shared something touching with me. “Do you remember the day wh
4、en you come over and sat next to me, wearing a big smile？” she asked me. “I want you to know how much special you are. I was disappointing at that time, but your smile made my day，” she added.I cant help smile each time I think of the scene, that shows me that a simple act of kindness can change liv
5、es greatly.Test 32020郑州高三第一次质测 The first foreign language I never learnt was French, but it didnt go very well. My mother asked our neighbor teach me when I was seven. French wasnt his native languages, but he used to live in France, so he could speak a little. However, I learnt very little until I
6、didnt feel it related to my daily life anyway. When I entered into a senior high school, my attitude to language learning changed. I decided to learn Latin, that Ive always been interested in because I want to study law. Learning Latin wasnt a struggle for myself for this reason. Soon I begin to rea
7、d classics in Latin. Read those books opened a window for me to another world or gave me a new point of view on my own world.Test 42020福建省高三毕业班质量检查测试 Working on a farm was quite a experience! Our teacher told us that how a city farm in our neighbourhood was looking for young people to helping with t
8、he animals. City farms were a great way for people to get amazed experiences of country life. We can learn more about animals and plant and even take part working on the farm. So I spoke to the owner of the farm, but a few days later I was looking after the horses on the farm. I was proud of myself
9、when he helped a young boy to ride a horse for the first time. It real meant a lot to him and to me！专题能力提升练六短文改错(二)Test 1答案与解析：One afternoon after school, I found a beautiful little fox with injured leg. She was like a Disney fox. Then I fed her some fish. A couple of later the fox was back, complet
10、ely well and she been keeping visiting me ever since. She was enough to come really near to me. She allowed me to photos of her, the best of which I posted on social media. Soon after, she took her cubs together to visit me, was really unexpected. Its to have this connection with something so wild t
11、his busy city. happily the lovely fox still keeps turning up.a改为an冠词误用。此处泛指“一条受伤的腿”，因injured的发音以元音音素开头，故其前要用不定冠词an。week改为weeks名词的单复数误用。a couple of意为“一些，几个”，其后要用可数名词的复数形式，故将week改为weeks。had改为has时态误用。根据本句中的“ever since”以及文章最后一句中的“still keeps turning up”可知，此处要用现在完成进行时，故将had改为has。comfortably改为comfortable形
12、容词和副词混用。此处应用形容词comfortable作表语，被副词enough修饰。taking改为take动词形式误用。allow sb. to do sth.意为“允许某人做某事”，是固定用法。删除posted后的it代词多用。分析句子结构可知，本句的后半部分是一个which引导的非限制性定语从句，其包含“theadj.ofwhich”结构，of which构成的介词短语作定语，修饰其前的“the best”，而“the best”是posted的宾语，故posted后的it多余，应删除。that改为which关系代词误用。此处引导非限制性定语从句，修饰前面的整个主句，且从句缺少主语，故要
13、用which。amazed改为amazing形容词误用。根据句意可知，此处修饰物，表示“令人大为惊奇的”，应用amazing; amazed一般修饰人，意为“惊讶的”。wild后加in介词漏用。此处应用“in this busy city”作地点状语。But改为And连词误用。根据语境可知，此处前后两个句子之间是并列关系，故应用And。But表转折，不符合语境。Test 2答案与解析：At lunch the first day of my high school, I saw a girl alone. I decided to sit with her and we had a pleas
14、ant chat. ， we became close friends in following three years. One day, shared something touching with me. “Do you remember the day when you over and sat next to me, wearing a big smile？” she asked me. “I want you to know how special you are. I was at that time, but your smile made my day，” she added
15、.I cant help each time I think of the scene, shows me that a simple act of kindness can change lives greatly.in改为on介词误用。表示在具体的某一天用介词on。sit改为sitting动词形式误用。根据语境可知，此处考查固定用法see sb. doing sth.“看到某人正在做某事”，故把sit改为sitting。Late改为Later副词误用。结合语境可知，此处表示“后来，我们在接下来的三年成了亲密的朋友”，应用副词Later。late作副词时意为“迟，晚”，不符合语境。follo
16、wing前加the冠词漏用。根据语境可知，此处特指接下来的三年，故用定冠词the修饰。he改为she代词误用。根据上文中的“a girl”可知，此处应用代词she。come改为came动词时态误用。此处应与and后的sat的时态保持一致，且由该句中的“remember the day”可推知，事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时。删除much副词多用。分析句子成分可知，how引导宾语从句，在从句中作状语，修饰形容词special, much多余，故删除。disappointing改为disappointed形容词误用。此处修饰主语I，应用形容词disappointed，而disappointing往
17、往修饰物，表示“令人失望的”。smile改为smiling固定搭配误用。sb. cant help doing sth.“某人忍不住做某事”是固定搭配，故用smiling。that改为which定语从句关系代词误用。分析句子结构可知，此处引导非限制性定语从句，在从句中作主语，先行词为the scene，故用which来引导该从句。Test 3答案与解析：The first foreign language I learnt was French, but it didnt go very well. My mother asked our neighbor teach me when I wa
18、s seven. French wasnt his native ， but he used to live in France, so he could speak a little. However, I learnt very little I didnt feel it related to my daily life anyway. When I entered a senior high school, my attitude to language learning changed. I decided to learn Latin, Ive always been intere
19、sted in because I want to study law. Learning Latin wasnt a struggle for for this reason. Soon I to read classics in Latin. those books opened a window for me to another world gave me a new point of view on my own world.never改为ever副词误用。根据该句后半部分“but it didnt go very well”可推知，此处表示作者曾学过的第一门外语，而非从没有学过，故
20、用副词ever。neighbor后加to不定式符号漏用。ask sb. to do sth.“请求某人做某事”为固定用法，其中动词不定式短语作宾语补足语。languages改为language名词单复数误用。此处应与句子的主语French相对应，故用language。until改为because/since/as连词误用。分析句子可知，该处前后部分为因果关系，前果后因，故用连词because或since或as。删除into介词多用。此处enter意为“成为的一员，加入”，为及物动词，后直接跟宾语，故删除介词into。that改为which定语从句关系代词误用。此处引导非限制性定语从句，在从句中
21、作in的宾语，先行词为Latin，表示物的概念，故用which。myself改为me代词误用。该句的主语是“Learning Latin”，表示物的概念，而非人“I”，此处表示“对我来说”，故不用反身代词myself；另介词后跟代词的宾格形式，故用宾格代词me。begin改为began动词的时态误用。与前一句中的wasnt和后一句中的opened的时态相呼应可知，此处讲述的事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时。Read改为Reading动词形式误用。分析句子结构可知，此处作主语，故用其动名词形式。or改为and连词误用。根据语境可知，此处前后部分表示逻辑上的递进关系，而非选择关系，故用连词and。T
22、est 4答案与解析：Working on a farm was quite experience! Our teacher told us that a city farm in our neighbourhood was looking for young people to with the animals. City farms a great way for people to get experiences of country life. We can learn more about animals and and even take part working on the f
23、arm. So I spoke to the owner of the farm, a few days later I was looking after the horses on the farm. I was proud of myself when helped a young boy to ride a horse for the first time. It meant a lot to him and to me!a改为an冠词误用。此处experience意为“经历”，为可数名词，第一次在语境中出现，应用不定冠词修饰，且其发音以元音音素开头，故用不定冠词an。删除how副词多
24、用。分析句子结构可知，句中的that引导宾语从句，在从句中不作句子成分，从句也不缺少成分，how多余，故删除。helping改为help动词形式误用。此处的to是不定式符号，表示目的，而非介词to，故to后应用动词原形help，而非动名词形式。were改为are动词时态误用。根据语境可知，本句是在陈述一种客观存在的情况，故应用一般现在时。amazed改为amazing形容词误用。此处修饰表示物的experiences，应用amazing，表示“令人大为惊奇的”，而amazed意为“大为惊奇”，一般修饰人。plant改为plants名词单复数误用。plant是可数名词，且与and前的名词复数形式animals并列，故应用其复数形式。part后加in介词漏用。take part in sth.“参加某事”是固定搭配，故在part后加介词in。but改为and连词误用。根据语境并分析句子结构可知，此处前后的内容为顺承关系，故用连词and。but表转折，不符合语境。he改为I代词误用。根据本句的内容可知，此处表示“我”为自己感到自豪，又结合语境可推知，帮助一个小男孩第一次骑马的是作者自己，故用第一人称代词的主格形式作主语。real改为really副词和形容词混用。分析句子成分可知，此处应为副词，修饰动词meant，在句子中作状语。