1、Section Writing如何描写人物普通表达常用词汇普通句式让学生写作思路“活”起来任务呈现某英文报正在举办主题为“A person I admire most”的征文活动，你有意参加。请你用英语写一篇短文并投稿。注意：词数100左右。写作指导一、审题定调本写作任务要求介绍最钦佩的人，属于描写文。这类作文主要是通过对人物外貌、事迹等的描写来反映人物的思想、性格、品质等特点。本写作时态以现在时态为主；人称以第三人称为主。二、谋篇布局本写作任务可分为三部分：第一部分：引入话题(介绍人物的基本情况，如外貌、年龄等)。第二部分：具体介绍(包括人物的性格、事迹等)。第三部分：总结全文(对所介绍人物
2、进行整体评价)。三、组织语言第一部分：引入话题(介绍人物的基本情况)。1_.我最钦佩的人是我最好的朋友。2She is _. (一个漂亮的17岁女孩)3She/He has _ (一张漂亮/英俊的脸) and theres always a bright smile on it.第二部分：具体介绍(包括人物的性格、事迹等)4_.她学习和帮助老师都做得很好。5_.她非常喜欢科学并且有一些了不起的发明。6What moves me most is that _.(当别人遇到困难时，她总是乐于助人)第三部分：总结全文(对所介绍人物进行整体评价)。7She is _ (最好的学生之一) our sch
3、ool has ever had.8_.所有的老师和学生都对她评价很高。9_.我们所有的人都很喜欢她。四、连句成篇_我的写作体会：_高级表达精彩词汇句式升级让学生满分作文“易”起来任务呈现假定英语课上，老师让同学们写一篇英语短文介绍一位国内的杰出女性。请你根据以下表格写一篇短文介绍网坛名将李娜。职业中国职业网球运动员经历1.有运动天赋，7岁开始打网球，1999年成为职业选手；2.2002年离开国家队到大学学习；3.在丈夫的鼓励下，她2004年继续网球生涯；4.在2011法国网球公开赛和2014年澳大利亚网球公开赛上获得两次大满贯，是亚洲第一位大满贯女子单打冠军。评价她在训练场上的决心和努力使她
4、成功，她的精神对中国年轻人有很大影响。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：单打冠军 singles title大满贯 Grand Slam法国网球公开赛French Open澳大利亚网球公开赛 Australian Open写作步骤一、统筹安排Outline of the text：Paragraph 1：Giving a brief introduction to Li NaParagraph 2: Describing Li Nas experiences in detailParagraph 3: Making comments on Li Na二、词语储
5、备A：professional, gift, influence, encourage, succeed， determinationB：1._在期间2_ 对有天赋3_ 在的鼓励下4_ 继续；坚持5_ 对有很大影响三、备用句型罗列1李娜是一名中国职业网球运动员，在职业生涯中她赢得了许多单打冠军头衔。Li Na is a Chinese professional tennis player and she won many singles titles over the course of her career.(改为非限制性定语从句)Li Na is a Chinese professiona
6、l tennis player, _ over the course of her Career.2李娜对运动很有天赋，而且在7岁时就开始打网球。Li Na had a great gift for sports and began to play tennis at age 7. (改为含with的句子)_， Li Na began to play tennis at age 7.3在她丈夫的鼓励下，李娜在2004年继续她的网球生涯。With the encouragement of her husband, Li Na carried on her tennis career in 200
7、4. (改为同义句)_， Li Na carried on her tennis career in 2004.4她在训练场上展现出的决心和努力使她成功。The determination and hard work that Li Na showed at the training ground made her succeed. (改为主语从句)_ the determination and hard work she showed at the training ground.5然而，2002年李娜离开国家网球队去大学学习。(汉译英)_四、扩充要点，连词成句_我的写作体会：_Sectio
8、n Writing一测基础过关写作指导三、组织语言1The person I admire most is my best friend2a goodlooking 17yearold girl3a pretty/handsome face4She does well both in her studying and helping the teachers5She likes studying science very much and has made some wonderful inventions6she is always helpful when others meet with
9、 difficulties7one of the best students8She is highly thought of by all of the teachers and students9We all like her very much四、连句成篇The person I admire most is my best friend, LiLi. She is a goodlooking 17yearold girl. She has a pretty face and theres always a bright smile on it.As a monitor, Li Li d
10、oes well both in her studying and helping the teachers. Besides, she likes studying science very much and has made some wonderful inventions. What moves me most is that she is always helpful when others meet with difficulties.Li Li is one of the best students our school has ever had and she is highl
11、y thought of by all of the teachers and students.二测能力提升写作步骤二、词语储备1over the course of.2have a gift for.3with the encouragement of.4carry on5have a great influence on.三、备用句型罗列1who won many singles titles2With a great gift for sports3Encouraged by her husband4What made Li Na succeed was5However, in 200
12、2, Li Na left the national tennis team to study at university.四、扩充要点，连词成句Li Na is a Chinese professional tennis player, who won many singles titles over the course of her career.Li Na had a great gift for sports and began to play tennis at age 7. She became a professional player in 1999. However, in
13、 2002, Li Na left the national tennis team to study at university. With the encouragement of her husband, Li Na carried on her tennis career in 2004. She won two Grand Slam singles titles at the 2011 French Open and 2014 Australian Open, which made her achieve the first Grand Slam womens singles cha
14、mpion status in Asia.What made Li Na succeed was the determination and hard work she showed at the training ground. Her spirit has a great influence on young Chinese people.三测学业达标写作训练一、One possible version：One of the great women that I respect is Audrey Hepburn, who was a famous actress.Born on May
15、4,1929, Audrey Hepburn was goodlooking with beautiful hair and smooth skin. She was a ballet dancer before becoming an actress. Recognized as a film and fashion icon, Hepburn was active during Hollywoods Golden Age. After playing the leading role in Roman Holiday, a screen classic, she won several i
16、mportant awards. Besides, she devoted much of her later life to helping unfortunate children in the world and went to some of the poorest countries.Audrey Hepburn is remembered not only for her attractive appearance, but also for her contribution to charity events for children.二、One possible version
17、：My favourite teacher is Mark, an American in his fifties teaching us English.Mark is a strict and highly experienced teacher. His teaching style is quite different from that of other teachers in our school. Hes able to create an atmosphere in which all of us would like to voice our minds actively.
18、Apart from that, hes easy to get along with. In his spare time, he often organises activities such as outings and parties for us, from which we benefit a lot. As a responsible teacher, he checks our homework carefully every day.I feel so lucky to have such an amazing teacher.写作训练一、假定你是李华，某英文杂志社要设立Great Women专栏，正在征集相关稿件。请你根据以下表格写一篇短文并向该杂志社投稿。Audrey Hepburn职业演员出生日期1929.5.4经历1.成为演员前是一名芭蕾舞舞者；2.在罗马假日中饰演主角后，赢得了几项重要奖项；3.晚年致力于帮助世界上不幸的孩子，去过一些最穷的国家。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：芭蕾ballet罗马假日Roman Holiday_二、你校英文报正举办主题为“My favourite teacher”的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文并投稿。注意：词数100左右。_
