1、2013高考英语二轮四川省(完成句子+书面表达)专题训练(14)及答案完成句子+短文写作(66)第一节:完成句子阅读下列各小题,根据括号内的汉语提示,用句末括号内的英语单词完成句子。1.Their house in the city centre has been taken apart, _ (使他们) homeless and have to settle in the countryside because of the poor housing. (make) 2.There _ (没有意义)in working for my PhD, I was convinced that I s
2、hould get engaged first. (point)3._(你在学习上投入得越多) your study, the better you will do in the exams. (devote)4.If only I _ (听从了) your advice! Look, what a mess I have made now! (follow)5._ (是谁) that removed the bronze statue from the square of St. Petersburg? (who)6.What you said and did in the meeting
3、yesterday _ (出乎我的意料). (beyond)7.There is _ (双倍的) competition among countries to host the Olympics as to win gold medals. (much)8._ (他们的共同点) is that they are both devoted fans of Michael Jackson. (have)9. I dont think this amber necklace is a national treasure, nor _ (它也不属于) any single person. (belon
4、g)10. The newest modern technology (已经采用),which indicates the factories will produce more advanced cars very soon. (adopt)2013高考英语(书面表达)英语书面表达八注意(1)书面表达是历年高考英语的重头戏之一,它旨在考查学生的英语表达能力,即运用学过的英语知识和掌握的技能,以书面语言形式进行思想交流的能力。满分为25分,写作较好的学生能得分左右,而写作较差的学生只能得分左右。这在很大程度上也影响了学生的高考总成绩。所以,如何写好英语书面表达已经引起了广大师生的注意。如何写好
5、书面表达除了要求基本功要扎实、平时多背多练以外,还要注意以下八点: 一、注意审清题目要求 有的学生写作文没耐心,审题时只扫一眼题目,不细审就急于下笔,结果离题甚远。其实书面表达一般属控制性写作,都提供文章的文体、人物的身份、事情发生的时间、地点、文章的主旨,这些都为写作提供了依据。所以动笔之前,一定要花上几分钟,仔细审题,力求做到全面、准确地把握题目所提供的内容、时间、人物、环境、地点、体裁等信息。 二、注意用合理的体裁、题材 写作前,首先要弄清文章的体裁,才能考虑用何种语言、语气。而且,恰当的体裁也无疑会给批阅者留下好的印象。所以动笔之前,一定要审清文章的体裁和题材。一般说来,书面表达题材与
6、现实生活息息相关。如交友信、询问信、介绍人物、事情、场所、保护环境、爱护动物等,这些学生都比较熟悉。书面表达常碰到的体裁有记叙文、说明文、应用文、记叙文、说明文多用书面语,而应用文多用口头语。各种体裁又都有自己的格式。如:写信时,要求写信人的地址、时间写在信的右上角;英文便条无须写地址,但要写明时间;口头通知无须注明通知的时间和地点,但开头要加称呼语和提示语,结束要加Thank you.。书面通知要有明确的通知时间、通知人或单位。所有这些都要求学生平时牢记在心。 三、注意正确使用人称 根据评分标准,如果书面表达人称写错,全文要另外扣除分,而每年期末考试各年级试卷统批中,总有一批学生在这方面失分
7、,委实令人惋惜。因此,写作之前,确立人称是审题必不可少的步骤之一。 四、注意掌握中心要点 要点是否写到、写全,是否遗漏内容是书面表达评分标准的一个重要标尺。所以审清了文章的主题、人称以后,接着要考虑文章的内容要点了。如果题目给出了汉语提示和要求,则可仔细从中找出要点;如果是图画、图表则要仔细观察,故事性的则按图画顺序去设计故事发展情节;介绍事、物的作文应注意图画中的箭头、事物、场景及前后对比变化,同时注意图画以外的提示。然后将内容要点一一列出,再用合理的词语、句型连词成句。 五、注意正确合理地使用词语与句型 句子结构的好坏直接影响意义的表达和文章的得分。所以,写作时,学生应尽量确保使用正确的词
8、语与句型。这就要求学生平时要多背多练,有扎实的基础。同时要让学生懂得,如果自己基础较差,则在写作时尽量多用自己熟悉的句型。尽量回避自己不熟悉的单词、句型,用自己有把握的短语、句型,少追求文章的华丽。因为评判一篇文章的好坏,错误的多少是一个重要依据。同时,为使文章主题突出,行文流畅,写作结束后应仔细查看上下文逻辑关系与过渡词使用得是否恰当,尽可能地运用自己已掌握的一些高级词汇、短语或从句,这对提高文章档次是至关重要的。这就要求学生平时注意掌握一些表示并列、递进、转折、因果等的过渡词,如:and, but, however, yet, so, therefore, then, later, mea
9、nwhile, whats more等。 六、注意使用正确的时态、语态 根据评分标准,书面表达时态用错全文要扣分,所以正确使用动词的时态、语态是书面表达的重点。一般说来,记叙文讲的是发生了的事情,应以过去时为主。通知是将要发生的事,以事实为主。说明文、议论文阐明的是事实、论点、论据,以现在时为主。当然,也有综合时态的,如年高考题写学校新旧变化,就兼用过去时和现在时。 *结束第二节:写作2009年5月,武汉市开始推行免费自行车租用服务,几个月来,该服务受到市民的普遍欢迎。假定你是武汉的高中学生李华,请你向全球环境英语报投稿,对此作简要评论并谈谈自己的看法。要点如下:优 点不 足你 的 看 法1方
10、便2环保1办理借车卡不容易,2少数人占用车时间过长,以致有时无车可租。?词数:120左右,文章的开头和落款已给出,不计入词数。Dear editor, Im a high school student in Wuhan. Recently our city is implementating a free bike rental service, which is warmly welcomed by citizens. Yours sincerely, Li Hua第一节:完成句子1.which makes them / making them2. being no point3. The
11、more you devote (yourself) to4. had followed5. Who was it6. is / was beyond my expectation7. twice as much8. What they have in common9. does it belong to10.has (already)been adopted第二节:写作Reference version:Dear editor,Im a high school student in Wuhan. Recently our city is implementating a free bike
12、rental service, which is warmly welcomed by citizens. The service shows a lot of advantages. For example, it is very convenient for people to go wherever they want. Whats more,it is friendly to environment. For a short distance, more and more people now choose to ride bikes instead of taking buses.
13、As a result, the city environment has got great benefit.However, there still exist some points that need to be improved. Firstly it is usually not an easy job to get the rent card. They have to do many things like filling forms, which requires their time and patience. Besides, some people keep bikes too long a time, making others sometimes have no bikes to rent .In my opinion, we may simplify the way of applying for a card and limit the time for renting a bike. For those who use the bikes over time, fining them for it may be an effective way. Yours sincerely, Li Hua*结束