2020-2021学年人教版英语必修4教师用书：UNIT 3 SECTION Ⅴ GUIDED WRITING 如何写幽默类故事性的记叙文 WORD版含解析.doc

1、如何写幽默类故事性的记叙文故事类文章属于记叙文文体。在写作过程中一些技巧需要灵活地掌握和运用：1要把握住记叙文的六个要素，即时间(when)，地点(where)，人物(who)，事件(what)，原因(why)和过程(how)。2要把握故事性记叙文的结构。在文章开头要交代故事发生的时间、地点和人物，然后写事件的原因及发展过程，最后写结果。并且要有一条线索贯穿全文，使整篇文章融为一体。1One day/The other day，sb.planned/intended/wanted/hoped to.某一天/几天前，某人计划/打算/想要/希望2Unfortunately/Fortunately/

2、Suddenly，sb.found that.不幸的是/幸运的是/突然，某人发现3Sb.ran into/came across/met with.in the.某人在遇到了4Sb.felt very content/happy/sad/terrible/embarrassed.某人感到非常满意/高兴/伤心/可怕/尴尬5Sth.happened to sb.某人突然发生了某事6It hit/occurred to/struck sb.that.某人突然想到结合下面的提要，写一篇100个词左右的幽默故事。1一个过度肥胖的妇女想向医生寻求减肥的方法；2医生建议她吃谷物和蔬菜两天，然后隔一天(ski

3、p a day)，再反复如此两周；3一段时间后，她减肥将近20磅，医生很吃惊；4秘诀：跳跃。体裁记叙文话题一则幽默小故事时态一般过去时人称第三人称结构开始：妇女需要减肥，寻求医生的建议发展：医生提出建议，妇女按医嘱减肥结局：减肥成功，出乎医生意料.对接单元词汇1be content with 对满意2astonishing 令人感到惊讶的3particularly 尤其是4directions 指示，说明.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1医生建议她吃谷物和蔬菜两天，然后隔一天(skip a day)，再反复如此两周。(advise sb.to do sth.)Doctor advised h

4、er to eat vegetables and grains for 2 days，then skip a day，and do it like this for 2 weeks.2下次我见你时，你会至少减去5磅。(next time 引导时间状语从句)Next time I see you，you will have lost at least 5 pounds.(二)句式升级3一个过度肥胖的妇女想向医生寻求减肥的方法。她的医生让她节食。(and连接并列句)A terribly overweight woman went to ask her doctor about ways of lo

5、sing weight.Her doctor put her on a diet.A terribly overweight woman went to ask her doctor about ways of losing weight，and her doctor put her on a diet4一段时间后，当她回来时，她减肥将近20磅，医生很吃惊。(v.ing作结果状语)Some time later，when she returned she shocked the doctor by losing nearly 20 poundsSome time later，when she

6、returned she lost nearly 20 pounds，making her doctor shocked 【参考范文】The Perfect DietA terribly overweight woman went to ask her doctor about ways of losing weight，and her doctor put her on a diet.“I advise you to eat vegetables and grains for 2 days，then skip a day，and do it like this for 2 weeks.You

7、d better not eat too much meat，particularly pork.Next time I see you，you will have lost at least 5 pounds.You will be content with you”However，when the woman returned，she shocked the doctor by losing nearly 20 pounds.“Why，thats astonishing！”the doctor said.“Did you follow my directions？”The woman nodded，“To tell you the truth，I thought I was going to drop dead on the third day.”“From hunger，you mean？”“No，from skipping.”