1、第三部分 第十讲第十讲 说明文型读写任务 第三部分 第十讲阅读下列短文,然后按要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文。Some youths who fled from big cities to small and mediumsized cities due to stress are now coming back to the big cities,after they found things are not what they imagined,Peoples Dailyreported.Zeng Jing,26,left Guangzhou at the end of last y
2、ear and moved to Changping town in Dongguan city,due to high living pressures such as housing and transportation.But when she arrived and lived in the town,she became disappointed.第三部分 第十讲“There are very few entertainment places in the town.I could not find any fun after supper,”she said.Whats more,
3、she found it hard to find a boyfriend there.Men available to date were far from her requirements in terms of educational background and vision.Zeng returned to Guangzhou in October and continues struggling.But she feels different,“Despite hard work,I do not feel depressed as before.Instead,I cherish
4、 every day here now.”第三部分 第十讲Zhao Wen could not adjust to life in small cities due to a different reason.Zhao Wen left Beijing and went to Taian,Shandong province,where he did sports marketing with his uncle.He applied for approval from the local government for a new project,but after half a month,h
5、e got no reply.Finally his uncle managed it in two days by treating,flattering and sending gifts to the official in charge.第三部分 第十讲【写作内容】1以约 30 词概括短文的要点。2然后以约 120 词就“城市生活”发表看法,要点包括:(1)读完此报道后,你对年轻人重回大城市的看法。(2)你大学毕业后会选择生活在大城市还是中小城市。(3)为了让年轻人乐意待在中小城市,政府该做些什么?第三部分 第十讲【写作要求】1在作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读
6、材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。_第一步 定时态、人称一般现在时;第一人称为主第二步 布文章结构简要概述上文内容;阐述对此类现象的看法;你的打算以及政府应该采取的措施。第三步 列要点信息1出现此类现象的原因有多方面;2选择中小城市的优势;3自己大学毕业后选择留在大城市以及原因;4政府应该促进中小城市的发展,吸引更多的大学毕业生。taking the examples of1这个报告以曾静和赵文为例,告诉我们一些年轻人在从大城市到中小城市后由于各种原因重回大城市。(一般表达)The report too
7、k the examples of Zeng Jing and Zhao Wen.The youths fled from big cities to small and medium-sized cities.The report tells us that some youths are now returning for various reasons.(高级表达)(主语+非谓语动词+谓语+宾语从句)The report,_ Zeng Jing and Zhao Wen,tells us that some youths,after fleeing from big cities to
8、small and mediumsized cities,are now returning for various reasons.2待在大城市,年轻人有更多成功的机会。(一般表达)When the youths stay in big cities,they will have more opportunities to be successful.(高级表达)(非谓语+主句)_,youths have more opportunities to be successful.Staying in big cities3为了让年轻人愿意待在中小城市,政府应该创造一个平等竞争的氛围来吸引人才。
9、(一般表达)If the government want to make youths willing to stay in medium-sized and small cities,they should build a fairer competition atmosphere to attract talents.(高级表达)(不定式+主句)_ in medium-sized and small cities,the government should build a fairer competition atmosphere to attract talents.To make yo
10、uths willing to stay_One possible version:The report,taking the examples of Zeng Jing and Zhao Wen,tells us that some youths,after fleeing from big cities to small and mediumsized cities,are now returning for various reasons,like lacking entertainment and fairness.Reading the report,I think it quite
11、 wise for youths to choose to return to big cities.As we know,in China today,development in small or mediumsized cities is far behind that in big ones,so staying in big cities,youths have more opportunities to be successful.Besides,they can enjoy a more colorful life,as operas,concerts,museums and s
12、o on are easily accessible.After graduating from college,I would like to live in big cities.After all,big cities offer more fun and more job opportunities and are more open and fair,compared to small cities.Moreover,I can keep pace with the outside world,get to know the latest fashion and see new th
13、ings almost every day.In my opinion,to make youths willing to stay in mediumsized and small cities,the government should build a fairer competition atmosphere to attract talents.Besides,a better platform should be provided for the young to show their talents.说明文型读写任务解题关键说明文型读写任务的写作,要了解说明的主旨以及说明的顺序,要求学生按照合理的顺序或按一定的写作线索选用适当的连接词,将句子连珠成串,使各句连成结构紧凑、层次分明、语义连贯的短文。说明文的大体结构有两种:总体叙述 细节或过程说明 概括评述;现象或变化 细节或原因阐述 引发的后果和相关启示。说明文型读写任务应注意的问题:(1)说明文通常会有中心句,写概要时要注意找出中心句。中心句通常在文章第一段和各段的第一句,然后用自己的话重组文章的信息。(2)对现象分析型说明文,可采用“现象造成这种现象的原因解决这种现象或问题的措施或建议”的结构安排。本部分内容讲解结束 按ESC键退出全屏播放