1、第三部分 第九讲第九讲 夹叙夹议型读写任务 第三部分 第九讲阅读下列短文，然后按要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文。(2016扬州模拟)Horror filled the heart of the World War soldier as he saw his lifelong friend fall in battle.Trapped there with continuous gunfire over his head,the soldier asked his captain if he might go out into the“No Mans Land”to bring his f
2、allen friend back.“You can go,”said the captain,“but I dont think it will be worth it.Your friend is probably dead and you may throw your own life away.”The captains words didnt matter,and the soldier went anyway.Miraculously he managed to reach his friend,carried him onto his shoulder,and brought h
3、im back.As the two of them got there,the officer checked the wounded soldier,then lookedkindly at his friend.“I told you it wouldnt be worth it,”he said.“Your friend is dead,and you are seriously wounded.”“It was worth it,though,sir,”the soldier said.“How do you mean worth it？”responded the captain.
4、“Your friend is dead！”“Yes sir,”the private answered.“But it was worth it because when I got to him,he was still alive,and I had the satisfaction of hearing him say，Jim,I knew youd come.”Many a time in life,whether a thing is worth doing or not really depends on how you look at it.【写作内容】1用约 30 词写出上文
5、概要；2用约 120 词发表你的观点，内容包括：(1)联系实际阐释“值与不值”；(2)举例说明你觉得“值”且毅然“做”过的事；(3)阐述这次经历给你的感悟。【写作要求】1作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。_第一步 定时态、人称一般过去时和一般现在时；第一人称为主第二步 布文章结构简要概述上文内容；联系实际阐释“值”；举例说明你觉得“值”且毅然“做”过的事；阐述感悟。第三步 列要点信息1概述那个士兵的行为“值”；2阐述“值”的意义；3叙述自己的经历；4阐
6、述自己的感悟。1在一次战役中一个士兵不顾首长的劝告，冒着生命危险坚持要把自己毕生的朋友从“无人之地”带回来。(一般表达)A soldier risked his life in a battle.The soldier turned a deaf ear to his captains advice.He insisted on bringing his lifelong friend back from the“No Mans Land”(高级表达)(非谓语动词+主语+非谓语动词+谓语+宾语)_,a soldier,_,insisted on bringing his lifelong fr
7、iend back from the“No Mans Land”Risking his life in a battleturning a deaf ear to his captains advice2不管其他人可能说什么，我们朝前去，因为我们坚信这值得尝试。(一般表达)No matter what others might say,we go ahead.We hold the belief strongly.It is worth a try.(高级表达)(what 宾语从句 主句 原因状语从句 同位语从句)Regardless of _,we go ahead _ we hold th
8、e belief strongly _ it is worth a try.what others might sayasthat3鼓起所有勇气，做你心里想做的，这样你以后就不会后悔没做。(一般表达)You should take up all your courage.You should do something your heart tells you to do.You may not regret not doing it later in life.(高级表达)(祈使句+and+陈述句+目的状语从句)_ and do something your heart tells you t
9、o do _ you may not regret not doing it later in life.Take up all your courageso that_One possible version：Risking his life in a battle,a soldier,turning a deaf ear to his captains advice,insisted on bringing his lifelong friend back from the“No Mans Land”despite the fact he was probably dead,which,i
10、n his view,was worth the risk.In reality,there is indeed something seemingly unworthy in others eyes but extremely worthwhile to us.Therefore,regardless of what others might say,we go ahead as we hold the belief strongly that it is worth a try.This reminds me of an experience years ago.A friend of m
11、ine,once mistaken for a thief,was deserted by others,who kept urging me never to last our friendship.However,I,never losing trust in him,regarded him as my friend before he was proved to be innocent.Take up all your courage and do something your heart tells you to do so that you may not regret not d
12、oing it later in life.夹叙夹议型读写任务解题关键夹叙夹议就是一方面叙述某一事情，另一方面又对此事加以分析与评论。这种表达方式中的叙与议是一个有机的整体，“叙”是“议”的基础，即议论不能脱离记叙，必须在记叙的基础上展开；“议”是“叙”的渗透，即议论在记叙的基础上发表，且要有一定的深度与广度。写夹叙夹议类读写任务时，思维要灵活，要随着记叙与议论的转换，及时调整思维方式。夹叙夹议型读写任务应注意的问题：(1)开门见山，求画龙点睛。写作时，要让早已疲倦的阅卷老师不用刻意寻找就能一眼看出你的要点齐全。(2)忠实原题，忌画蛇添足。很多同学受语文考试中作文习惯的影响，喜欢在文章末尾加上一小段，抒发情感，却往往跑题，画蛇添足。(3)对人物、地点和主要情节的叙述要简单明了，把心理活动、人物描述等细节略去。(4)严格区分夹叙夹议的叙事和记叙文，避免细节阐述过于繁琐而影响了故事整体的表达。(5)议论是结合叙事部分展开，和所叙述的故事要紧密结合，可以升华也可以只谈对自己的影响和感受，但必须是“紧密结合”并且是有感而发。本部分内容讲解结束 按ESC键退出全屏播放