1、写作任务: 假设你是周晓,目前正在澳大利亚某校留学,你校准备创办一个中国文化社团。请你写一篇英文演讲稿,竞选该社团的团长。写作要求:1.内容完整充实,语言连贯通顺;2.词数:100左右。 写作分析:第一步,认真审题,提炼要点。 一审体裁:本次写作任务要求写一篇竞选社团团长的演讲稿,属于应用文的写作范畴。 二审结构:演讲稿应包括称呼语、正文和结束语。称呼语中最常用的是Ladies and gentlemen,也可根据听众的不同,使用Dear fellow students及Dear teachers and students等。正文部分是演讲稿的主体,要围绕演讲主题展开论述。本次写作可以分三部分
2、来组织正文。第一部分,可用一句话简要概述演讲的目的。第二部分,首先做自我介绍,然后从优势、工作能力、工作态度等方面论述自己能够胜任该职位的原因。最后是结束语,要向听众表达谢意或者呼吁听众支持自己。 三审要点:用英语思维,理出写作要点1. run for 2. Chinese Culture Society3. connect with4. be familiar with5. be fluent in 6. build a relationship with7. promoting Chinese culture第二步,紧扣主题,扩点成句。1. I have an opportunity to
3、 run for the position of president of Chinese Culture Society.2. I want to connect all of you with Chinese culture.3. Im familiar with Chinese culture. 4. Im fluent in English.5. I have built a strong relationship with many students.6. I can help the society do a promotion of Chinese culture.第三步,补充修
4、改,连句成篇。 范文一:Dear teachers and students, I am happy to have this opportunity to run for the position of president of Chinese Culture Society. I am Zhou Xiao, a native Chinese now studying in Australia. I run for the election for only one purpose to connect all of you with Chinese culture. As a studen
5、t studying abroad, I am familiar with Chinese culture and fluent in English. Moreover, I have built a strong relationship with many students from different countries. Thus I can help the society do a more significant promotion of Chinese culture. Last but not least, I am willing to work for all of y
6、ou. Thanks for listening.亮点展示:1. 文章首段用凝练的语言表达演讲目的,开门见山:I am happy to have this opportunity to run for the position of president .2. 语言表达丰富多样,使文章富有文采:run for / be familiar with / be fluent in / be willing to等。3. 从熟知中国文化、人际关系良好以及工作热情三方面论述自己的竞选优势,具有说服力:As a student studying abroad, I am familiar with C
7、hinese culture . / Moreover, I have built a strong relationship . / Last but not least, I am willing to work . 范文二:Hello everyone,My name is Zhou Xiao and I am a Chinese student studying in Australia. I believe I am the best candidate for the position of president of Chinese Culture Society. First o
8、f all, I have a good grasp of Chinese culture. If I am in charge of the society, I will present the unique character of Chinese culture to foreign students and help them appreciate Chinese culture from a different angle. In addition, I have been president of a society in my former school for three y
9、ears. Therefore, I am a competent candidate with practical experience. Please vote for me.Thank you very much.亮点展示:1. 先用自我介绍做铺垫,然后表明演讲目的:My name is Zhou Xiao and I am a Chinese student . I believe I am the best candidate for the position of president .2. 过渡词的使用使文章衔接自然,更具逻辑性:first of all, in addition
10、, therefore.3. 语言表达恰当,展现自己能够当选的信心:I believe I am the best candidate for the position of president . / ., I am a competent candidate with practical experience. Powerful Sentences:1. I am very proud that I have an opportunity to stand here speaking to all of you. 2. I am honored to stand here to expre
11、ss my desire to be the leader of the society.3. The society is a bridge of culture which links China and other countries, so the leader of the society is the architect who builds the bridge and makes it function.4. If I become the leader of the society, I will further enhance my sense of responsibil
12、ity. 5. If I fail to be the leader, I will be stricter with myself and strive for the next chance. 6. I need your support and if you have confidence in me, please vote for me.巩固练习: 假设你是王晨,你就读的国际学校组织了一场学生会主席竞选活动。请你写一篇英语演讲稿,参与这次竞选。词数:100左右。 参考范文:Boys and girls,I am Wang Chen from Class Three, Grade Tw
13、o. I am here to compete for the position of president of the Students Union. First of all, I have been the monitor of our class for two years, and I have actively participated in or organised various activities which gave me considerable management experience and helped develop my leadership skills. Furthermore, being president of the Students Union is something I have dreamed of since I entered middle school. I believe I have enough time and energy to run it successfully. If I am elected, I will serve my fellow students with my whole heart. Thanks for listening.