1、2016高考导航适用于全国卷专题七书面表达年份文体话题题型考情分析2015全国卷 书信写信约稿，介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活要点提示近几年高考中，书面表达题的考查特点为：(1)体裁稳定性强：应用文占据绝对主导地位；(2)话题微型化强：与考生日常生活紧密相关；(3)情景真实性强：突出考查考生实际运用语言的能力；(4)自由开放性强：试题给予考生自由发挥的空间。2014全国卷 书信给英国的一所学校写一封信图表提示2013全国卷 书信给笔友写一封信请求对方帮忙要点提示栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达1“五档”作文在眼里抓标准(1)完成了试题规定的任务；(2)覆盖了所有内容要点
2、；(3)应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；(4)具备了较强的语言运用能力；(5)有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；(6)完全达到了预期的写作目的。栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达2“五档”标准如何抓(1)抓“应用了较多的词汇”解读：词性多样、词汇高级、短语丰富。(2)抓“应用了较多的语法结构”解读：感叹句、倒装句、复合句、强调句、非谓语动词结构、with复合结构等。(3)抓“有效使用连接成分”解读：段与段、句与句之间明晰的、合乎逻辑的顺序组织与安排，做到文意与结构上层次分明、条理清楚。(4)抓“完成规定的任务”解读：对于题干、要点提示、注意事项以及参考词汇要做到
3、读题全面，只有这样才能确保完成规定任务。栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达1力保审题过程要“全”审题五方面:审题是高考书面表达的关键第一步,确保审题“全而不漏”是得高分的基本保证。审题要注意以下五个方面:(1)审文体考生首先要根据情景提示弄清要求写哪种体裁的文章，是记叙文、说明文、应用文，还是议论文。动笔之前认真审题并确定写作体裁是至关重要的。栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达(3)审人称审人称，即弄清书面表达要求用哪种人称写作。其中有主要人称和次要人称，这一点要引起考生足够的重视，因为倘若人称不对，评卷时阅卷老师就会扣掉相应的分数。(4)审时态
4、审时态，即根据所给材料信息确定短文的基本时态。考生一定要重视时态，因为如果时态方面的错误过多，评卷时阅卷老师就会扣除35分。(5)审要点表达出全部要点是得分的基本保证，如果漏掉要点,得分档次就会被降低，因此考生要细审题,定要点,巧构思，列提纲。栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达栏目导引
5、考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达(2)精准规避三类错误错在各类词汇A拼写错误a误：We got struck in the traffic jam so we were late for the meeting.改正：struck改为stuckB变化错误b误：People throwed cans，paper，bags and so on into the river water.改正：throwed改为
6、threwc误：The book presents us a lot of useful informations.改正：informations改为information栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达C词性错误d误：During my summer vacation，I spent half a month in the country and played very happy.改正：happy改为happilye误：Doing a parttime job always effects study.改正：effects改为affects错在语法结构A时态错误a
7、误：In the morning，we had bicycled in the suburbs to plant trees.改正：had_bicycled改为bicycled栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达B语态错误b误：Children who raise in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.改正：raise改为are raisedC主谓一致错误c误：My hobby is widespread，which include d
8、rawing，collecting stamps and so on.改正：include改为includes栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达D比较级使用错误d误：With the development of transportation，the world seems to be getting more and more smaller.改正：more and more smaller改为smaller and smallerE非谓语动词使用错误e误：Comparing with other countries，the country pays little a
9、ttention to the pollution.改正：Comparing改为Compared栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达F平行错误f误：Then I put my book under my desk，opening it and started looking for the answer.改正：opening改为opened错在汉式思维A纯汉语式思维和汉语式语序a误：At this school studying，I really very happy.改正：Studying in this school，I am really happy.栏目导引考法诠
10、释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达B句子成分残缺b误：There are many students dont support the project.改正：There are many students who dont support the project.c误：On the other hand，dogs are our best friends，bring us a lot of fun.改正：On the other hand，dogs are our best friends，which bring us a lot of fun.C句子成分赘余d误：On one da
11、y，he went to the cinema.改正：One day，he went to the cinema.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达1运用三大原则，体现美不胜收(1)新颖性原则写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的，别人可能想不到的词汇，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。但是需注意：既要避免使用俗词，又要避开冷僻词汇。(2014高考江西卷)In the coming three years，our school life will be difficult.In the coming three years，our school life will be challen
12、ging.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达(2)短语优先原则多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。(2014高考江西卷)Developing a good habit is also important.Developing a good habit is also of importance.(3)避免重复原则尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches.I like reading while my br
13、other enjoys watching football matches.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达2频变句型结构，增加得分亮点(1)肯定不如双否好对于考生来说，只要稍加注意，在文章中运用双重否定的句子可以给自己的书面表达加分。(2014高考重庆卷)We can imagine what life would be like with phones.We cant imagine what life would be like without phones.(2)陈述不如倒装妙倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法，它能使文章内容突出，富有节奏。The
14、library lies in the center of our school.The library is between the garden and the teaching building.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达In the center of our school lies the library，which is between the garden and the teaching building.(2014高考福建卷)I was so excited that I couldnt wait to try my hand at ridin
15、g it.So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达(3)主动不如被动巧使用被动语态符合英语的习惯,如果书面表达中有一两个被动语态句子，就会呈现出句型的变化,使整篇文章句型丰富。One day，when we learned the new word“eccentric”in class，the teacher asked us to make a sentence with it.One day，when we learned the new wo
16、rd“eccentric”in class，we were asked to make a sentence with it.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达(4)简单不如并列、复合强有时为了使句子连贯性更强，表达更贴切、自然，我们在两个或多个简单句之间加上and，for，or，not only.but also等连词，使其成为并列句；有时根据上下句之间的关系，在两个或多个简单句之间加上when，as，where，because等从属连词，使简单句变成复合句。(2015高考安徽卷)I would really like to interview him.He is t
17、he first Chinese to go to space.He is one of the greatest astronauts in the world.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world.(5)非谓语动词不能少非谓语动词包括动词不定式、动名词和分词三种。巧用非谓语动词，使书
18、面表达句式丰富多彩，增加高分亮点。(2015高考福建卷)In the picture，we can see a boy in worn clothes.He is sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达In the picture，we can see a boy in worn clothes，sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.He is going to write
19、a book.The book is based on this experience.He is going to write a book based on this experience.(6)篇章结构巧连贯在英语写作中，要做到篇章结构连贯，除在内容的组织安排上要注意前后的逻辑关系外，有时还需要恰当使用能承上启下的关联词语。栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达(2015高考北京卷)First，he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines.We stood around him an
20、d watched attentively.Then we started to have a try ourselves.The old man walked around and helped us patiently.Finally，we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达1“起”好开头(1)常用开头词汇First，I think everyone needs friends and is eager to
21、 get friendship.Nowadays/Recently，people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic.To begin with，smoking should be banned in public areas.Generally speaking，the more you practice，the more skillfully you can write in English.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达(2)常用开头句式As the proverb says/A
22、s the saying goes，“Where there is a will，there is a way.”As can be seen from the table，nearly everyone owns one mobile phone in China.There is no denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind.It is well known that an elephant is a very kind and gentle animal.Im excited to learn th
23、at we are going to start a magazine.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达(3)满分作文选粹(2015高考湖南卷)As a student，I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.(2014高考天津卷)Im glad to hear that you will come to our school as an exchange student.(2014高考湖南卷)As is know
24、n to all,shoes play an important role in our life，for it can protect our feet from being hurt.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达2“承”好上下(1)常用顺承词汇Secondly，we should get up early to memorize idioms and useful expressions.Obviously，a good learning habit can help us to speed up to reach our destinations.Whats
25、 more，good books can help us to develop good characters.I lost my way in the forest and to make matters worse/what is worse，it became dark.In addition，we shouldnt neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.Meanwhile/At the same time，I will regard it as my duty to keep our environmen
26、t clean.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达(2)常用顺承句式Take Beijing for example，it is one of the oldest cities in the world.What is more serious is that we dont cherish wildlife.As far as I am concerned，they stand for love，friendship and unity.(3)满分作文选粹(2015高考陕西卷)Besides，I have such a good command of English
27、 that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.(2014高考重庆卷)Moreover，it seems that he always thinks more of himself than of others.(2015高考江苏卷)Whats worse，some drivers.do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达3“转”好过渡(1)常用转折过渡词汇But unfortunately，I mind my own busin
28、ess without considering my parents.However，not until the match was over did we realize that webecame the losers.On the other hand，online shopping also has many disadvantages.On the contrary，the volunteers always claim that they are tired of the life on earth.Contrary to what I had originally said，th
29、e trip turned out tobe fun.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达(2)满分作文选粹(2014高考湖南卷)However，what amazes you most is the following new function.(2014高考北京卷)But now，because my left foot was injured，I cannot go with you as planned.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达4“合”好结尾(1)常用结尾词汇All in all，traveling is the best cho
30、ice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges.In conclusion，a good citizen should observe traffic regulations.In a word，success is important，and so is failure，because its the mother of success.To sum up，environmental protection is of great importance，which can make us live more comf
31、ortably and healthily.On the whole，I find a bike more enjoyable than a motorcycle.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达(2)常用结尾句式Id appreciate it if you could deliver them as soon as possible.It is high time that we did something to prevent the environment from being polluted.Only with combined efforts can w
32、e expect our hometown to take on a new look in the near future.We can，therefore，come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as peace in the world.Im sure that I still have a long way to go to achieve my dream.No matter how difficult it is,I will have it come true.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达
33、(3)满分作文选粹(2014高考江苏卷)In short，not only has the inclusion poisoned Chinese，it may also bring about distance between the Chinese people.(2014高考全国卷)In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful.(2014高考浙江卷)Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendation.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达A(2015高考全国
34、卷)假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：1栏目介绍；2稿件内容；3稿件长度：约400词；4交稿日期：6月28日前。栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达注意：1.词数100左右。2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头语已为你写好。Dear Peter，Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper._栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达审题谋篇1审文体：应用文，属于提纲式作
35、文2审格式：书信3审人称：以第三人称为主，第二人称为辅4审时态：一般现在时5审要点：注意要点要齐全，包括栏目介绍、稿件内容、稿件长度和交稿日期；写作时注意恰当地使用衔接词和过渡词，以使文章行文连贯、流畅。栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达满分作文Dear Peter，Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.The“Foreign Cultures”section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.I
36、t carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States？And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals，and the life of American high
37、school students.You栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours，Li Hua栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达能力拓展完成下列学习任务1句式升级：你可以写有关的东西，只要它有趣并能
38、使人增进知识。低级：You can write anything relevant，and its interesting and informative.高级：You can write anything relevant _ its interesting and informative.as long as栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达2句型转换：The“Foreign Cultures”section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.The“Foreign Cultures”section
39、 in our newspaper _(receive用被动语态)us students，_(非限制性定语从句)has a positive effect on our learning lives.is well received bywhich栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达B(2015高考全国卷)假定你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：1出发及返回时间；2活动：包饺子、表演节目等。栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专
40、题七书面表达注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3结语已为你写好。_Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达审题谋篇1审文体：应用文，属于提纲式作文2审格式：电子邮件3审人称：第一人称4审时态：一般现在时和一般将来时5审要点：(1)出发及返回时间；(2)在敬老院的活动：包饺子、表演节目等。栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达满分作文Dear Lucy，Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to th
41、e nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.It is the day for the elderly in our culture.Well go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there.Well also spend some fun time together singing，dancing and playing games，which we hope will make them happy.We should be b
42、ack around 4 oclock in the afternoon.If you are able to栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达come with us，please let us know and well wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.Looking forward to your replyYours，Li Hua栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达能力拓展完成下列学习任务(句式升级)1我们将在一起唱歌、跳舞、玩游戏度过美好的时刻，我们希望这会使他们高兴
43、。低级：Well also spend some fun time together.Well sing，dance and play games.We hope it will make them happy.高级:Well also spend some fun time together singing,dancing _ playing games，_ we hope will make them happy.andwhich栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达2如果你能与我们一起来，请告知我们；我们将在上午9点在校门口等你。低级：Are you able to
44、come with us?Please let us know.Well wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.高级：_ you are able to come with us，please let us know _ well wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.Ifand栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达C(2014高考全国卷)假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况
45、(箭头所指内容)。栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达注意：1.词数100左右。2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3参考词汇：住宿accommodationDear Sir/Madam，_Yours faithfully，Li Hua栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达审题谋篇1审文体：应用文，图表类作文2审格式：书信3审人称：第一人称4审时态：一般现在时为主5审要点：(1)说明写信的目的；(2)开课时间和每周上课时间；(3)班级大小；(4)收费情况；(5)住宿类型。栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达满分作文Dear Sir/
46、Madam，I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.Ive seen your ad，and Id like to know something more about your sixweek English course.First，when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week？Besides，I wish there would not be
47、 too many students in a class.Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully，Li Hua栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达能力拓展完成下列学习任务(句式升级)句式升级1如果我能够了
48、解更多有关你们六周的英语课程的信息的话，我会不胜感激。低级：If I can know something more about your sixweek English course，I will be very thankful.高级：Id_ (v.it宾语从句)I could know something more about your sixweek English course.appreciate it if栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达2而且，我希望在一个班中不会有太多的学生，这是我所关注的事情。低级：And I hope there wont be
49、too many students in a class.This is the thing that Im concerned about.高级：_，I_ there would not be too many students in a class，_ is my_In additionwish thatwhichconcern栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达D(2014高考全国卷)一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。1家庭；2工作；3业余生活。栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达注意：1.词数1
50、00左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头语已为你写好。I often imagine what my life will be like in the future._ _栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达审题谋篇1审文体：半开放作文2审格式：无固定格式3审人称：第一人称4审时态：一般将来时为主5审要点：(1)未来家族；(2)未来工作；(3)未来业余工作。栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达满分作文I often imagine what my life will be like in the futureI think my life
51、will be very different in ten years.I will be twentyeight years old by then.I will have my own family，probably with a lovely child.I hope Ill work in a computer company as a program designer.Ill enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues.Ill do a good job in whatever I do.In my free time，Il
52、l continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games.On my holidays，Ill travel around the world.In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达能力拓展完成下列学习任务1按要求写出下面句子我认为十年后我的生活将和现在大不相同。I think my life will_ that of today in ten year
53、s.我将喜欢我的工作并和我的同事友好相处。I will enjoy my work and_ my colleagues.无论我做什么，我都会做得很好。I will_ in anything that I do.be very different fromget along well withdo a good job栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达在我的业余时间，我将经常锻炼身体。In my spare time，I will_2按提示将上面句式升级用what引导的宾语从句改写句_ 用让步状语从句改写句_take regular exerciseI think my life will be different from what it is today in ten years.I will do a good job in whatever I do.栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达栏目导引考法诠释典题感悟跟踪训练专题强化训练专题七书面表达本部分内容讲解结束按ESC键退出全屏播放
