1、第4课成文要美高效谋篇布局，考场速成佳作 对应学生用书P267写作是主观题，阅卷时率先进入老师眼帘的是卷面和文章结构。因此，除了卷面整洁外，还要注意段落写作，做到主题突出、结构合理、层次清晰，获取阅卷老师的印象分。“三段式”结构谋篇布局高考作文最好采用三段式，不仅在行文上符合总分总的逻辑结构，而且在视觉上更加美观，吸引阅卷老师的眼球。1首段开门见山，直入主题英语书信的特点是开门见山，用简洁的语言引出文章的主题，使读者清楚文章要说什么。Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conferen
2、ce, and Ive asked him to bring you the Chinese painting youve asked for before.Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.2中段适当发挥，突出主题在写作提示中有“可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯”的要求。其实，如果仅罗列提示中的要点，这样拼凑出的文章难免像缺少血肉的骨架，更谈不上有生气了。要使文章有血有肉，就要展开要点句，在合乎所给情景以及英语习惯的前提下，适当扩展句子，或添加一些提示中没有提及但对烘托主题又十分必要
3、的信息。3尾段强调目的，表示期待在书信的结尾处我们常使用一些功能句式，向对方表示友善的感谢或亲切的问候，表达愿望或期待等。Looking forward to your reply.And Id be really thankful.Id appreciate it if you could do me a favor.I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to do so much for me.“拓展式”方法句丰篇美高考应用文写作一般为半开放提纲作文。在试题“注意”中有明确规定“可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯”。对于这类作文
4、，考生不能离开情景和要求自行立意、选材，随意发挥；但考生可以根据需要进行适当的发挥。拓展成文时可以采用以下5种方法：方法1列举具体的事例进行补充说明 /示例1我们青少年应尽所能保护环境、拯救地球。一般句：We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.升级句：We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example，we can use recyclabl
5、e bags instead of plastic bags, refuse to use singleuse products, plant more trees and save water and energy.示例2我要花一些时间和父母在一起。一般句：Ill spend some time staying with my parents.升级句：Ill spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework.示例3我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。一般句：I would l
6、ike to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.升级句：I would like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.If possible, we can travel together or share traveling experiences.方法2增添相关信息的时间、地点等内容 /示例我要去购物。一般句：Im going to do some shopping.升级句：Im going to do some sho
7、pping in the supermarket and wont be back until 5：00 oclock in the afternoon.方法3增添事件的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容示例1我将参加一些社会活动。一般句：I will take part in some social activities.升级句：If possible，I will take part in some social activities so that I can know more about society.(条件，结果)示例2我需要好好休息，我要做些阅读。一般句：I need a
8、 good rest.Ill do some reading.升级句：I need a good rest because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years.Ill do some reading for fun，as well as for knowledge.(原因，目的)示例3这部电影主要是关于学校的发展。一般句：The film is mainly related to the development of our school.(2018全国卷书面表达)升级句：The film is mainly relat
9、ed to the development of our school，which will greatly help us students know the schools history better and appeal to us to make contributions to our schools development.(结果)方法4追加附加成分 /在要点基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分，如定语(从句)、状语(从句)、非谓语动词、独立主格结构等。不仅增加了词数，而且使表达更清晰、准确，主题更突出。示例我建议老师应该多选择英语电影。一般句：I suggest that the
10、teacher should choose more English films.升级句：As a young student，I suggest that the teacher should choose more English films that appeal to us teenagers，thus making English learning more interesting.方法5结尾适当发挥，写出个人感受、评价、愿望、倡议等示例1Although I was very tired this summer holiday，I felt very happy for what
11、I did.(个人感受)尽管我这个暑假很累，但是我为我做的事情感到高兴。示例2I think such activities are necessary and meaningful.(评价)我认为这样的活动很有必要，也很有意义。示例3I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life.(愿望)我衷心希望我的建议能够对你有所帮助，你能够享受在新学校的生活。示例4It is a duty for us students to protect our school environment and make it clean.(倡议)作为学生，保护我们校园的环境并使之干净是我们的职责。
