1、高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家写作园地幻想故事写作感悟范文最近，某英文报社正在举行英文幻想故事大赛，请你根据所给出的故事的开头，续写一篇幻想小故事参赛。A young man was walking through a wood when he saw a shining ring lying on the ground. He just stood and wondered and then the ring said, “Young man, a kind girl is trapped by a witch in the castle ahead. If you are brave e
2、nough to rescue her, you will gain happiness. Put me on and I will help you.”.注意：词数120左右。范文A young man was walking through a wood when he saw a shining ring lying on the ground. He just stood and wondered and then the ring said, “Young man, a kind girl is trapped by a witch in the castle ahead. If y
3、ou are brave enough to rescue her, you will gain happiness. Put me on and I will help you.”The young man didnt hesitate and put the ring on his finger. Much to his surprise, he discovered that he disappeared and was invisible to any other people. Only when he took it off could people see him. He fel
4、t more confident and headed for the castle. On approaching the castle, he put the ring on and entered the castle. He eventually found the crying girl, on whom the witch had put a spell, learning that the girl couldnt move unless someone destroyed the witchs magical club, removing the spell. Having l
5、earned about this, the young man put the ring on, looking around for the witchs magical club. Finally, he found it in a golden box; he destroyed it, removing the spell on the girl and saving the girl. The young man, together with the girl, defeated the witch.The girl saved by the young man turned ou
6、t to be a princess, and the king married her off to the young man, the young man and the princess living a happy life.技法讨论本模块要求写一篇幻想故事，幻想故事一般有环境、人物、情节以及文学的艺术性，在体裁上属于记叙文，情节的发展多以时间、地点的转移为线索。虚幻故事的写作步骤：1仔细审题，确定文章结构虚幻故事的写作一般可分为三部分：第一部分为故事的开始，第二部分为故事发展的过程及结果，最后一部分提出故事的教育意义。2根据需要确定时态虚幻故事通常是发生在过去，因此应以一般过去时为
7、主。3筛选词汇虚幻故事一般为虚构的故事，要求语言比较夸张。为了 吸引读者，故事的语言要生动，富于虚幻性。 黄金表达Once upon a time/Long long ago.stop doing sth.even if.keep doing sth.enjoy oneselfThere was.That was why people called it.On seeing.From this fable comes.亮点分析：亮点一：句中使用了部分倒装句式凸显了魔戒的魔力。亮点二：句中使用了on doing sth.这个结构，引出与下文紧接着发生的动作。亮点三：句中使用了非限制性定语从句和现
8、在分词短语，丰富了关于“the girl”的相关信息。亮点四：句中使用了两处分词，使得句子更有层次性。亮点五：句中使用了独立主格结构，使得句子结构更加复杂高级。亮点六：句中hesitate，句中much to his surprise, was invisible to，句中confident, headed for, 句中eventually，句中turned out to be等等这些词汇、短语的使用也为文章增色不少。类文演练假设你要给参观你校的外籍人员，讲解中国的传统文化。一名外国朋友对中国成语“自相矛盾”发生了兴趣。请你根据图片，把这个古代的寓言故事讲给他们听。词数130左右。参考词汇
9、：矛spear，盾shield，刺pierce。联想词汇1. _ 自相矛盾的答案：selfcontradictory2. _ adj. 锋利的答案：sharp3. _ v. 吹嘘，夸大答案：boast4. _ 在古代中国答案：in ancient China5. _ 众所周知答案：be known to all连词成句1. _“Zi Xiang Mao Dun” is _all.中国成语“自相矛盾”众所周知。答案：The Chinese idiom; known to2. _can pierce them.世界上没有东西能刺穿他们。答案：Nothing in the world3. _ in
10、the world.世上没有完美的东西。答案：There are not perfect things连句成章_答案：The Chinese idiom “Zi Xiang Mao Dun” is known to all, which is used to laugh at someone whose words or behaviors are selfcontradictory.It tells us a story that happens in the State of Chu in ancient China. We see a man selling spears and shi
11、elds in the marketplace in the center of the picture.A lot of people gather around him. “My spears are the sharpest，” he boasts, “that there is nothing they cannot pierce. My shields are also the strongest, so nothing in the world can pierce them.” One of the people in the crowd then laughs, “So what if the spear pierces the shield？”The man can not answer a word.From the story we can know that there are not perfect things in the world. We shouldnt say anything in the world is good to the limit.高考资源网版权所有，侵权必究！