1、高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家类型4| 邀请信1邀请信是邀请亲朋好友或知名人士、专家等参加某项活动时所发的邀约性书信。在国际交往以及日常的各种社交活动中，这类书信使用广泛。2一般邀请信具有简短、热情的特点。格式一般为：(1)说明与收信人的相关性与写作意图；(2)具体交代情景：包括受邀请的人，邀请朋友干什么、地点以及具体的时间等内容。并且强调为什么邀请收信人而不是别的朋友；(3)表示期待朋友的回复。假定你是李华，你所在的学校将在暑假期间举办“澳大利亚文化展览”。请你根据以下要点给澳大利亚朋友Peterson写一封信，请他届时前来给你们做一次讲座。目的：帮助师生了解澳洲历史与文化内容：简要介绍澳
2、大利亚的风土人情日期：8月第一周内任意一天的下午时间：3：005：00，约两个小时注意：可适当增加细节，以使结构完整，词数80左右。习作评阅自我修改三档作文Dear Peterson，Our school is planning to hold an Australia culture exhibition in summer vacation.Im writing to invite you to come and give a talk on the people and custom on the continent of Australia.It will help our teach
3、ers and students learn more about your history and cultural.You may choose any day of the first week in August.You can give us the talk that afternoon，that will start from 3: 00 pm.and finish at about 5：00 pm. (请让我尽可能早的知道，以便于我及时作出安排)I am looking forward to seeing you and enjoying the talk.Yours，Li H
4、ua1.避免搭配错误处Australia改为Australian处custom改为customs处cultural改为culture2.杜绝语法错误处添加冠词the处that改为which3.要点一定不要遗漏补上处要点：Please let me know as soon as possible so that I can make arrangements in time.自我提升向极优作文迈进Dear Peterson，Our school is planning to hold an Australian culture show this summer vacation.Im writ
5、ing to invite you to give us a lecture about the people and customs on the continent of Australia.We would like to get our teachers and students to learn more about your history and culture.You may choose any day of the first week in August and give us the talk that afternoon，which will start from 3
6、：00 pm.and finish at about 5：00 pm.Im looking forward to your reply and were sure your talk will be a success.Yours，Li Hua1.高级词汇用schedule的相关短语改写处的黑体部分：is scheduled to2.高级句型用It is a good chance for sb.to do sth.改写句：It is a good chance for our teachers and students to learn more about your history and culture.处改为现在分词短语作后置定语：starting from 3：00 pm.and ending at about 5：00 pm.高考资源网版权所有，侵权必究！