1、介绍一位英雄人物描写一位英雄人物属于记叙文的范畴，它以写人、记事为主，以叙述和描写为主要表达方式。一篇好的人物描写一般分为三大部分，即生平介绍、事迹叙述和简短的评论。时态的选择要视情况而定，若写人物的过去就用过去时态，若写人物的现在就用现在时态。基本框架1首段：生平介绍人物的出生时间和地点是必不可少的信息；介绍生平时要尊重客观事实，材料要真实。2中段：事迹叙述选材要着眼于人物的生活背景及其成就事迹，以形成对比，起到突出人物的特点和树立榜样的作用。选材要有重点，不必面面俱到。3尾段：简短的评论对所描述的人物的评论要客观公正。常用词块1at the age of four 4岁时2a boy of
2、 sixteen一个16岁的男孩3make friends with her和她交朋友4be ready to help others乐于助人5a lively and smart girl一个活泼聪明的女孩6be warmhearted and goodlooking热心肠而且漂亮/俊朗7learn from each other and help each other相互帮助相互学习8be highly praised by the teachers and students得到老师和同学的高度称赞9participate in the Eighth Route Army参加八路军10be
3、 born in poor peasant family出生于贫苦的农民家庭常用语句1介绍人物的姓名、出身及外貌特征He has fair hair and blue eyes.他有金色的头发和蓝色的眼睛。Abraham Lincoln，the son of a poor family，was born in Kentucky on February 12，1809.亚伯拉罕林肯，一个贫苦家庭的儿子，于1809年2月12日生于肯塔基州。She is an ordinarylooking girl，but her kindness and consideration impress me mos
4、t.她是一个普普通通的女孩，但她的善良和体贴使我印象深刻。He is a goodlooking，kindhearted man.他是一个俊朗且好心肠的人。2介绍人物的成就或取得的成绩He went to college，during which he showed great interest in folk music.他上了大学，在大学期间他对民间音乐表现出极大的兴趣。When he was still a boy，he showed great interest in literature.当他还是个孩子的时候，他对文学表现出极大的兴趣。He/She is good at spoken
5、 English and even better at using computers.他/她擅长英语口语，更擅长使用电脑。3介绍人物的影响及人们对此人的评价We regard him as our model.我们把他作为我们的榜样。The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader.人们把他作为一个鼓舞人心的领袖而开始热爱他。Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.雷锋因他的共产主义精神而受到称赞。请写一篇80词左右的短文简要介绍雷锋。主要内容如下：雷锋出生在湖南省望城县
6、，虽然生命只有短暂的22岁，但他作为一名解放军战士，努力工作，乐于助人，一生做好事无数，被视为英雄，人们的楷模。_参考范文Lei Feng was born on December 18，1940 in Wangcheng county，Hunan and died on August 15，1962.He was orphaned at 7 years old.Although he lived a short life of only 22 years，as a soldier in the Peoples Liberation Army，he worked hard and was always ready to help others.He did countless good deeds in his short life and has been regarded all the time as a hero and model for every citizen.In a word，Lei Feng was an example of the soldiers of the Peoples Liberation Army in China.